HTML - The Ghost's Revenge [v4.0] [RedCupid]

The plot is utterly idiotic and treats the reader as if you are an idiot too. As the intro goes they told you the money goes to a trust fund but at the same time they can drain it? WTF? Then, they torture you as you grow up? There's no social services controlling an adopted child specially with this money behind?? And finally, when they're torturing you, including the night of your death, THEY STREAM IT ONLINE?? Not only that, they "suicide" you and bring the body to the woods, AND BURY IT!!!! Please, tell me which suicidal person buries himself...? I know not everyone can be Alan Moore or fucking R.R.Martin... but you should have some minimums of common sense if you want to write stories, not everything is copy paste porn images and videos... Freaking shameless writing...

Ghosts Revenge (3.0) - Review
You were adopted, bullied your entire life, and eventually driven to your death. Now, you’re a ghost haunting those responsible. You possess someone’s body and proceed to sexually corrupt the entire family. It’s the usual "fucked up" stuff: making the father a cuckold, pushing the aunt and uncle into hardcore femdom, turning the son into a sissy, and stealing his girlfriend for yourself. Plus, of course, there’s the standard "do the same things over and over to raise the corruption meter" grind.

It’s not really my thing, especially with the repetitive events. Since it’s an HTML game, the visuals are just pulled from porn clips. Throughout the game, you aren't in your own body; you're just haunting someone else's. The story feels incredibly shallow, and because of the repetitive events, it doesn't feel like it’s going anywhere.

Furthermore, the game makes you feel like a "villain," even though you’re supposed to be the one seeking justice. It’s a corruption game, sure, but the people we are corrupting are already bad people, which makes the plot feel even more baseless. If you enjoy the idea of corrupting others as the MC, give it a look. Otherwise, it's just your average trash HTML porn game

Points for effort, but the story is just too ungrounded for me. Truly nothing works the way you'd expect or the way it works in the real world. The premise is that a family takes you in when you're young, abuses you, and steals your trust fund, then murders you. But like 4 different characters are described as draining all your money. So which is it? Did all your money go to support the brother's drug habit? The mother's luxuries? The uncle's gambling? At a certain point, they're stealing from each other, no? Yet there's no conflict between them, because they're so evil. Right. And the murder happens at a party...and it's livestreamed. What? Posting your abuse online for likes is just...not in the same category as beating or drugging you. People tend to be a little more discreet with their abuse and murders, since there's like laws and stuff. So how do they get away with it?

Then you turn into a ghost and possess your brother. That's fine! I'm completely willing to suspend my disbelief here. I want to make it clear that I'm not expecting 100% realism or anything.

But then the first two things I did as a ghost were to cum on my mom's panties, which my dad then stole and took a shameful sniff of. Okay, didn't see that coming. Then I went to the living room and...jizzed on the remote so my mom would touch it. Again, what? How the fuck am I supposed to be turned on by this?

I just can't get into this game, man. It doesn't make any sense. If I had advice for the creator, it would be that not every dial has to be turned up to 11. Corruption doesn't really work when the characters are already bafflingly evil. Just make them normal, shitty people who kill you accidentally through neglect or something. And then the possessed brother can have specific ghost powers, or can just sabotage people in a normal way.

Dude no hate but everything is very rough, the dialogues the motive the everything u are just dropping one thing after another no good or clear connection btw them
The corruption part is good and there were no bugs so thats definately a + and the ui was too colourful but that's a me thing so no problem with that too
But u are just adding one thing after other like his cum has pheromones he is giving meds and pills to everybody
The family killed him for some reason
?? Why??
Overall good concept and good potential but it needs some work around its edges
I don't like long walls of text either but atleast add a little more so story makes a little more sense
It's too fast but I like that too so a + on that for mee but not everybody might like that so keep that in mind too
Overall this looks like your first project so all the best and I will keep an eye on this

I love games about how the main character corrupts others. I'm already tired of the only games that come out about how the main character gets corrupted. Great start, I played version 1.1 and didn't encounter any bugs. I hope you will continue to release updates and not abandon such a good endeavor.