VN - Others - Completed - The logic of the miniature garden [Final] [Cabbit]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    Sinphil

    PROS
    -Flow chart is an interesting concept and allows you to jump to different forks easily.
    -keys and blocks allow story to unfold systematically and work well with flow chart.
    -story and MOST side arcs are great (a couple are weak but bearable)
    -some quirky characters that are interesting as they develop.
    -cute anime style.

    CONS
    -Terrible translation and constantly having to retranslate in head by context. The like/love you most makes it sound like they all have harems lol.
    -the romance sex writing is terrible, the MC is beyond shy and insensitive but gets laid first date every time regardless that they all virgins and backgrounds
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    -Even with R18 patch mosaics.
    -A lot of long winded inane dialogue that does not develop story or characters.

    When dialogue in H scenes so cringeworthy you skip the fap content you have to say its a fail as erotic game despite the great overall story and the great flowchart concept.