VN - HTML - Completed - The Goblin's Pet [CYOA v1.0] [Aphrodite]

GREAT USE OF AI!
Artificial Intelligence is close to creating perfect NSFW art, but not quite there yet. But it can definitely enhance human-made content, even if it is 3d models.

5/5 stars

If you don't like MtF transformation you probably won't get much out of this

However if you do.. It's one of the best games in this space

Firstly this is mostly just a novel, but there's JUST enough images and JUST enough choice to game-ify it. There's a bare bones avatar and character screen to give JUST enough context to make it seem like a game

And that's what really makes the MtF piece of this extra lewd, is that it's written viscerally, really well, from the POV of the MtF transformation victim/slave. It's long.. but written well. I did speed read especially towards the end but it's good.

I really enjoyed the pacing in terms of the erotic descent. Author really understands that it's not about getting P in the V as quickly as possible, in fact it takes forever to get there.. Instead the author lingers far more on steps and stages of corruption and degradation and examines each piece. And without giving anything away, has a fine way of essentially doing the MtF transformation story twice in one story due to good plotting..

Am I crazy, or is this writing really bad? I made it 4 chapters in before I had to drop it. Descriptions feel nonsensical and are often endlessly repetitious or downright contradictory. It all looks like English, but it doesn't flow well from one paragraph to the next or even just between sentences. There's no logic to what happens within scenes, either.

For instance, in the prologue the protagonist and his wife wake up, have sex, then the wife starts making breakfast and asks her husband "so what did you do today?". He answers her like he got home after a day's work, even though it's morning and they've been together the entire time. Later on in the story all the goblins live in a cave, except for the one goblin who lived in the cave but also inexplicably has a hut somewhere else completely separate from all the other goblins? This is not questioned by anybody and there is no discussion about other goblin's dwellings. Maybe that's explained further on, I don't know. There are a lot of little issues like that I had glossed over while reading at first.

There's spatial reasoning and character issues as well. One instance before I dropped it was a scene that involved There were other examples earlier on but I can't remember them and I won't be going back to re-check.

Every other page insists that something is a testament to something else. The whole game feels like somebody instructed ChatGPT "write a description of boobs and be fancy about it" then slapped the output into a twine game without any proofreading.

From a design standpoint, this game seems fine and dandy. It runs on anything, it looks nice, it's got a little secrets system. Chapter progression being your save points is alright. There's BGM and occasional voices. Though 4 chapters in and only the goblin is voiced, for some reason? I don't know why you'd want to listen to the goblin, but it's all or nothing - no turning off just the goblin voice and keeping the other sounds.

There's a good concept here, but it's wasted in my opinion. Unfortunately this game instead stands as a testament to why you shouldn't rely so heavily on AI to write everything.

Literally one of the best games in its genre. The plot is great, the graphic design is just amazing. The only thing that bothers me is the pictures, as if they don't quite fit. But an amazing job has been done, I hope the author will still return to such crafts, in isolation from the main game.

It is good for it's genre but it is not for everyone. When it gets dark toward the end it gets real damn dark. There is cucking . OOF.
There only seems to be one major ending with a few shorter 'bad ends'. Art is fine.

I loved every bit of the story and am excited to read a continuation if you decide to do so! Sadly, I am not great at giving constructive criticism. I just wanted to express how much I enjoyed this story!

I don't expect realism, but I need plausibility. Unfortunately the AI writing got so much plot loopholes, it's too swollen, repetitive and unerotic soft porn.
With some chat bot experience I saw too many problems immediately and quit reading before the first heroine sex scene.

+ some mechanics and decisions (hidden gems, replay ability)
+ imp kink <3
+ high quality sounds
+ polished game
+ polished spelling
+ fantasy world
+ a lot of lore

- AI writing (too much unnecessary, complicated, swollen information)
- AI plot holes
- Eroticism is completely missing
- sex scenes without pornographic descriptions
- predefined names
- quality of AI art varies heavily

The plot, the story, the kinks grade A. However, the thing this novel really needs is more illustrations. I can get off to text alone but it's never as good as some solid imagery. I've yet to go through the entire story only just getting to chapter 11. I feel at this point I can safely say this shit needs more illustrations. DONATE FOR A REBOOT.

This "Slightly" interactive novel will make you love it. It will make you hate it. It excellently manipulates a story around addiction and magic compulsion.

Warning though, there's quite a bit of NTR going on here, but at least you aren't forced to do gay stuff as a dude. Choice matters!

The story is gripping and takes you on both an adventure and an emotional rollercoaster.

There is the illusion of a choose-your-own-adventure game because choices that would veer too far off the main storyline are met with bad ends. But having played X-change life, I understand that the author's main interest is transformation and that it's the central theme of this game. And of course there's a limit to how many branches an author can write for a detailed story of this length. The game is far from kinetic and your choices dictate major aspects of the story, as well as the ending.

In conclusion, it's a brilliant story well worth reading and strikes a good balance between interactivity and reading. In terms of art, the game has some drawings but it's mostly renders. I would have preferred more drawings, but that's just personal preference. The renders are very well done.

Highly recommended.

Slightly Interactive Novel is an accurate summary, it's clear that there is a main path, and any deviation from that path either loops back to the main path or ends abruptly. This isn't my favorite type of design, but credit to the author for being forthcoming about it.

It accomplishes what it's trying to do, so I give it 5 stars. Their pipeline of regenerating 3D renders with AI works really well. I normally avoid 3D render games due to that dead uncanny feeling, but the AI layer somehow makes it feel more full of life. It's almost photorealistic barring the exaggerated proportions.

The writing is great, you get a good sense of every character. There are some moments where the story goes in a direction that I'm not a fan of, but that's just a preference thing. There's a lot of story to get into, and the world feels believable. It did a good job trying to build tension. It doesn't escalate too fast, but it also isn't brutally slow.

The audio is fine, I never felt a desire to turn it off. Sometimes it helped immersion, sometimes it was a little distracting. But it was never outright bad.

Review of [CYOA v1.0]

It is a very nice game. I definitely would recommend it for anyone, considering it.

It is very easy to try as it is available online and is offered completely for free by the author.

The writing is top notch, it is based on a book by the author. The amount of content is large, especially if you are going to read every paragraph.

Personally I tend to skip a section here or there. I would love it if the dialogue was indicated in a different color, to better break up the somewhat long stretches of text. That would make it easier for lazy readers like myself. For some reason I find the dialogue to be more essential than the rest. If the dialogue is good that will motivate me to read the other content . The Good Son is a game that does this really well, I think, with different colors being used by different characters.

The graphics are actually pretty good, although there are no animations. It is mostly Daz3D renders that are well done, mixed with a few 2D art images. Personally I don't mind the mix, although I would definitely appreciate more renders.

Compared to the other game by the author, X-Change Life, this game has quite a bit of reading and not a lot of clicking. Whereas X-Change Life has quite a lot of clicking. I think the ideal balance is somewhere in-between? X-Change Life is more of a sandbox style game, which lends itself well to replayability, but is probably a lot of work to create and ultimately also gets tedious to play.

There is a sound element to the game as well, both with background music and some dialogue. This element is top notch and way above the average RenPy game. As with the graphics, I would appreciate more of this as well, but how much can you ask for with a completely free game? .

The topic of the game is ideal for a fantasy / game world, as it goes way beyond anything that would be feasible to do with live-action. For anyone into the topic I would recommend checking out Goblin Cave by Sana.

At the end of the day, this is a massive achievement by a small team that deserves a ton of praise and recommendation.

Imho one of the best/better html games I have seen.

A combination of story/stat/rpg elements, dark fantasy, corruption plot is good. Art and sounds adds up a lot to the game value. Note that some scenes do not really have images/visualization.

The only reason I am not setting five stars, is that the game is really straightforward visual novel, your choices apart from leading to bad end/replay don't feel like they really matter or do anything.

It is an adaptation of a book, and as such even if you make seemingly different choices you don't get different chapters or scenes. It only gives you an illusion of choice.

The game is missing some sandbox elements. The art is also inconsistent sometimes it is really good, sometimes it is god damn awful, sometimes it is non-existent.

But with a good art and good story, and a bit more fleshed out gameplay there is certainly a lot of potential in future games.

Its not in my normal fetish range but overall I had fun with this game. I guess if I be picky, its a bit verbose at times and more graphics would be really great but I liked it far more than most HTML games

Great writing, great story, the perfect amount of degeneracy for a "goblin" tale. The game is a perfect size for what it is, but of course when something's this good, you can't help but want more. Would love to see what "Aldric" gets into next

So its been like 4 - 5 years since I gave a review but man this game deserved my time to give an astounding recommendation.

But let's get the bad stuff out of the way:

TGP is most probably not in the general public's liking due to:

1) Predominantly this is erotical literature. Hence the 300k word content. While certain sexual content are enhanced with images. It is in comparison too little and not what gamers are used to.
2) There are heavy transformation ,NTR and forced content. Again not the general public preferences in kinks.
3) There are a few branches but for CYOA context, it can feel a bit limited.

Now for the good stuff:

TGP is an enthralling journey into the depths of passion and intimacy forced transformation - both physically and mental struggles were portrayed very well . From the very first few chapters, the story captivates with its rich, evocative language and deeply developed characters of Tit Bitch and Snib. The chemistry between these two is palpable, making their encounters not only steamy but also emotionally resonant.

The narrative is well-paced, balancing the erotic elements with a compelling plot that keeps you invested in MC's journeys.

One of the standout aspects of this story is the depth of the MC. Most html game goes straight into sex and zero plot development. However Tit bitch is not just a vessel for erotic scenes but a fully realized human with her own history, motivation, and more importantly - vulnerabilities. This makes her intimate moments sex scenes feel authentic and earned, rather than gratuitous.

The author's attention to detail is impeccable, enhancing the sensory experience for the reader. Each scene is described with a delicate touch, making the reader feel every whisper, touch, and glance. This immersive quality sets TGP apart from many other HTML games.

Overall, this is a well crafted reading game that will appeal to readers looking for a blend of romance intense, forceful and erotica content.

PS-This would be 5 stars if there were a bit more supporting images for all of the sex content.

If you downloaded this, you know what you are in for and it delivers.

I wouldn't really call it a game, but as VN it's godly smut with decent writing. The renders are inconsistent, but the hot situations make up for this.

Yes, it's an HTML game.

This is a bad CYOA game, period. Shit graphics, shit CYOA writing because everything you do leads to the same thing, and this game forces you into NTR and humiliation, even if you keep your heroism high, keep your love with your wife as high as the game lets you and keep your town rep as high as possible, I've seen dozens of visual novels with more CYOA, fucks sake, Summer Memories has more CYOA than this game. And there was only one time I actually jacked off to this game and it was during a scene where the PC gets high on goblin cum from a mug. (Kinky shit)

In this story, you hunt goblins, one of the goblins finds a cursed collar, forces you to wear it, okay find, the start kinda needs to have a set path for the story to somewhat stay in the same realm. You then get a brief segment where you need to make money to buy your freedom, except wait, you can't make enough money because you end up being freed and turned back into a man before you can even make 1/4 of the money. So that's a status that's tracked on your stats page that doesn't even matter because the money doesn't affect the story. You made a deal with the goblin to jack him off each day so you could meet your wife daily, You meet your wife, try to dip into your savings account to pay off the goblin, can't because male you needs to be there for the bank to pull out your money, and then meet the town wizard who says the collar is cursed with ancient evil magic, and he can't help you but someone else can, the King's Wizard, a respected and powerful scholar. But like I said, you get turned back into a man before that even matters. He gives you a potion to help you because goblin cum can make women horny and addicted sluts just by smelling it too much, and you're forced to go back to the goblin who owns you. Before you leave, your wife tells you she is pregnant from you before you turned into a woman, and says she needs her husband back for her baby.

Now, how did you turn back into a man and get freed from the collar? Because the goblin Snib who ones you, betted you in a rigged arena match against the goblin chief and lost, and you were going to be turned into the chief's breeding sow. So Snib sets you free to kill the goblin chief and several other goblins and even an ogre bodyguard, you then escape because a female goblin you saved from her abusive husband, the goblin chief, takes you away on horseback. You escape into a human town to recover from your wounds, but come to find out, the goblin cum the chief fed you, affects human men and women. Women get incredibly turned on and turn into drug addicted goblin cum sluts, while men, exposed to goblin body fluids, die in 24. How do you cure this poisonous goblin cum now that you're a man? You just gotta beat one out! But you can't get hard because even as a dude you still think about goblin dick, only now you think it's gross, still can't forget it though. So the female goblin then offers to fuck to help you. You then have to fuck her to survive, otherwise, you die in the morning and everything the tower doctor did to save you did nothing, or made the poison worse, you then pass away hallucinating your loving wife saying she loves you (this was the best ending in the game, yes, even over the final ending, cause there's only one that I know of, might be more, but this dog shit game already ate 10 hours of my life and was garbage, so I don't care to try for more).

You then go back to town to find the King's Wizard has arrived to help you, but you're already a man, you're home, you're with your wife, so all is good. But that's chapter 13 and the game only ends at chapter 21… He wants you to wear the collar again so he can study the magic that enchants the collar to use that magic in the war your kingdom is fighting. Why you? Because the collar only works on the person who originally wears the collar, no one else will be affected by the collar. Okay, that sucks, but at least you could get a decent master who won't abuse you who will be controlled by the government so he doesn't ruin your life. And you'll even be freed by the master after the research is done. Oh wait, because the collar only works with one slave, it also only works with one master… So Snibs is back and the kingdom is condoning his actions, yes, even the ones where he tries to ruin your life, fuck your wife, ruin your reputation, get sexual with you out in public, and even physically abuse you.

Hold on now, you're telling me, that an elder god enchanted this collar? And that an ancient civilization tried to abuse that elder god's magic before, so the elder god and two others elder gods that it teamed up with, killed that civilization then tried to destroy the world and then had to be sealed? And now you want to abuse that magic again? Okay, not a great idea, but surely it will turn around this war the kingdom is losing and will protect your homeland, kinda reckless, but go big or go home right? Wait, we're not losing the war and we're just stuck in a stalemate? And we want to risk destroying the world because of this? Wtf? I don't consent! I'm a powerful Spell Knight, a Hero from the Town of Heroes, I fight dragons and griffins, and can kill a goblin chief with my bare hands, I literally did so a week ago! I don't consent, and I'm not putting on the collar again, and I'm certainly not becoming that goblin's slave again!

Powerful wizard with more magic than you and legal immunity says what? HE MAGICS THE COLLAR ONTO YOU AGAIN!(Fyi, this wizard says the kingdom doesn't have enough firepower to defend themselves, and this wizard can destroy souls and bring back the dead) So the wizards forces you to wear the collar and says that the arrangement is temporary. Snib then goes on to threaten to tell your wife about how much of a slut you were forced to be (because you never had the choice to fight it, as a player or an in-story character, because of a combination of drug addiction aphrodisiac goblin cum, and the collar making you weaker and choking you everything you disobey) if you don't have sex with him. If you refuse, you meet with the wizard, insult Snib to set off the collar to choke you, and then after the wizard leaves, Snib tells your wife what happened to you, then your wife calls you a loser and cucks you with the goblin because she wanted to spite you by giving Snib a handy, but the collar prevents you from telling her about the drug affects, EVEN THOUGH THE TOWN WIZARD SAID THAT GOBLIN CUM IS AN ADDICTIVE APHRODISIAC THAT CAN AFFECT YOU PURELY THROUGH SMELL!!! She then gets hooked, fucks the goblin none stop, you can't give her the drug you used to prevent goblin cum addiction, and you get bad ended. (This is made even dumber by later in this liner story)
If you do sleep with him, you sneak out telling your wife Snib is gonna be chill if you clean his room and leave you alone for the week. You go to his inn room, and then get pumped 13 times with so much goblin cum that you're covered in condoms, and the one time he came in your ass without a condom, you vomit it from your mouth. You meet the King's Wizard in the lobby, and he tells you that he was magiclally recording your rape and takes one of the goblin cum condoms. After you ask him why he didn't stop the rape, he says it was for research and that you shouldn't worry because you will be rewarded, set free, returned to a man, and the goblin will be executed because Snib doesn't have human rights (not that he deserves any with how shitty he acts). You then sneak home, trying to not let anyone see you because it ruins your town rep (which has NO EFFECT ON THE GAME AT ALL), only to find your wife in the living room who didn't sleep because you didn't come home that night, and she is horrified that you are covered and filled with cum. She calls you a bastard for sleeping with the goblin who has a slave collar that can kill you if you disobey him, and then curses the gods, and then stays with you. The very next day, Snib STILL TELLS HER WHAT SLUTTY THINGS YOU DID IN THE PAST AND FOR SOME REASON IS CHILL WITH IT NOW!?! You both then send off a magic crystal ball message to the original wizard that tried to help you, asking for his help, because he's gone now, for some reason. Snib abuses you in another test, your wife knocks the goblin out, and the collar breaks your neck, the King's Wizard then revives you and then complains that he had to bring you back to life, and then tries to arrest your wife. When you ask him not to, he feeds her one of the goblin cum condoms he took, which is somehow even more mind breaking because it sat for a day in a condom.
Your wife then goes on to immediately fall in love with Snib, call you a loser, says she is jealous you got to fuck Snib all this time, and then says she will leave you if you don't also love "Master Snib." You sadly don't have any more of the anti-goblin cum drug, and the King's Wizard managed to get ALL OF IT off the market everywhere. You give in, fearing for your marriage, and get into an orgy with Snib, and he breeds you both. Now, you might remember that your wife was already pregnant with your kid? Turns out, goblin cum aborts the baby to make room for goblin babies. Not only did you get cucked by the goblin, he also killed your child in the womb.

You both lose your minds and get pregnant, but then, during your pregnancy, the original wizard comes back, sees you're pregnant with a goblin child, calls this experiment horrifying, and gives you more Anti goblin cum drug, and tells you it's poisonous to you for now, but after the goblin birth, you need to take is ASAP. After the goblin birth, you managed to get the drug, give some to your wife because you both gave birth at the same time, and are free from mind control, you then (outside of player choice), poison your goblin babies and kill them, which pisses off Snib and the King's Wizard. He then says he was gonna use the goblin kids, but because you killed them, the plan has to be put ahead of schudule.

You then go with the Wizard, his royal guard, Snib and your wife to the cave where trhe collar was found. There you find a tomb dedicated to the elder gods that were sealed. The King's Wizard then says he was gonna use the goblin babies as a blood sacrifce, but now your wife will have to do, and starts the ritual. Then he says there isn't enough magic, so to make more magic, Snib needs to fuck you. This is an actual line in the final ending " My wife is about to die, and I'm getting fucked by a goblin. " Then while that is happening, the Original Wizard and a militia from the town who are tired of the King's Wizard and his shit show up to stop him. Somewhere in the, the King's Wizard admited he was going to kill Snib, and Snib was still following his orders until you tell him to run away and live and to set you free so you can kill the King's Wizard. He runs away and doesn't set you free but lets you fight and use magic. While you fight off the Soldiers, the two wizards duel and the King's Wizard kills the original Wizard, then he sacrifices your wife, killing her, so that the elder god can inhabit her body. It works, the TENTACLE elder god takes over your wife's body, kills the King's Wizard, (what a shockker) and then, in the one check that actually matters when it comes to your wifes's love, you somehow remind your dead wife that was taken over about your love, she threatens to seal the elder god in her body if the elder god that controls your collar doesn't set you free, the elder god does, then escapes, your wife is alive, then passes out, you escape from the collapsing cave, and make kisses with your wife.

6 Months later in the epliogue, you are no longer husband and wife but insteal goblin hunter fuck buddies hunting for Snib, even though there was never any mention of your wife having any comabt experience before in story or on her profile. And yes, you are still a women, and like I said you just hunt for Snib by hunting, interogating and killing goblins. You don't bother trying to turn back into a man, don't try to settle down into a new life, don't bother dealing with the elder god you all set free, don't deal with the war that was threatening your kingdom, but instead get ambushed by goblins, interogate them, kill them, then say you need a goblin tracker, and should meet the female goblin you help way back, your ex-wife says she wants to meet her, you make a tentacle joke, and then ride off into the sunset... literally.

"As the sun finally peeks over the horizon, we mount our horses, leaving the grisly scene behind. What lies ahead is uncertain, but we will face it together.

The End"

Good writing, good scenes and setting. Hope the dev makes more of this.

If you like the tags go for it you will not regret it, one of the best HTML games and one of the best games in this setting on this site.

If you like text based erotica featuring m2f transformation and humiliation then this is your jam. Top tier goblin depravity. Can recommend enough.

I ran out of things to say but the reviews require 200 characters. I dunno. I $upport the author on subscribestar primarily for their other project xchangelife. Also features m2f transformation with a prolific active mod community. Is this enough characters now?