VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The Heroes of Eroticism [Ep.9] [Kenningsly]

Bad ending, bad story, bad people

good renders but the story is poorly implemented, superpowers and no one uses them throughout the game, please, also there are almost no sex scenes, the supposed hero is a total idiot, when you think he is going to have a good time he ends up cockblocked and in the end he has no sex with almost no one, the secondary character (the cop skeesh or something alike ) ends up having more action than him and the game ends in a pretty stupid way.

Great story; images are well done; easy to continue with the import buttons.

The characters felt believable from the first chapter through to the end. It had all the necessary elements of good story telling with a good set up, energetic interaction between the players and the tensions produced by the circumstances of the story. All of those are important to me; otherwise there would hardly be any reason to post a review.

It's not an instant "bang every girl" story, and the effects of the choices don't seem to effect things to far from the time they are made. So if you are looking for a "hello, you're cute, let's have sex game," you may be disappointed. While I admit there were a couple of girls I'd had an interest in seeing more of (and doing more with), I wasn't really disappointed in what was available. That's probably the reason I only give it four stars, if I'm honest.

In short: The sex was part of the story, not all of it. I tend to appreciate those more. The other kind I spend a short time on and get board. This one had my attention.

I loved that the girls looked unique. I loved that most women were on the "realistic" side of AVNs, and there wasn't a single cowboobed titbeast in attendance or a single mound of disgusting pubes. The story had promise and so did the game.

But nothing ever happened. I sincerely hope I got a bad ending and what I experienced is not what the dev intended, but either way it's obvious this was put out of its misery quickly. On the flip side, that's the only reason I'm not considering this a 0/10 waste and word-shitting everywhere: it does actually end. It's not another infinite shekelsink that milks patreons for a decade.

By far the most unforgivable thing here is that there's hardly any sex. Somewhere in the middle you bang your sisters but then that's it. Some time later you and a sister have the entire house for the night, but she blows you and then it's bedtime. There's a halfhearted threesome towards the end, but it's interrupted...and only three or four frames anyway. Either my mind had glazed over as much as my eyes or there really wasn't any sex beyond those two-point-five scenes. Heroes is also unplayable with the mod. The text is white and many frames are blindingly bright, so unless you turn that text box on it's literally unreadable. No name change without that mod either, and it's not like this game was started twenty years ago when no one ever expected such a feature.

Just like my tense shifting, I'm really struggling to say anything else that's positive or negative. I got some screengrabs of the 2.5 interesting scenes that I'll add to my cartoon fap folder and then never think about this experience ever again. It's impossible to recommend in any way, unless the two sisters are 100% your thing. Even then, and I can't believe I'm saying this because I've never done it myself, but you should not bother reading it. Just skip through to get the scenes you want and delete all 859403 parts of this 16gb game (?!?!?!) forever. There are far better experiences on this site alone even if you're scraping the barrel like me.

Edit because I forgot: there's a six month time skip followed shortly after by a two week one, wherein both have a total lack of gravitas. It's the definition of "oh no! anyway..." and that they're both in the last episode really drives home that this whole experience was a mercy killing in the end.

First off, I love slow burn and interesting stories in my H games, so my rating is not indicative of that.

The problem is that this isn't really a slow burn. Yes, it takes a very long time to hit the first sex scene, but there are a ton of "not technically sex, but you can't do that on television" scenes and they start pretty quickly. It is blatantly obvious that your sisters want to fuck you from the second or third scene, so in my opinion, this does not qualify as a slow burn game.

Secondly, the story just is not interesting. This is a completely standard "mysterious family circumstances including a dead dad incest game" just wrapped in a shell of superheroes. If you have ever played any rote incest game before, you can guess all of the major beats in this one. Instead of dad dying in a car accident or of a heart attack, there was a super hero involved. Instead of your sister getting involved with an abusive ex, it's a super. Instead of going to college classes, it's a college for supers. You can see where this is going - the introduction of superheroes does nothing to make this game unique or stand out. Granted I only played the first 3 chapters, but absolutely nothing in those chapters tempted me to keep going.

I had such high hopes for this game, I usualy dont mind a slow burn game but this took it to the next level. some of the things I didnt particularly like were: 1. not being able to change the mc's name, 2. not enough adult scenes 3. story was way too dragged out and not too interesting

For a game with incest tag there where lack if incest scenes
Renders are good
No bugs
Having every episode seperate is annoying
story is average
expected more from this game
There few sex scenes with sisters But not that much I guess it depends on the choiches you made

Tl;dr 2 star review says it all. Gone through all the releases, New Beginnings - episode 9. Wile there is an IC tag, which is ~8% of tags for THIS game, I expect there to be more IC content. I've gone through "New Beginnings - episode 9". Yes there are choices in this game. I am a lazy POS and only do what I thought I should for IC/harem sexy times. (ESL people "POS definition" google search dictionary.com gives it too you) Going through the "game", choosing what I assume are harem/IC choices, over 9 episodes, there are 2 IC scenes. F*** this nonsense
Would give a less than one star, if available, but the TWO sister scenes I got in my playthrough of "Episode 1 [in quotation cause everything is in flux] - current ep 9 are decent. Again, I'm a lazy POS but fuck tags giving lack of promised content when there is a whole bunch of other bs

You first have to know that I tried to read every single line of text starting from episode 1 to episode 8 but I stopped at the beginning/middle of episode 8 as I simply just couldn’t keep going on anymore, such a waste of time was way too much for my eyes and brain. This VN makes no sense at all and is poor in every single way, a dead end...

Let’s start with the MC. Less-than-average guy, no charisma at all, Hobbit-face (for real!), and dressed like a hobo (nobody ever changes his/her day or night clothes anyway in this VN). How could you ever enjoy playing a game with such a non-appealing main character? Half of the text is about his personal thoughts, loooong ones, and mostly about boobs, asses and his boner, nothing that helps the story to progress so you can just skip those, it will help you digest the episodes.

The girls are also average but with great bodies to look at once naked, as a compensation, but some of them are a bit more attracted to other girls than to the MC (understandable), even to the point of making porn videos with them (really Avery??).

The story has a lot of holes, it doesn’t really follow a coherent path and the characters have, most of the time, reactions that don’t make any sense (the 3 days following Alison’s abduction or the few days following Bryan’s death just felt ‘unreal’ to say the least). It’s like the developer is trying to get to a point, trying to tell a story, but without any solid scenario, everything feels bland/apathetical all the time.

And if you’re here for the sex, let me be direct with you: there is nothing to see apart for a couple of scenes with each of the two sisters, nothing else so far, nada, ALL the other girls are just teasing the MC or are more into other girls/guys than into him. And to add to the disappointment, there is no more animation, just a couple of renders for each sex scene and that’s it, animations were only in the early episodes (in my opinion this tag should be removed) and they were of low quality anyway.

So, I’m just telling you the sad truth, you shouldn’t hope for anything from this very poor VN, story-wise or sex-wise, there is simply nothing to see on either side, don’t waste your time and bandwidth downloading all the episodes, there are way better games on F95 to look at.

Why does every girl I get to introduced seems to catch the eye of my lesbian who can't come to terms with her feelings, and why are the dudes so ugly pretty the only decent looking guy was avery's dad and what's with the fucking police captain

Please note that I'm trying very, very hard to like this game.

I love games in the superhero/powered genre. To me, the superpowered genre is arguably the most accessible fantasy around. In short, it's a readymade genre that welcomes any earnest attempt at worldbuilding, so making a decent superpowered game should be easy in theory. Everyone has—at least one point in their life—imagined what kind of superpower they would have or want, and what they would do with it. It's a universal fancy, yet when done right it can have layer upon layer of depth and complexity that make the environment rich and interesting.

This game, on the other hand, has almost none of it. To its credit, it sets up the premise fairly well. A newly awakened generation of powered people suddenly flare up recently, a generation after a major conflict between a previous epoch of powered people. You can already see the setup for conflict, filled with politics, intrigue, and powered shenanigans.

... But none of that is delivered in this game.

Instead, it devolves into your usual garden variety slice-of-life incest game really, really fast. You end playing as an MC that lives a day-to-day grind with his two older twin sisters. You have the usual shenanigans of having to deal with a modern construction house that inexplicably shares just one bathroom, questioning why a nice home in suburbia with plenty of space to spare can't have enough bedrooms for the three of them (it's obviously for the easy trope of seeing each other naked, but you rarely see a game be so brazen in their lack of inventiveness and creativity).

Worse still, the visuals in this game just feel lazy and cheap. There's never any attention to lighting, for one. Every single render is globally illuminated like it's under bright studio lights, even scenes that are supposed to take place at the crack of dawn or deep in the middle of the night. The text will say it's time for bed, and mention how it's 3am, but the entire render is bright as day. Either it's perpetually summer solstice within the Arctic Circle, or it's incredibly immersion breaking for no discernable payoff. Controlling lighting is one of the first things you can do in rendering a scene. It can instantly make a render look more immersive, and yet the developer can't do anything other than slapping their models onto generic DAZ backgrounds.

There's also minimal continuity from scene to scene, or even the hint that it's considered. Avery supposedly has very rich parents and lives in a penthouse, but apparently said penthouse doesn't even have an elevator to bring them up, and they use the same dingy hallway background that you see in a bunch of DAZ studio games, usually for lower-income housing. You're supposed to believe they're in the city center, yet the view out of Avery's window is all rooftops for suburban houses. And even the other windows in her house (that, seemingly by accident, shows urban buildings) generally show rundown lowrise brick buildings with highly visible metal fire escapes. Hardly the look of a ritzy neighborhood.

There're dozens of these discrepancies between what the game is saying versus what it's actually showing. Any one of them might be minor, but the frequency and totality make it impossible to ignore. The developer legitimately doesn't seem to give a shit about telling a coherent story through visual media.

When it comes to the models, there are plenty of reviews that have given praise to the models, but I struggle to see it. The MC, for instance, has what I can charitably call a challenging face. He's incredibly pale with a very broad, almost froggish face: wide, deep-set, beady eyes with a flat and squarish headshape yet poorly defined jawline (to say nothing about those absolutely abhorrent eyebrows). The fact that you're forced to look at this massive character model in the corner with every dialogue option only makes it worse. Yet this ugly MC is somehow able to instantly attract women without much effort on his bumblng behalf.

The girls are also similarly disagreeable. Most of them have the same face shape, and while your mileage may vary, I simply don't find them attractive. Most of them have the same challenging aesthetic of the MC. Wide and flat faces with squarish features, strong chins but with vanishing jawlines and heavy-set cheekbones. It's at best a kind of exaggerated English Rose look, but even it's questionable. Maybe they would be a 10 in Swansea, but I have my doubts.

There are some people who rationalize this as a "girl next door" look, but that excuse kind of falls apart when they are constantly rendered with 10/10 tits that cling, by magic, onto a scrap of fabric generously called a shirt. Not to mention that all of the women sharing this same aesthetic makes it feel more like an intentional design choice. The developer likes this kind of look for their women, and it's definitely not the same taste as mine.

Admittedly this would be less of an issue if they were fully fleshed out characters. Unfortunately their writing is weird to say the least; to say they don't match their initial introductions is an understatement, and really they have no discernible personality to the point where you can imagine any line of dialogue coming from any character. They're that interchangeable.

Worse, the plot is slow developing and littered with lazy storytelling tropes. The dialogue is largely very weak and meandering, even by porn game standards, and the lack of subtext means that the developer feels inclined to explain away every idle thought in its own dialogue slide, rather than showing them play out in the MC's dialogue or facial expressions. This combined with a very bad render-to-dialogue ratio and a poor understanding of screenwriting makes for a lot of scenes that just drag on, and on, and on.

You end up clicking through dozens of slides of the same renders (or a few recycled ones back and forth) for minimal gain. In most scenes, you learn nothing new about the characters. It's just tedium. I've had this game open for several days, forcing myself to play it, just to get through enough of it to finish a review. The developer badly needs an editor. In the future, they should ask themselves the almighty question: Does this scene need to be there? Does it illuminate something new or advanced the character or plot?

Half of the scenes in this game would not pass that simple check. Then when you combine that each of those scenes drag with unnecessarily abundant internal monologues, and you just have a very poor reading experience.

And then even when something finallly happens, there's no sense of urgency, no pace change in the storyline. The MC's sister literally gets kidnapped in the middle of the night, the other sister is knocked out in the middle of the upstairs landing, and they... call the police offscreen and go about their normal day? They take a shower, bake some breakfast (to cheer themselves up, of course), stupidly clean up the crime scene (the biggest of groans and facepalms), and go see a movie?

What kind of backwards, ridiculous storytelling is this?! The developer literally manages to take an actual kidnapping of arguably the most important person in MC's life, and manages to make it seem boring, mundane, slice-of-life. Zero urgency in either the characters or the storytelling. Zero atmosphere or tone shift. It's just flat, like the entirety of the rest of the game.

And then, the cherry on top of the shit sundae, you actually have to download 3 separate games, with imperfect save stating between them, just to play through the same flat, extraneous content with barely any plot movement. Other games have managed to condense much more into much less.

The pacing for the lewd scenes is also absolutely awful. Look, I get it. It's a slow burn incest game. I don't want characters jumping onto the MC's dick immediately. But you know how to avoid that? Tell a good, engaging story. Some of the best games on this site have relatively few, or even zero, actual sex scenes in them. Because they tell credible stories that tangibly develop from scene to scene.

This game does the opposite. It takes an entire wide world of superheroes and vigilantes with newly awakened powers, an MC who just moved [back] to a new city having newly gained independence from his mom, yet manages to shrink the entire narrative into the 4 walls of his house (and one bathroom). He spends all day fantasizing about his two sisters, some random girl that literally teleported into his path, and his exhibitionist neighbor, using all his meager brainpower to try to find ways to see them naked.

The game essentially takes a potentially rich world, squanders it, and forces the entire focus onto the sex. It shrinks the worldbuilding and makes the world feel the opposite of engaging or lived-in. Instead, the world feels extra small and contrived. The lack of actual sex scenes is only magnified by how much the MC is focused on the needs of his dick, with all the talk of his boners.

If you're going to go the route of hyperfixation on sex, at least offer some reasonable progression. Foreplay doesn't take weeks or months. Explore the world, or don't. Explore the sex, or don't. Don't try to hold the readers in this limbo constantly teasing them, only to have it fizzle. The game tries to sell you it's a "slow burn" when nothing's on the pot. You just have to sit through another ten scenes of mindless drivel before someone flashes a tiddy in a cheap bid to keep your attention.

All in all, the storytelling is a giant fucking mess. The characters are all written as super flat, who largely seem ok with anything and have minimal changes in expression or relevant emotion. The game fails to evoke any real sense of sentiment or feeling, ultimately committing the cardinal sins of being boring, repetitive, and uninspired. Neither plots nor lewd scenes really develop. In the odd chance you get any kind of progression, it feels isolated and arbitrary, before basically being forgotten about. You're stuck reading a bunch of mindless dialogue about the real most important character in the story: MC's inconvenient boner.

It's about a 1.5/5 if I'm generous. And that hurts, because the superhero genre deserves much better.

The models are nice and there is a good variety of them, some looking quite realistic even and not the usual ones everybody uses. That is about the only strength this game has.

The story is pretty "meh" at best, and not because of the story itself (young people have powers, they are the second generation of superhumans after a previous one ended in a war of normal humans vs powered humans) but because of pacing and storytelling issues.

What do I mean by that? Well, the pacing of many days is weird, a bit like "I wake up, took a shower, had breakfast, have one conversation with my sister and.... is time to go to bed" , this is not even done by saying "some hours later" but literally finishing a conversation that started during breakfast and is time to go to bed.

This is not helped by the fact that the light doesn't change at all from scene to scene, so character wakes up and it is full day bright, he goes to bed at 3 a.m., it is full day bright, goes skinny dipping in the evening, it is full day bright... really weird and immersion breaking.

Regarding the storytelling, there are a lot of things that took me out of the story regularly, for example, "hey, my sister has been kidnapped, lets go to the movies in the meantime" , or, "hey, I want to become an engineer, I guess I will take risk assessment and digital art at university... oh, and only two classes per semester", or "I have a house that is a short walk from university but for some reason, lets all three of us, me and my sisters, live in some separate dorms in the university itself".

Scenes sort of happen also at weird points and there is not much build up of eroticism, the characters have way too much inner monologue that breaks the action and there is some weird/quirky elements that do not fit with the tone at all (talking dildoes that nobody questions...).

To top it all off, the fact that this is broken into 3 different "games" is quite annoying and should be fixed, plus some scenes are referenced when I didn't get to see them (I guess that some flags didn't translate correctly from episode to episode since they are broken into separates).

It is a pity, because with these models, and this premise for a story, this could have been an easy 4/5 or 5/5 if pacing, story telling and others were handled with more care.

As it is, this game failed to be rewarding as a reading experience or an erotic experience, 2/5.

Game version: 1-5

I was going to write a long, detailed review about these episodes, but then I decided to stick to the main points of my rating:

The ratio between text and lewdness is NOT what I expect from a sex game. It's like 10:1 and it should be at least 5:2; which means: Too much text, too few scenes. There IS a lot of teasing, though.
The story IS good and the writing IS good as well, but it just grinds on my time too much.
The models are hot, both in variety and shapes, that is. Except the MC, which looks like a premature and kinda ugly dude with a big dick.
Another thing to criticize is the splitting of the game into episodes- tbh, I never understood why devs would do such a thing. I artificially stretches the game length AND kills the flow at the same time.
At least since the last third of the "Beginning" and the beginning of episode 4, I completely lost my remaining motivation to continue playing, because of the aforementioned grind on text-skipping.

It really is a shame, because the core of the game is REALLY good. I'm looking forward to seeing improvements in his coming games.

P.S.: The episodes need a gallery mode ASAP, so one can at least enjoy the hard-earned "trophies". Not neccessary, because there are only 2 sex scenes, as far as I remember. Really bad.

3 stars is the best I can give it for now. I would have loved to give it 4 but I held back on for a couple reasons that i will share here.

The story is .... well its there for sure and a lot of it. In fact there is so much story that sex is not so much there in it. Oh you will definitely see plenty of dick though. I think you will as much dick as you do female body parts from all the females in the game combined. That says something maybe about what the dev is a bot attracted to possibly. But that's besude the point I think. The story is certainly there. Its sometimes a bit confusing and the powers are a bit awkward to follow at times but still it is a pretty good story. So far, episode 3 as of this review, there is not a whole lot going on sexually and there has been a ton of touchy feely build up but nothing too intense until the final scenes of episode 3. And considering the end of that it makes a bit of sense where it is as well, story wise. Its good that the girls are not portrayed as just total sluts, well at least the sisters aren't anyway. The point I am making is it as a very good story. Wish there were way more games on here that had stories that are half as good as this one is. Its not the best story but it certainly is far from bad. Kudos to the dev on that.

I docked a point for a few things. The girls all look way too similar in my opinion. This is something that you can't blame on the lack of available models to use at this point. There are way to many games out there that have models that are unique from each other completely in them. That said, I will give credit for the boobs not looking like the girls are walking around with a pair of blimps attached to their chests. I looking at you on that Asian game makers. And at least not every single one of the models is shaved bare as well. Nice touch, to few have pubes any more.


I also wish there were more choices available than what is there. There is a lot of game between choices. So much so that sometimes I would forget where I intended to go with that character and have to back my game up to check it.

Overall this game has a lot of potential and I do hope to see more from it but I sadly feel it will not be a long running game like some of the great ones are. The story felt way too rushed. Protagonists discovered and beaten too quickly and easily. Why are there no ways to track the MC's skills or how efficient he becomes in them? No way to improve them? There are tons of improvements that could be made to the game, but if they are, I hope the flow and story quality does not suffer for it.

Overall I would very much recommend this game. I may have found faults with it but they are probably easily things many playes on here just simply won't be bothered about. At the same time there are also players on here that are way more critical than I am as well. Don't let our opinions ruin it for you, its definitely worth a play through to form your own opinions. The story alone is interesting enough to warrant that. That extra star can easily be fixed by the dev if they are creative enough without screwing things up in the process. I eagerly await seeing exactly how the dev goes with is one.

While it is more like a 4.5/5 for me, I think it deserves some positive rating for sure.

The amount of content surprised me. I mean like, starting a VN expecting the typical 20 minute - 40 minute breeze through and realizing it has been a few hours... lol.

I do think some of the minor details of conversations were drawn on a bit much, I appreciate that it did not get stuck in them and the day-to-day style of this VN actually feels like it is progressing with some point to it.

If the VN ended on this last chapter, episode 3, it would've been a solid story. Another episode coming out means a rekindling of overarching story and a potential for losing its succinct story telling, but we shall see.

Art: 5/5
What art is there and for the chosen style, it is very good.

Models: 4/5
Really more like 5/5 but their clothing didn't change enough for me. And honestly, Jane's top annoyed me. That is a sexy top, but not an every day never changing kind of top. And if she truly felt
Sex: 4/5
The sex was few and far between. And when it did happen, it was more of a romantic advancement than arousing content. It was good, but super vanilla imo. Also, not nearly enough sex for my tastes. Hell of a lot of teasing though, which isn't bad.

Story: 4/5
It has story. It feels slightly like a day in the life sort of story, but it does have some plot to hook on to. Whether that will remain after episode 3, I can't fortell.

Writing:4.5/5
The writing and dialogue was excellent. My only complaint is there is a wee bit too much (parentheses of internal thinking as opposed to proper discussion between characters.)

Enjoyment: 4/5
ngl, I wanted more sexual content or deeper depravity. It still hooked me and I enjoyed it, just... felt a bit vanilla. Hell not even any villians did anything kinky.

Overall: 5/5
I do recommend. I enjoyed it.

Despite not quite as much content as I liked, the story is very good and truly made me invested in it. The relationships are wonderful and I love how it is taking its time building them up. Definitely more invested in the twins, though.

i really like this one, i really do, but in all conscious i cannot rate higher as it does have issues. it's a four star to five star at best but not an easy glowing 5 star

the screen flicker from the models in chat window really is annoying to say the least. aside from that, most of the art is pretty good, but the old man look is just weird in some of the MC's images. a few others caught my eye for the wrong reason too.

on to the writing...
well the description part of the two girls' characters was ok but the more i read the less it made sense. first i thought they had the opposite characters to what was described, then later, none of it really fit at all. that impression just wouldn't stop nagging the more i read. i think the writer/developer should really re-think those descriptions as it really does ring hollow to the point where i got more of a sense that they are very much more alike, with one having more of a thing with girls, but both feel like the same character.

erotic scenes are a bit flat compared to the build up. i did expect them to be a bit less bland for this site, but not important. just seemed the writer built up well to them, while the art needed to hit the same level of intimacy. hard to put finger on exactly what i mean.

without the annoying screen flicker and the inconsistency in character, redo the poor art and this easily becomes 4.5-5 star for me.
right now, they just stand out too easily

now that the game is complete it could use a repacking from someone much more capable than the developer who seems to lack understanding on HOW to pack all chapters into one download and compress.
this alone makes it a chore to play through their project and is a real negative they really should address for the sake of their own reputation. i know one other dev who did this and it was never well received.

Another promising entry in the superpower/incest genres with a fairly large amount of content for a new release. One thing that I do hope is added in the future are more real choices. Thus far, there are quite a few choices that don't seem to make a difference. Hopefully, that will change in the future.

For a superhero game, the story has a nice build up.I assume the first two chapters are intro part to the college section.I love the interaction between the characters.The language is well wrotten simple one.

Good stuff
1) Powers. Yeah, I'm a sucker for that kinda stuff.
2) Distinct character personalities & interesting story.

Bad stuff
1) Large character portraits. Having it constantly change in my peripheral vision while reading irritated my eyes. It's the first time I've had to block part of my screen during one of these types of games & I've played a lot.
2) There ain't any 10/10 eye candy in this game. Women are more average looking compared to other games on this site. Guess that's charming in a way. And the protag... got used to ignoring his face.

The portrait issue is a deal breaker for me. I'll gladly adjust my review if an option to disable it is added.