VN - Ren'Py - The Last Picture [v1.1.3] [Boby Boo]

VERSION: 1.1.3
SUMMARY: Not bad, but will need some more time in the oven
RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
4. Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐
5. Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐⭐
6. Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
7. UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐⭐
9. Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐⭐⭐
10. Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐

Average: 34 of 50 possible points giving a 68% rating i.e. 3-4 stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Visually looks fairly good, LIs are attractive
2. General visuals are also good, and scenes look fleshed out
3. Dialogue is structured and reads well, with no bloat.
4. Plot is simple yet intriguing (to some extent)
5. Audio is nice, at least so far as going beyond only music, but sounds can use some work! Least there is a little bit of lewd sounds.

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Some audio really needs work, like the fucking high pitch the MC gets thinking of killing his father, that shit is straight up tinnitus inducing, why use that ?! Also more sounds for ambient, environ, lewd scenes would be nice.
2. Some dialogue makes me do a double take, especially when the writer says something that doesn't completely make sense e.g. when the mother says because the MC is an adult the consequences of what his father can do to him are less severe...thats not really true...but I get what the writer was trying to say. Instead I would have said something like you are not a child anymore, you are a man and your father wont hold back when punishing you like he once did. That conveys the same message but better phrasing.
3. Dialogue can be fairly idiotic and leans heavily on porn logic like when the mother take 2 seconds to get convinced to do erotic photography for her son.
4. Some of the animations are a bit short and it would be nice to have some more angles.

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• There is a bit of an awkwardness to this AVN, things are not refined and some details throw me off, like the eyes, where characters are looking vs where they should be.
• Also when it comes to sounds there will need to be some revision and consideration like the high pitch early scene.
• Animations are rendered fine but sometimes like the scene at the gym look weird, awkward and movements are not correct.

TLDR:

Fairly good overall, can do with a good deal more polish but not bad, LIs look good and the visuals are decent. The audio can use a bit more work around lewd scenes but its not bad. Still a ways to go, but hopeful the developer will improve with time.

Really, really hot characters and situations.

The animations are pretty basic but I don't really care about those. The story and renders are very spicy.

Cum looks a bit mid but you can't have everything.
Game has a lot of potential, I'm interested to see what happens next.

What to say? A game like hundreds before it. The writing isn't great and the animations lack weight and honestly that's one of the most important parts of a game for me since that's the entire "reward".

We get a sex scene early on and it's the classic just sliding in and the woman's body might as well not make contact with the MC. No impact, jiggle, bounce or any of what makes a good sex scene.

Not enough material here to rate above a 3 and that is being generous. The story is barely presented so hard to judge with what little you get whether it is actually good or not. There is one lewd scene. Ummm. Was it just dream sex or was it real? You don't know. As there isn't enough material to actually figure it out. Nice animations. Scene was decent and could have stood to be longer than what it was. Definitely more positions. Sorry can't rate higher with so little to judge it on.