VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Invisible Pervert [Development Thread]

[13th Son]

--Unfortunately, due to Steam/Itch positions on incest games it is not financially viable for me to continue working on this game. I have uploaded my .1 version which contains 1700 renders. If you have an hour or so you may still enjoy playing through it.--

"What if you could see her but she couldn't see you?"

Introducing my new game, a classic harem/incest AVN with a fun, superpowered twist. Feedback on this alpha/demo version is welcome and appreciated!

Game: The Invisible Pervert
Developer: The 13th Son of the Fallen

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Planned tags: Incest, Harem, Voyeurism, Milf, Virgin, Interractial, Fem Dom (light), Male Dom (light), Urination, Pregnancy (probably not until the end, though), Cheating, Optional Sharing. Masturbation, Handjob, Oral Sex, Vaginal Sex, Anal Sex, Group Sex
Will not have: NTR, Rape, Futa, Gay, Scat, Bestiality
There will most likely be some scenes where the MC can choose to watch other couples having sex. If it included it will be avoidable. (I know that people have strong opinions about this but we really don't need to debate it here!).

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[Saint Blackmoor]

Honestly, I can't say much, because it's very good. I haven't finished yet, but I've seen enough to get a good sense of it.
The dialogue is 99% free of issues... ........
Too much voyeurism can be creepy unless it's not done in a creepy way.

I wish you much success.

 

[13th Son]

Honestly, I can't say much, because it's very good. I haven't finished yet, but I've seen enough to get a good sense of it.
The dialogue is 99% free of issues... ........
Too much voyeurism can be creepy unless it's not done in a creepy way.

I wish you much success.

Thank you and thanks for checking out the game!

 

[Pixieblink]

Here you go. Hope it's helpful.

 

[Meh 1000]

Is pretty good!

 

[13th Son]

Here you go. Hope it's helpful.

Thank you for the detailed feedback!

Is pretty good!

Thank you!

 

[MagicMan753]

Its not bad, but my biggest problem is the MC. He looks to short and baby like. Not saying we have to go full man beard or anything, just would of liked a MC that looks taller and better.

 

[13th Son]

Its not bad, but my biggest problem is the MC. He looks to short and baby like. Not saying we have to go full man beard or anything, just would of liked a MC that looks taller and better.

Thanks for checking it out!

 

[darlic]

The preview screens look awesome, I'm not sure how the invisibility content will be treated in the game, but judging from the planned tags, it doesn't look like this will have anything too dark (like sexual assault or similar), which is a good thing for me.

Looking forward to the next update, which hopefully will contain some actual sexy action.

 

[clearwavey]

I'm rather new to playing VNs (only completed a handful) so my perspective is from that. I played from the start to the end.

Story:
The premises of the story is interesting, so far has been presented in a pretty fun way. The MC can at least admit to himself he's a pervert, but the rest of the family seem like secret perverts too. Maybe just not on the same level. With Tatina kinda accepting the MCs action at his PC rather quickly, Kendra actually flashing her nipple to the MC and Mei getting turned on when the MC gives her a foot massage. A video call instead of phone call for the "interview" may have been more apt these days. I also felt the MC should have been at least somewhat suspicious of the job, but then brush it off because they're naïve & desperate. Or Mei to comment it's suspicious to be offered from just a phone call when you ask her to borrow the car. I thinking setting it up as a drug test gig would have been a bit more realistic than a false job offer - does feel a bit nonsensical for such a professional looking business. I'll ignore that NDAs don't protect from illegal actions like randomly drugging an employee. The progress for the MCs invisibility control is alright, understandably you want to get into the meat & potatoes of the concept pretty quick. I'll interested to see where the story goes.

Characters/Writing:
The characters do so far have some interesting but different personalities. As far as the sisters are concerned, they do stand out from each other in both design and dialogue. I imagine as it progress they will get more defined in their characteristics. Strepha certainly seems a tad crazy but in a good way for the story. Also gonna throw a guess out that she's a distant cousin of the MC or something. With that ending I expect the perving to start ramping up and seeing how that unfolds. The MC is alright, I understand the vibe you're going for of him being a bit of loser with a negative self-image and low confidence. It might turns some people off but, hopefully as the story progresses he develops a bit more with it. The writing is pretty natural albeit alittle more sexually charged than actual siblings (which reinforces my thought that they all secret perverts with their shared DNA), got some funny good natured lines.

Visuals:
The renders are nice. I liked the voyeurism/body scan frames, they are well done and do a goodjob hinting at the MCs reaction. Mei best girl so far, her introduction was fun which made her likable straight away. The books in Dr Jackson office made me laugh, quite on the nose but in a fun way.

 

[13th Son]

The preview screens look awesome, I'm not sure how the invisibility content will be treated in the game, but judging from the planned tags, it doesn't look like this will have anything too dark (like sexual assault or similar), which is a good thing for me.

Looking forward to the next update, which hopefully will contain some actual sexy action.

Yes, nothing too dark. A bit creepy for sure, but no rape or anything like that.

I'm rather new to playing VNs (only completed a handful) so my perspective is from that. I played from the start to the end.

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Thank you for the detailed comments!

 

[13th Son]

Due to Steam/Itch choosing to no longer allow incest games, I will not be able to continue working on this game. It is just not financially viable. I am disappointed because I think this was turning into a really high quality game and I was enjoying the story and characters.

Thank you to everyone who gave me feedback on the demo. I have uploaded a new

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on GoFile, which contains 1700 renders and a handful of animations. Someone with an hour or so of free time may still enjoy playing through it. (If you played the demo, you will need to restart due to my adding/fixing variables.)

 

[Pixieblink]

Due to Steam/Itch choosing to no longer allow incest games, I will not be able to continue working on this game. It is just not financially viable. I am disappointed because I think this was turning into a really high quality game and I was enjoying the story and characters.

Thank you to everyone who gave me feedback on the demo. I have uploaded a new

You must be registered to see the links

on GoFile, which contains 1700 renders and a handful of animations. Someone with an hour or so of free time may still enjoy playing through it. (If you played the demo, you will need to restart due to my adding/fixing variables.)

Change your dialogue, remove incest, tweak your game.

 

[13th Son]

Change your dialogue, remove incest, tweak your game.

I've thought about it, but the family harem was the major fun part of this game. If I remove it the game is just ruined for me. Not to mention the fact that the family bloodline is built into the story so I'd have to rework that. And the idea of trying to sneak it past Steam with redefined relationships, patches, or whatever, I don't want to risk working on this for two years only for Steam to tell me no.

So I think I will just have to go back to the drawing board.