Any chance you would be willing to add an option to choose between a male and female character at the start? The original game has one of the best corruption stories I've ever read, but whenever it mentions that the mc is actually a dude it kills my boner... 
I would love to see an alternate origin story with a tomboyish muscular lesbian hero archetype in the remake. The story beats and transformation kinks could work for both a male and female origin with minimal changes. I enjoyed huge chunks of the original game with only some rare moments of "oh fuck she's was actually a dude".
I think both mc's could have the same personality, relationships and backstory; lament the loss of their muscles, strength and dignity; or even how the collar and new body is influencing their mind and desires. Perhaps adding a female origin character is possible with only a small number of alternative text and images?
I would love to see an alternate origin story with a tomboyish muscular lesbian hero archetype in the remake. The story beats and transformation kinks could work for both a male and female origin with minimal changes. I enjoyed huge chunks of the original game with only some rare moments of "oh fuck she's was actually a dude".
I think both mc's could have the same personality, relationships and backstory; lament the loss of their muscles, strength and dignity; or even how the collar and new body is influencing their mind and desires. Perhaps adding a female origin character is possible with only a small number of alternative text and images?
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Sure. I asked because it would be strange if the NTR was the goblin being cheated on by the new transformed woman doing with other guys.
There was no reference to the MC being married in the description.
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I definitely agree with this idea, and would love to have it in this new recollared version of the game.
I'd love to focus more on the pregnancy that happens in the late part of the story, to have some more scenes around it.
I'll probably go much more in depth about it, describing what its really like to give birth to goblins, as well as daily life raising them. Although it could get fucking weird hahahaha, but hey everyone wonders it so I will try to deliver! Maybe I'll add a skip option for that.
I'm also going to have quite a few different breeding / pregnancy situations in the Gobboree as well, but that will again be more of a bad end, although "bad end" may be a misnomer because Elise will fucking love it
I've thought about giving gameplay to random sections of the game. Like a combat minigame for the combat scenes, or daily chores and pregnancy stuff for the goblin scenes. But I don't know if that would take the reader too much out of things.
Anyone who knows me from X-Change Life knows I can't resist a good minigame or gamification of anything
I'll probably go much more in depth about it, describing what its really like to give birth to goblins, as well as daily life raising them. Although it could get fucking weird hahahaha, but hey everyone wonders it so I will try to deliver! Maybe I'll add a skip option for that.
I'm also going to have quite a few different breeding / pregnancy situations in the Gobboree as well, but that will again be more of a bad end, although "bad end" may be a misnomer because Elise will fucking love it
I've thought about giving gameplay to random sections of the game. Like a combat minigame for the combat scenes, or daily chores and pregnancy stuff for the goblin scenes. But I don't know if that would take the reader too much out of things.
Anyone who knows me from X-Change Life knows I can't resist a good minigame or gamification of anything
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Is the big troll you have to fight in the Gobboree going to have scenes? I was kinda surprised the original didn't have anything with him.
Yes he is
And yes, in the original, a lot of things didn't happen that could have, because a lot of how I originally decided what would happen was by dice rolls haha.
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You won't be disappointed. There is already enough of a difference between the fist and the second. But the first will tell you why most of us are jazzed for this one.
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Odd enough, the ai cg is more consistent than the Daz
Can there be an option to not poison the goblin babies, or a heroism check you can fail to chicken out of it?I'd love to focus more on the pregnancy that happens in the late part of the story, to have some more scenes around it.
I'll probably go much more in depth about it, describing what its really like to give birth to goblins, as well as daily life raising them. Although it could get fucking weird hahahaha, but hey everyone wonders it so I will try to deliver! Maybe I'll add a skip option for that.
I'm also going to have quite a few different breeding / pregnancy situations in the Gobboree as well, but that will again be more of a bad end, although "bad end" may be a misnomer because Elise will fucking love it
I've thought about giving gameplay to random sections of the game. Like a combat minigame for the combat scenes, or daily chores and pregnancy stuff for the goblin scenes. But I don't know if that would take the reader too much out of things.
Anyone who knows me from X-Change Life knows I can't resist a good minigame or gamification of anything
Yeah. I think that would be a VERY hard thing to do so it would make sense to make that a choice.
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I love XCL minigames where you added the shift spacebar additions, wish they were in for the bj/hj scenesI'd love to focus more on the pregnancy that happens in the late part of the story, to have some more scenes around it.
I'll probably go much more in depth about it, describing what its really like to give birth to goblins, as well as daily life raising them. Although it could get fucking weird hahahaha, but hey everyone wonders it so I will try to deliver! Maybe I'll add a skip option for that.
I'm also going to have quite a few different breeding / pregnancy situations in the Gobboree as well, but that will again be more of a bad end, although "bad end" may be a misnomer because Elise will fucking love it
I've thought about giving gameplay to random sections of the game. Like a combat minigame for the combat scenes, or daily chores and pregnancy stuff for the goblin scenes. But I don't know if that would take the reader too much out of things.
Anyone who knows me from X-Change Life knows I can't resist a good minigame or gamification of anything
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I had an alternative idea, but I didn't want to pile on too much with my previous post, as I felt I was already being a bit too much with my "wish".
After I posted, I felt that maybe wanting the "broodmothery" state be part of normal gameplay was too much to ask since you'd have to heavily change the story at many points during the whole thing for something like that to fit organically, so I thought to ask about maybe making the endings where you end up like that playable somehow, like... you could make "Bad" Ends don't just end there in a game over screen, but rather branch into their own little story that obviously won't go as long as the main "canon" branch. (And this is where you could really go ham with the gamified elements to give us a taste what's like to be Snib's wife rather than just being a simple Bad End.)
Personally, I think something like that fits the tone of what you're going for perfectly. And having read the original and also played X-Change Life, I strongly believe you can make it happen without making it weird.
I wanna bring a direct comparison to narrative-heavy games with soft gameplay elements here. There was a recent game called Dispatch released that does exactly this, and let me tell you, it does NOT take the reader away from the story one bit, and that game is currently a huge success. Anyone that tells you it may detract from the story has the attention span of a goldfish. Some people might bitch that they just want to read, some other people might bitch that they're bored of only reading and want something else to grab their attention; you simply can't please everyone.
At least personally, if anything, having minigames about daily chores and pregnancy stuff (lactation, being fed to keep up milk production and so Elise's body can grow thicker/more fertile, being bred by Snib even while pregnant/being bred to be impregnated, etc.) for goblin scenes would immerse me even more on the role of the broodmare, rather than take me away from it.
I remember giving you some positive feedback on submissive/non-con elements with similar 'breedy' vibes in X-Change Life (though this kind of fantasy setting goes a lot harder in my happy receptors a lot more than the modern one), so just to let you know, I truly believe in your writing, trust your instincts. And even if you don't use any of my ideas at all, I know this is gonna be amazing regardless.
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I know there's many people out there that dislike/disapprove ai cg, but the reworked images imo are great. The ambient music and short dialogues are also a very nice touch. (Not sure if there always was audio, it's been too long since I've played.) Dev, nice job.
Edit: Also love that there are animated bits as well.
Edit: Also love that there are animated bits as well.
I don't see this happening, but definitely second this!Any chance you would be willing to add an option to choose between a male and female character at the start? The original game has one of the best corruption stories I've ever read, but whenever it mentions that the mc is actually a dude it kills my boner...
I would love to see an alternate origin story with a tomboyish muscular lesbian hero archetype in the remake. The story beats and transformation kinks could work for both a male and female origin with minimal changes. I enjoyed huge chunks of the original game with only some rare moments of "oh fuck she's was actually a dude".
I think both mc's could have the same personality, relationships and backstory; lament the loss of their muscles, strength and dignity; or even how the collar and new body is influencing their mind and desires. Perhaps adding a female origin character is possible with only a small number of alternative text and images?
My opinion of it is that it'd be a great addition if pregnancy is/was to become a possibility for each (new) chapter, without it always being a bad end, and not just with Snib. In the next few chapters there's that festival of Goblins, and in the previous game they're barely mentioned afterwards and this would... allow a part of them to comeback through the mc, her becoming a genuine broodmare, while also not going completely nuts.I'd love to focus more on the pregnancy that happens in the late part of the story, to have some more scenes around it.
I'll probably go much more in depth about it, describing what its really like to give birth to goblins, as well as daily life raising them. Although it could get fucking weird hahahaha, but hey everyone wonders it so I will try to deliver! Maybe I'll add a skip option for that.
I'm also going to have quite a few different breeding / pregnancy situations in the Gobboree as well, but that will again be more of a bad end, although "bad end" may be a misnomer because Elise will fucking love it
I've thought about giving gameplay to random sections of the game. Like a combat minigame for the combat scenes, or daily chores and pregnancy stuff for the goblin scenes. But I don't know if that would take the reader too much out of things.
Anyone who knows me from X-Change Life knows I can't resist a good minigame or gamification of anything
And that she somehow stayed sane throug will or... just found moonshine after she gave birth and collected her marbles. While staying human, as a minimum, but the choice to.. y'know.
Given your ability to write and creativity I'm sure you can make it work.
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