A really really small game. You can finish both the routes in just 15 mins. Can just rename the game to Lewd dead(demo), It was that small. The 3 stars are for the renders. The girls look beautiful. Nothing else other than that. Has a lot of potential, the dev can make it into part 2 and continue the routes
VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The Lewd Deal [v3.0 Full Steam] [Mr.Creep Games]
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smasher_the_smith
Version Reviewed: v3.0 Full Steam
Writing Quality
Story
The story is... not good. The pacing is completely off. The real estate agent jumps from trying to sell you a house to getting in bed with you and/or revealing information no one would reveal until all other options are exhausted within a few lines of dialog. And it's extremely short. I think I was done with both paths in under 15 minutes. Even if you read slowly and replay scenes or sex positions multiple times I doubt anyone gets more than a hour out of this game.
It's a shame too, because the married/corruption route has so much potential. It checks almost all of the boxes for a game I have been looking for forever. Evil husband and wife who blackmail or force another woman into sexual submission? Check. The wife physically forces the other woman to take it? Check. The woman is doesn't enjoy it and doesn't suddenly develop a Stockholm Syndrome like love for being dominated? Check. BDSM on an unwilling woman? Check (sort of, more on this in a moment). Anal sex? Check. Only things missing are ATM and the guy inviting a few buddies to help fill all her holes. These are all things very rare to find around here.
But it doesn't really do anything with it. The blackmail starts and resolves in like 10 lines of dialog taking place in one scene. You get a single sex scene from this. Then it sets up the BDSM part and ends. Such a let down.
The bachelor/seduction route is equally bad for similar reasons. Worse in some ways, like a sexy cop letting the MC off with essentially a warning after a street race turned into a high speed pursuit and ended with a roadblock.
Dialog
The dialog is fine. Average I would say. The only things that stood out as being truly bad were related to the pacing being bad. The wife's lines at the start about letting her husband fuck other woman so long as she was the only one he loved was actually quite good. Felt like something a real couple who were this messed up and had these kinks might say.
Grammar (English)
The grammar was fine. Not great, but not terrible like so many games. This certainly wasn't "Engrish". Not enough spelling mistakes or poorly worded sentences to distract me from the game.
Models, Animations, Renders, and Audio
The models and renders are top notch. You won't a bunch of grainy renders like so many games have. The renders are probably top 5% of games, maybe higher.
Both of the women are beautiful with good proportions. No rediculous N-cup or larger breasts (although they both have larger breasts than is likely for their frame size) and no asses that make dump trucks jealous. Even the MC is good looking. He is in shape but not muscular and doesn't have a face that makes you want to punch it.
Sex Scenes
The sex scenes are pretty meh. The do give you a good number of choices of sex acts or positions for each scene, but there's like one animation for each path and it isn't even one where it shows penetration. Everything else is handled by having you click through each frame. That would have been fine back in the days before 2020 when most games did that, but the bar has been raised.
The narrative and dialog of the married/corruption route sex scene is pretty good. Could have been better but good enough.
Audio
The only audio is the music. It's fine. It's not super distracting like so many AVN tracks. Music is very subjective so I'm sure some people hate it and some love it.
Sex Scene Content
There is only two sex scenes; one for each path. Three if you count the dream sequence but she only holds your dick in that, nothing happens.
That said, since both paths are very short the sex scene to dialog ratio is well balanced. Given the story, things really should have been drawn out more before you get to fuck her but you won't be bored if you're playing the game mostly for sex scenes.
Conclusion
Another game that squanders so much promise. Since it is so short it is worth a quick play through for the married/corruption route given that it is a very rare thing to find in AVNs, but I don't think it is worth playing outside of that. -
L3z1l3
Very nice renders but the story, especially on the romance route is very banal.
At lease in this short format. In a normal length game it could have been built up and the romance could have been developed which might have made it more ok, though the end of the race with the cop was too unrealistic no matter what.
The corruption/dominance/bdsm route was much more interesting. I wouldn't mind seeing a full game like that. -
TonyMurray
The renders looked great and it promises two modes of gameplay, or rather, two paths - there's a love/romance route and a fetish/corruption route. Having played both routes, I would say that, realistically, there isn't any love, romance, fetish, or corruption to speak of in the game. For all of them, the main reason is that there just isn't enough time to develop anything.
I'd guess there's about half an hour of gameplay across both paths combined, so when I say there's no time for anything to build, I mean it. It makes the sex scene, of which there is just that one per path, pretty meaningless. You get a bunch of options during the two sex scenes, which allow you to change position, but otherwise, once you choose your path at the start of the game, it's basically a kinetic novel.
The graphics do look good, and both the girls are beautiful (if using models familiar from other games). Sadly, only the realtor really does anything, with the wife's role reduced to just a blowjob and pretty much just being there while you have sex with the realtor. -
flaviopaganini
Review made on the version released on Steam.
The game in question is essentially a kinetic experience, meaning there are no choices that impact the narrative. Achievements are unlocked automatically as the player progresses through the scenes, without the need for specific actions beyond advancing the plot.
The only choice the player makes at the beginning is whether to start married, which leads to the formation of a throuple with the real estate agent, or single, where the protagonist ends up having an affair with the agent. Beyond that, there are no significant variations in the story's development.
The game also offers the option to modify the erotic scenes, allowing players to customize or adjust the experience according to their preferences. This adds a level of control for those who wish to alter or even remove these moments.
However, the narrative includes some absurdities that require a significant suspension of disbelief. At certain points, the story takes unexpected or exaggerated turns, which may feel odd to players who prefer a more cohesive and realistic plot.
Despite its short length—taking only about 15 minutes to complete—the narrative and graphics are of high quality, offering a visually appealing and engaging experience. However, for those expecting more interactivity or a more coherent story, the game might disappoint. It feels more like an interactive movie than a traditional game.
If you're looking for a quick experience with impressive graphics and a story that doesn't take itself too seriously, it might be worth a try. Otherwise, the lack of choices and narrative absurdities may be frustrating.
