VN - Ren'Py - The Five Star Stories [v0.8.5] [The Narrator]

Sexy little story.

Lisa is hot AF with realistic proportions and a cute face. The MC's face looks a bit off compared to hers but at least he doesn't have a comically oversized penis that you see far too often.

The writing is good and the Dev does a good job using words to set a scene. A couple times I saw dialog from Lisa attributed to the MC. I wouldn't have minded if things had progressed just a little slower.

The only things holding me back from rating 5 stars is no replay gallery and though it has audio files I couldn't get sound.

I look forward to more and I hope we see Lisa and MC continue down their romantic path. A V/N pretty well done.

Focused on romance and erotism. This visual novel have been a really good surprise.

This is not perfect but for a first atemps . Is great.

We can talk about render or leng. But the story is good. This is wath is matter

That was very well done! the sister is outstanding. The pace might have been accelerated but as i'm not a twin, no idea if the connection between them would expedite the process! not sure what part 2 will be like ( mom maybe!) but look forward to it. great job Dev!!!
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Diego

A very enjoyable creation - well done! Nothing to critique in terms of problems. As a feature suggestion I'd love to be able to change the name of the MC at least although I realise this is more of a VN than an immersive game.

Obviously you aren't going to monetise on a major platform due to the hard incest coding so from a personal kink perspective being able to twaek the ages would be lovely, but it is your project and if you don't agree with that sort of thing I certainly wouldn't want to be the one pushing you. Overall enjoyable as I said.