The Incredible Miss Fortune 1.0 (Completed)
3/5
Plot (2.5/5) - Our MC, Marley (yes, just like that dog. No, you can’t change it) gives us a brief monologue before flashing back to how this all started. Basically, at a brunch with his GF and her 2 friends at the beginning of Spring Break, the GF gets asked by them if she’ll participate in a upcoming beauty pageant their college is hosting for the cash prize since they’re ineligible for various reasons. She refuses, and the MC jokes that were HE a woman, he’d help the two out. I think you can see where this goes. Cue a shadily purchased app and a small break-in to our hero’s bedroom and boom, presto-o, change-o. It’s silly, inconsequential, and does it’s job fine as set dressing for the rest of the VN.
Characters (2/5) - Ill be honest, only the MC and June are really worth paying attention to. The rest just fall super flat. Case in point - Quinn. She’s a lesbian you meet early on, and depending on a choice earlier in the game (it’s pretty obvious), she’ll turn into a futa and steal your girl. And that’s…it. She’s a massive flirt that doesn’t even really flirt with you. She works as a delivery driver. And she has a cock now. You don’t learn anything else about her or how she feels with her new appendage, any insights as to why she took an interest in your girl and not girl you. She’s basically just a background villain that doesn’t even really do anything villainous when you’re around. Even worse is Anaya (the girl who changed the MC). She’s the typical Ice Queen with a heart of Gold except, you don’t even see her really be anything but kind of an asshole until it’s time to show your ending basically, and that’s only on the NTR path. And yet one of her endings
The same chick who seems constantly annoyed that our MC is her only shot at winning the pageant? The one that hangs out with them less than June does and has no on-screen chemistry with them? Nah man, that ain’t it.
Sex Stuff (3/5) - While there’s not a ton of naughty situations occurring, and when they do they aren’t particularly crazy, I think there’s a good ramp up and pace to them that elevates it into satisfactory range. Bad stuff first, no Futa/Female scenes with MC which imo, is the biggest disappointment when I played this.
They’re decent, aren’t too wordy, no bad clipping or weird angles and generally gets the job done. Tag wise, NTR is pretty weak imo, Futa is in the same boat only worse. Transformation/ Gender Bender is really where the focus is on this and in that regard, I think it does it well enough. Good internal thought process on the change, slow-ish corruption, plenty of choice on how far or not you wanna take this Spring Break with your new body, and if you wanna make it permanent.
TLDR: While I’m pretty disappointed with the wasted potential in this game concerning certain tags and the middling rapport most of the main cast has with each other, I think this game does it’s job of being a quick, fun snack for those that enjoy the Gender Bender genre.
3/5
Plot (2.5/5) - Our MC, Marley (yes, just like that dog. No, you can’t change it) gives us a brief monologue before flashing back to how this all started. Basically, at a brunch with his GF and her 2 friends at the beginning of Spring Break, the GF gets asked by them if she’ll participate in a upcoming beauty pageant their college is hosting for the cash prize since they’re ineligible for various reasons. She refuses, and the MC jokes that were HE a woman, he’d help the two out. I think you can see where this goes. Cue a shadily purchased app and a small break-in to our hero’s bedroom and boom, presto-o, change-o. It’s silly, inconsequential, and does it’s job fine as set dressing for the rest of the VN.
Characters (2/5) - Ill be honest, only the MC and June are really worth paying attention to. The rest just fall super flat. Case in point - Quinn. She’s a lesbian you meet early on, and depending on a choice earlier in the game (it’s pretty obvious), she’ll turn into a futa and steal your girl. And that’s…it. She’s a massive flirt that doesn’t even really flirt with you. She works as a delivery driver. And she has a cock now. You don’t learn anything else about her or how she feels with her new appendage, any insights as to why she took an interest in your girl and not girl you. She’s basically just a background villain that doesn’t even really do anything villainous when you’re around. Even worse is Anaya (the girl who changed the MC). She’s the typical Ice Queen with a heart of Gold except, you don’t even see her really be anything but kind of an asshole until it’s time to show your ending basically, and that’s only on the NTR path. And yet one of her endings
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Sex Stuff (3/5) - While there’s not a ton of naughty situations occurring, and when they do they aren’t particularly crazy, I think there’s a good ramp up and pace to them that elevates it into satisfactory range. Bad stuff first, no Futa/Female scenes with MC which imo, is the biggest disappointment when I played this.
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TLDR: While I’m pretty disappointed with the wasted potential in this game concerning certain tags and the middling rapport most of the main cast has with each other, I think this game does it’s job of being a quick, fun snack for those that enjoy the Gender Bender genre.