VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Lifeguard [Ep.2 Fix] [RaJa]

I don't write many reviews, but try out a lot of VNs. In the first couple minutes of playing this, I realized its basically a porno turned into a VN.
"Hey how are you? Great. You? Great. Wanna shag?"
Nothing wrong with this to be honest, sometimes you just want something to fap to, and not have to read all that much. Many of the scenes, the lighting is too dark, and its hard to make out details. But I noticed as I progressed through the current content, the lighting was improved, especially .
The female characters are attractive, especially the more mature ones. These are 4 star IMO. I also love swim suits, of all kinds. Huge fetish of mine. This delivers.
The dark lighting is 2 stars.
The story? I don't really care about. I read really fast, so I blast through it and don't skip. Ill forget it in a week, but whatevers.
I enjoyed what I played, and if the lighting is improved and story never gets much in the way of the .. action .. Ill look forward to future releases. Can never have enough swimsuits. I took the time to review this, where I don't for 95% of what I play. Id like to see this improved and I hope the creator listens to my feedback.
2 stars for lighting , 4 for characters and 5 for swimsuits.
If I could give it 3.5 stars I would.

Needs lots of work. I encountered several error screens, then when I tried to join in on the threesome, I was told to leave. Then at the end of the second chapter I found myself in some room with the ability to click on random objects. Then I went through the dialogue that I assume was for the threesome with Monique and CJ. Just the dialogue. Then if you scroll back you get kicked to the title screen.

PROS
Models are sexy
Story is average

CONS
Several error codes(I couldn't copy them)
The above mentioned end of content stuff
Writing needs some attention

Overall
Honestly if the error screens were fixed, and the end of current update was addressed then this would be a pretty good VN. The writing needs some polishing, but it's understandable. The story is different so it gets points for that.
I will recommend this VN. Even though it has issues, there is a lot of content for an Episode 2.
Good luck to the dev and I'll keep an eye out for this in the future.

The game runs the risk of being judged below value.

While the first scenes in the swimming pool are graphically rather below average and the first contacts with girls reach the usual "meet & fuck" level, the game later rises to top form.

The characters act convincingly, the variety of variations and ramifications is above average. You can play through the game several times and still discover new paths and branches.

All in all, very promising. I'm really looking forward to the next episodes.

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For an initial release it is pretty good.
For the good side: the characters act more alive, the girls look nice and it's good to see every girl is not a straight up slut. The story looks ok at the moment.
For the bad side: There is no sound in the game. Not much content at the moment.