VN - HTML - The Gym Love Affair [v1.0] [MelonX Saga]

im sorry but this game sux

once situations starts happening all over the place
author just wanted to crammed porn videos into this
okey so

Day 1: you start a work as personal trainer and have 3 different clients
Night 1: you fantasise sex with your clients or other gym ladies
Day 2: you enter the gym, but you surprised someone is there? HOW don't you have the keys to open it?? gym have open and closing hours...
are you surprised that someone use public open gym? or that there is client in gym that had 3 clients for you from day one of your work?
Night 2: you have step sister apparently, she wasn't there before, but you fuck her
day 3: yoga with some woman outside of gym
day 4 you get spa massage
day 5 motel sex

What the fuck is this? how i m supposed to follow whats going on

on top of messy story:
NO CHOICES
game ends with patreon link
it is a bit gross that the game have good idea, but its wasted on this

I had high hopes going into this VN, especially after reading a certain glowing review — but honestly, it seems like that was written by the dev themselves (or at least by ChatGPT and an alt account). The language in the top review reads like an AI-crafted promo: generic praise, vague adjectives, and suspiciously polished phrasing.

The game itself is underwhelming. It leans heavily on real-life photos and videos instead of original art or 3D renders, which might sound innovative, but in practice it feels lazy. The media choices are inconsistent, sometimes low quality, and give off a weird, voyeuristic vibe that didn’t feel immersive — just awkward. Instead of enhancing the realism, it makes the whole thing feel like a cheap slideshow with filler dialogue.

The writing tries to be flirty but lands closer to awkward and unnatural. Characters feel flat, and the pacing is all over the place. There's no real buildup — just a string of forced interactions that lack chemistry. Visually, the UI is decent, but “slick and modern” is a stretch; it’s functional at best, and transitions often lag or stutter.

This one misses the mark. Instead of a genuine adult romance sim, it feels like a proof-of-concept padded with buzzwords and fake reviews. Definitely not worth the hype — or your time.

There is literally no game here. no choices what so ever.
The third girl allready killed it for me. Text says you are training her in the videos you are allready fucking.

Dont know whats with the 5 star review but I guess we didnt load the same file