VN - Ren'Py - The Last Star Walker [Ch.3] [Veluxa]

Review for The Last Star Walker (Ch. 3)

Where to start with this one? Unfortunately, The Last Star Walker struggles to deliver on the core elements of a good visual novel (VN), and I’m not sure the developer fully understands what makes a VN tick. A great VN needs both compelling visuals and a well-written script, but in this case, while the visual and audio aspects shine, the script is a hot mess that leaves much to be desired.

Visuals & Music: The Bright Spots

Let’s start with the positives. The renders in this game are beautiful. The character models and environments are clearly the result of a lot of effort, and it’s evident that the developer has spent time making them look appealing. The lighting, textures, and detail in the renders help elevate the experience, and I can give the game credit for that.

The music is also solid. It feels appropriate for the setting and the tone of the scenes, with transitions happening at the right moments to match the changing dynamics. You don’t often feel that awkward jarring shift in music when a scene changes, so credit where credit’s due here as well.

The Script: Where Things Fall Apart

Now, onto the real issue—the script. The Last Star Walker reads like a collection of random ideas jotted down on index cards rather than a cohesive, flowing narrative. After three chapters, I still have no idea where the story is going. The world-building is unclear, and there’s a distinct lack of character development or logical progression. It's hard to get invested in a plot that doesn’t seem to have direction.

The narrative shifts between two worlds—one sci-fi and one medieval—which could have been interesting, but they’re both underdeveloped, and I’m still unsure how they tie together. There’s a mention of a device in the sci-fi world that might link to the medieval one, but it's never explained clearly. Instead of fueling intrigue, the plot just leaves you confused and frustrated.

Character Choices: Meaningless and Confusing

The game starts by asking you to choose a name for your character and whether you want to play a dominant or submissive MC. You’d think these choices would impact how your character behaves or interacts in the story, but they don’t. I chose “More Dominant,” expecting my MC to act accordingly, but in the first few chapters, it’s clear that the MC’s behavior is pretty much the same regardless of the choice. Especially when it comes to the sex scenes with futa/trans content, where the MC is constantly being dominated, even if you’ve chosen a dominant option.

This issue becomes even more glaring when you opt for the default name “Kai.” In this case, you aren’t asked about dominance or submission, nor are you given the chance to name your alter-ego. This suggests that the choices you make at the start have zero impact on the story or how your character is portrayed.

The Characters: Underdeveloped & Disjointed

Kai (in the sci-fi world) is a complete "soy boy" cliché, which, okay, but the character development is stagnant at best. Meanwhile, Sai (in the medieval world) acts with more confidence and decisiveness, but you’re still treated like garbage in both universes. It seems like the choices you made about your MC's personality don’t matter at all—whether you’re supposed to be dominant or submissive, you’re just going to be treated poorly no matter what.

The interactions with other characters also feel stiff and unengaging. There’s no real chemistry, and the dialogue feels forced. With both worlds being underdeveloped and the MC’s role in them unclear, it’s hard to invest in the relationships or the story.

Slow Burn? More Like a Non-Starter

I’m all for a slow-burn story, but after three chapters, I still don’t know what’s going on or where things are headed. The updates feel short, and there’s no clear indication of progression, making it feel like we’re stuck in a perpetual build-up with no payoff. I would have been fine with a slow-burn story if there was something to grab onto, some spark of intrigue, or a coherent narrative thread. But after three chapters, all I’m left with is confusion.

Conclusion: Potential Wasted

The potential for The Last Star Walker is definitely there—beautiful visuals, good music, and the seed of an interesting concept—but the game falters when it comes to delivering an engaging narrative and meaningful character choices. The lack of a clear plot, coupled with the nonsensical character decisions and unpolished writing, drags the game down significantly.

Between the broken MC choices at the start and a script that feels like it’s going nowhere, this game loses 2.5 stars right off the bat. Since we can’t rate half-stars, I’m settling on 2 stars. I would love to see this game get the rewrite it needs, as it could be so much better with a more focused script and better execution of the player’s choices. As it stands, I can’t recommend it unless you're okay with a confusing mess of a story.

I wouldn't waste your time with this one.

It clearly wants to be a SciFi version of another game, with it's opening dark tone setting scene, but doesn't have any of the chops to write interesting characters or a setting, let alone bother to really explain the later.

It wants to throw lots of acronyms and organization names at you without explaining what they are, and also seems to want to have a philosophical theme to it that it can't possible hope to express properly.

Top that off with the fact that the first sex scene very early on was a futa woman trying to make me suck her dick, despite me choosing that I am a dominant personality and thankfully that was skippable right before the act, this one is a massive pass.

Oh right, unless the idea of Doctor Disrespect being a scientist and lecturing you on all the "hard to grasp" concepts at play is a big turn on for you. Then, by all means, go nuts.

This is a gorgeous game. Unfortunately I can't handle the pace, it's just to slow. I find myself spamming the spacebar as the story slowly unfolds sentence by sentence. If I overdo it I miss the plot, but if I don't I get bored waiting for the story to unfold. Mind you, there is plenty of sexual stuff, it's the speed of the actual story that I'm criticising.
Maybe more text per page? Or just faster paced writing? But that's just me. This might be great for everyone else. The art is sexy.

Really awesome graphics and extremely well done futa femdom scenes.

The lore and worldbuilding also shapes up to be pretty robust with really hot characters.

The story telling can be a bit confusing in the beginning though, but after chapter 3 drops it seems to start becoming clearer where it is headed.

[ch.3 review]

pros:
- Top notch sissy and futa scenes
- Hottest sex talk I've seen in a game
- Nice renders
cons:
- Story is meh, but it's skippable so whatever

5/5, can't wait to see where the Nyxi route goes

Translation made with Google Translate, too lazy to convert everything lol
In my opinion the game is good, it is not a great masterpiece but it is not bad either.

History:
The biggest problem with the story is that it's quite confusing.
I treated it as two separate stories since they don't overlap at the moment—one was Jack and the other Max—and I treated it as two different stories that would eventually come together. This made me think it made more sense if you tried to understand how one worked from the beginning. I think it was a mistake.

And even doing so, it's somewhat confusing, mainly because of the lack of explanations. For example, in the technological world, there seem to be many time jumps, and at the same time, there aren't. At first, it seems like it's about joining the Legion, which is like the army, but it quickly becomes more like you're going it alone for revenge, and then it seems like you're returning to the fold, as you can see. It's confusing.
The magic one is less confusing, but the concept of how the world works isn't explained very well. It's the one with the least story so far.

Renders:
The renders, in my opinion, are very good. I think they're above average. There aren't many scenes. I think there were 8, and the futa/trans is optional. I watched everything, and there were 3 futa/trans scenes. They also ask you at the beginning if you're more submissive or dominant.
The first game I played as dominant without futa/trans, and the second as submissive with futa/trans. The truth is that at least those 3 scenes were very well written, quite hot, and it was a futadom. It also includes optional feminization and some humiliation that I think is not optional because she is dominant.
The vanilla scenes were okay, but nothing special to write home about.

Summary:
The story has potential, but right now it's confusing. If you read it slowly, it's more or less understandable and you put the pieces together, but it's still confusing.

The renderings, in my opinion, are above average, and the sub/futa/trans scenes seem very hot.

Overall, I'd say give it a chance and try to learn a little about the story if you're only interested in the scenes. I think they're hot enough and well-done enough to be worth downloading.

Versio Ch.3

I personally did like the dialogue. Characters were colorful and sexy. I didn´t notice any annoyance in writing, as the characters were so captivating. The main characters discussed topics that were both relevant and engaging. In some parts, like in sex scenes, writing was superb.
But the story was bad. Way too many characters and every time I thought I knew where things were headed, the plot would keep branching more and more. The constant branching made it hard to stay invested in any of the sexy side characters. It also did feel like nothing gets done.

Visually game is great. All kinds of women and this doppelgänger thing does enable all kinds of sex scenes.

There was options to not see some sex scenes and few random questions, but the game is basically kinetic novel. At least i didn´t feel like i had any say on where the MC is heading for.

It's alright if you like girldick and skip everything in between.
The scenes are not too short or too long with "some" roleplay involved so they are actually quite nice.

Don't bother with the story tho.

Deserved 2 stars, 3 is because it's funny to watch people having seizure over the presented tags.

Love the premise, only waiting for the next part to see the story really taking shape . But renders are really beautiful, the sci-fi (which is never easy) appears to be well thought of and the characters all seem to have a goal in mind themselves.

Version ch.2

Well... the only good thing that this game have is the renders, they are very good.... the end.

Other than that if you ignore kid ken doll mc.

Start was interesting with alter egos etc. but it goes downhill from there, the writing isnt bad but story is a complete mess for 80% of it i didnt even know wtf is going on and why its going on .

For 4 scenes we have 2 that are futa/trans where mc changes to a princess, not my thing i gueess

So to sumarize, Story is a mess, the renders are very good, as of ch.2 there is zero animations, the medival segment was good and the only thing i enjoyed, it had some sense.

Only renders are adequate, plot is incoherent mess. What even is going on? Kinks unlike what has been said by the dev are unavoidable i.e if you choose no it happens in the background you just don't see it.

Review for Ch. 2

I don't even say this to be mean, but the game is actually a bunch of fever-dream nonsense carried by nice looking models and renders. Reading the overview kinda clues you in on a few aspects, but it's just handled so badly that you really don't have any idea what's going on most of the time. Maybe could have bumped it up a star but the game includes a shitty rape plot point involving a random love interest that was, well, shitty. Not to mention a bizarre Dr. Disrespect character/reference? A guy partially known for *checks notes* cheating on his wife and messaging a minor. Irrelevant to the grand scheme of things here, but it helps paint a picture I think.

The writing is just not good and nauseously cheesy at the best of times. I'm going to try and describe the plot a bit so bare with me as I try to parse out what I played. Which is tough because the game rarely uses coherent transitions, is filled with time skips, and tells you basically nothing about anything. You start in the "Terra" realm as a meek nerdy genius? It seems you're a candidate to be recruited into some secret special forces team. The game introduces another candidate whose suppose to be this stereotypical sweetheart innocent love interest that for some reason the MC seems to fall in love with despite having a loving girlfriend already (I think, the game never specifies who she actually is). You're then given some sort of introduction tour and then sent home with twenty four hours to decide if you want in or not. You leave with that aforementioned love interest, suddenly get assaulted by thugs with the heavily implied rape of the love interest, and then knocked out.

Cut over to the other realm or whatever it is. We take control of our other half? Dude I can't tell you what the deal was with anything that happens in this segment. Someone else put it pretty well: it's like two games got mushed into one. Jumping to this segment feels like you loaded a save from some fantasy game and have no idea what's happening because you never seen the intro. There's a random fight scene, a random sex scene, another fight scene, and then the MC is seemingly killed here too.

Jump back to the other world. You awake from a coma. There's some nonsense I skipped over, you see the love interest who got raped is in some mental facility with black hair now instead of her original hair color (lol) and the MC freaks out. Couple time skips? He joins a specialist team for something I can't even remember and starts to turn into some cheesy badass, or an attempt at one.

Idk man, I started to give up towards the end. It's a bit of a shame because the game uses some pretty unique assets and looks good and everything (outside of some ridiculous proportions here and there). There's some fetish content stuffed in here that I'm sure some people will like but nothing is animated and the sex dialogue kind of feels like word soup. How good a game looks just does not make up for bad writing for me personally.

False advertisement honestly. This is a fully fledged Futa/Trans Sissification AVN with a story more worthless than a porn plot.

It has two MCs, one is a sissy bitch who gets his love interest watch get raped in front of him. I mean what else would you expect, mf wears lipstick and mascara. My mum is more of a man than this bitch.

The other MC is however quite studly, with a physique even Zeus would be jealous of, and a dick as big and long as a freshwater Coho Salmon in winter. But that's manly at least and therefore workable.

Either MC's story is absolutely a convoluted piece of garbage:

The twink MC sucks his futa teach's titties, and then sees his LI get raped and the thugs bonk him, and that initiates a timeskip. After the timeskip, he emerges as a fully-fledged sissy twink, but this time, with a vengeance. Spoiler Alert: He's too much of a sissy twink to do anything.

The Chad McThunderCock MC's story begins during the timeskip, without any background or backstory or exposition of any kind. At least the girls he interacts with are hot elves. After a steamy sex scene (that comes out of nowhere) with the only non-elf girl in the entire thing, this MC fuckin dies, from some bandits attacking (I don't know if he comes back later, I didn't have the strength to continue after seeing that twink wear fucking mascara and lipstick). And the funny thing is, I was starting to like this AVN.

But no, after all, this is a sissification AVN. So there it is: 5 stars if you are a twink that loves futa. -5 stars if you barf at it. Overall score 5-5=0 stars.

Excellent graphics... and that's it, the "story" is confusing, jumping between scenes without giving much explanation of the context or how it got there, it's clear that it's a game that looks for an excuse to show sex (like many) but it fails to capture or justify this, finally I have to mention that, despite it saying it's avoidable, the futa IN male and sissi content is not totally avoidable, since this game focuses a lot on that, to the point that the scenes where this content is placed are forced, the dev surely tried to put those scenes but didn't know how to integrate them in an organic way.

Recommended only for those who like a weak MC, poorly thought out plots and content focused on big futas and small MC.

English:............9/10
User Interface:.....7/10
User Experience:....6/10
Art:................8/10
Dialogue:...........3/10
Story:..............3/10
Opinion:............2/10................
Avg:.............5.43/10 [2.71/5]

I played the "pre-remake" immediately before this latest version to see the differences. From the initial release, I can confidently say that this game needed (or still might need) a full on rewrite, if not just scrapping it altogether. The pre rework was full of ambiguous NOTHINGS. Everyone makes sure to say out loud how cute MC is even though he looks like a cracked out lesbian mannequin named twinkus prime. To which I'll say, I don't mind playing a twink, but commit to the bit if you're doing it. Had a cameo from the pedophile Pediatrician Disrespect. Then hard cuts to another universe with completely different characters just as something happens for no discernable reason. Tell me, I don't like any of the characters from the first universe, have whiplash from jumping to the second and have no time to give a shit out the new people, what is the goal here? There's another game that tries to combine magic with cyberpunk and took 3 years too long to implement both. This one is like "Hmm lets not do that and make it so if you blink you'll miss everything." BOTH of these approaches are wrong. Now, I know full well what they're doing, they're making two contrasting MC's so they can appease everyone. But as literally everyone knows, a game for everyone is a game for no one. Which means they're afraid to commit to a theme, most likely due to the very toxic AVN fandom, which I can sympathize with, but it's still stupid. I have no hope for this so I'm just gonna review it early and be done with it.

The game opens to Veluxa, whoever that is, asking MC and his alter-ego's name, whether you're a dom or sub, and if you want to see Futa content. Because we need a questionairre before every damn game nowadays. And to people like me, that don't have a preference, I have to make a choice on something that isn't even in the game yet for something I know nothing about. Awesome. Then it cuts to people somewhere in a desert fighting about something. No proper nouns. No names. Just "this is an important thing and two nameless groups fought over an underwater statue." A fight with poor choreography, by the way. LT, or whoever(Zara Steele, as I got to her introduction later), because I don't remember her name from later, blocks a stab and somehow twists the attackers wrist in the opposite direction to stab her. Crazy. Followed by MORE nameless people that find the dead body saying more ambiguous nothings to hard cut to MC Twinkus being cradled by his [INSERT MOTHER FIGURE HERE] that looks younger than him somehow. The dialogue has been slightly expanded and edited, from what little I retained, but it's still not saying anything. Like MC talking to Dr. Kim, for no known reason, just to spout more technobabble that cuts away again with no direction or tell as to where or why MC is going somewhere. He just walks around campus to meet Nyxi because she is the first sexual encounter for the player to experience. She's just a Futa with an impossibly large penis and an even tinier miniskirt and underwear, if you didn't click the futa option, THAT'S why the scene is cut short. To abruptly jump to mystery merc headquarters. MC did something that made them interested and now he's here. Notice how I haven't said ONE Proper Noun or Verb yet? Notice how you know nothing? We don't even have a sense of the world we're in yet but they want to make all this "mystery." But the mystery is literally just withholding the information from the player until they decide to enlighten you.

When Major addresses them, again there's some more words added to the dialogue. Like Jax asking about specific guns instead of just guns to fire, but this isn't adding anything for the player to be interested in. Just more "If you couldn't tell by the robot at the start of the game and the android at reception this is a cyberpunk styled story." Then they finally say SOMETHING about the theme of this story. Grace made some presentation you'll never actually see about some sort of opposites that exist somewhere? I guess? No real information, just "please don't get whiplash when we cut to the other story this time." But they decided to keep the line "I miss our old gym teacher" which makes them seem younger and is an out of place line that adds nothing. Shocker. And somehow they Still kept the "Technology isn't perfect double line. Why? Not only did they keep it, but instead of the period being added the "t" is added as well. Meaning they actively did SOMETHING to the line, but didn't fix it. Great job. They also skipped over whatever "wireframe mode" is in context of the story. Suddenly they're in a tunnel with glowing faces for "anonymity." You can tell so many of these choices are just made to look "cyberpunk-y." And they kept the pedophile in the game. Wow. Can't commit to a theme but can commit to having him in the game. Ugh. His scene is to introduce unobtanium-- I mean Impenetratium. A mystery material that's harder than diamond. Hard cut to the platform scene where MC and Grace are attacked for unkown reasons by unknown people only for it to cut to the story about magic and opposite world. The only note I have on this scene is it's not made apparent that Grace is on the phone so it just seems like she's talking to nothing. While I'm glad I don't have to see the pose where the model is holding onto a phone without actually holding it, there has to be a better way to telegraph what she's doing.

In the new world, they establish a new language for some reason and only half translate it. Again, why? Everyone here speak the language so it's not like there's a barrier for anyone involved. It's also another planet so it would be assumed by anyone above a second grade level that they speak another language. Immediately they establish that there's magic here and that's about it. Something about half-breeds, the antagonist walks up just to be a dick about nothing and the fight ends as if they're kids fighting on a playground. Then MC2 is taken to a princess to get healed. They throw in these squiggles as if showing you the other language, but also show you the roman alphabet version of the text so I ask AGAIN, WHY? We won't see anything but dialogue, we can't read it, and it can confuse readers. This, at best, should be an option. Suddenly, The queen is MC2's mom, he hallucinated a dancing rat, and they skipped over both MC being healed and whatever conversation he had with the queen. Because if you came here to learn about characters and setting, fuck you, you idiot. Enter a sex scene with Mina after disregarding another character that MC goes home to see, just to leave. CAN WE NOT TELL WHY THIS IS BAD YET? "Hello character, goodbye" You could have just not introduced her. You could have improved your game by doing LESS work. There's also the fact that this otherworld story changed the narrator to be overly descriptive and flowery now? Just make two different stories, my god. And do you remember how they introduced the romance between MC and Mina? NO? Oh, that's right, there wasn't any. They even went out of their way to illustrate that she was a virgin here, so it's their first time. But no buildup, payoff, or anything in between. This is not how you start a story. Don't worry, they're accosted by nameless bandits, the same way MC1 was 10 minutes ago.

The following fight scene is, again, poorly choreographed. The motions are harsh, the narrator's interjections are too verbose to make for an action scene. And trying to build Mina's character mid-fight with her not wanting to hurt the horses is not the time to do it. I screams "Look how caring she is BE IN LOVE WITH HER." Cut to another scene with a character spouting foreboding nothings and... Hard cut back to MC1 in a coma, immediately being breastfed by some bimbo nurse..? There clearly WANTS to be a story, but then you jangle keys for the player. Why? Then a ... Hilarious.. Trump reference. You learn Grace is alive and in a hospital, traumatized. Suddenly MC1 is a battle-hardened alcoholic that demands mommy listens to him? This feels like an overcorrection which makes the theme of opposites null and void. You destroyed the premise of the story probably because a bunch of idiots online pissed and moaned because MC1 "isn't alpha like them." It's so jarring. Why is every plot point and story beat meant to change everything? Suddenly dream invading bimbos that are super spies are here. Dreams that the player wasn't privy to, mind you. Time skips and skipped conversations later, MC is searching for the people that assaulted him. How? No one knows. He's suddenly a cringelord cyberpunk vigilante. I'm so checked out by this point. I can't take anything seriously. No two sections of the story have been connected by anything more than the fact they're in the same renpy project. The characters from the intro? Dust in the wind. MC's earlier life? Completely irrelevant. Otherworld? Complete non sequitur story that has nothing to do with anything. Any connecting threads? No. Why MC1 suddenly got a robotic arm? Don't ask question you stupid gooner, just consume this shit.

This feels like a bunch of disconnected nothings slapped together. Wow, lighting gradients and DOF in the renders. That doesn't fix the fact that the writing is trash. At no point did I get to a scene and think it was in any way connected to the last one. The world itself felt like it changed every scene. Zero consistency, and I don't care. The English was good. The UI is heavily edited, but they changed it so you can't right-click back to the game and you can't access other menus from each other, so I docked a point in UX. The Art looks nice, most of the time, but there's no cohesion. The dialogue tells you nothing except MC wants revenge because of a crush he had for 13 seconds. Oh and there's another world that also exists somehow. The story is absent. As much as the writer wants you to think there's a story, there isn't. I really do not want to play this again, plain and simple. If Cyborg bimbos are your thing, you'll like half of this. If magical mommies are your thing, you'll like the other half. But I doubt you'll like both clashing like this. Unless you've never read something like this before and think this is amazing. I envy that straw man.

The way the story is told is confusing, moving from one scene to another without context., But without a doubt, the worst thing about the game is the MC, no matter what you choose it doesn't change what he says or does, they are just false choices.

Almost no choices, which would be fine, if the plot wasn't overly convoluted and nonsensical. Since this is more of a story than a game, was waiting for the part where i was encouraged to care about what was going on, and it never came.

Review as of CH.1

Definitely potential here. Story seems interesting and renders are great. It was a bit confusing at times though. The part with the rat king was funny but I had absolutely no idea what those scenes were supposed to mean. Felt too nonsensical.

I don't know where you're going with the 2 ego's. It seems like one is gonna be submissive and the other dominant. If that is the case I have to say I wouldn't really like it personally and don't think it would be fun. For people that like both it's fine but for people who like one over the other they would like half and hate the other half of the content.

With Nyxi I wanted to turn the tides with her and put her in her place and was pretty disappointed. While I do appreciate it was avoidable all I could do was just end the scene. Wanna conquer that muscle bitch Axel too. I hope we're not just shoehorned into one side depending on what ego we're playing.

Overall pretty good and hot. 3/5

The Pros:

- Renders
- Characters



The Cons:

- The writing
- MC


For a good part of the release I didn't know what the hell was going on but I went along with it. We started out this beta weakling with a sci-fi setting and turned into Yu-Gi-Oh and became big Yugi but only in a medieval looking setting. The transitions were very poor and the choices didn't seem to matter. Dominant path was still filled with a beta like MC and of course sub and Trans leads to the MC sucking dick and becoming a bottom. I really wish devs would put more time and effort when writing scripts with this sort of content. They make seem as if a guy sucking a dick is as natural as walking and breathing air. There was no build up towards it or even a hint that the Mc is into this sort of stuff... just a trans and dick... and a blowjob.


Might pass on this for while. But good luck to the Dev.

As a futa and muscle girl fan i just have one thing to say about this game:Absolute Cinema
Keeep the good job man this game is amazing,The only thing is that i'am trying to understand The plot because suddenly i change from a characther in The past but apart from that The game is just very good,thanks for making this game man and i hope you keep doing this game