VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - The Loving Son [v0.8] [17MOONKEYS]

An incredibly juicy and erotic experience from start to finish. The game absolutely nails the futa genre—models are undeniably hot, dialogues hit exactly the right tone, and the scene detailing makes every moment feel deliciously immersive. The stepmother character in particular is irresistibly appetising, and the legacy of previous entries is definitely alive here.


My only complaint? It’s short—about half an hour of content (v0.8)—but honestly, that just reflects how engaging it is; you don’t want it to end. If you enjoy futa stories where powerful, well-built women pack some serious heat between their legs, this is absolutely your kind of game.


5 stars from me—eagerly awaiting the next update.

A quite short visual novel.
There are no choices to be made.
The dialogue is very awkward.
I am a fan of the character designs, but that's about all there is to say that is positive.
Animation would go a long way to make this a lot sexier.

I liked this game. The stepmother looked really appetising. I always like this kind of futa stories. My only complaint about the game is that it's short but of course that's not a reason to deduct points. If you want to see a thick wood between the legs of a woman with big tits, this game is for you.

v0.8

Look, you gotta come into this “game” with very simple expectations. You go in, get some character introductions and story. Then you choose how to fuck and then you do the sex. This “Game” could have been just a long form animated gif or what have you.

But if you do want a quickie, i would recommend you to download this. After all, the renders are really great, models are as well and the animation is decent enough.

This is pretty unabashedly a pure smut game. You start the game, there's curvy futa mommies, you do the sex. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, just a mindset to enter going and and where this review will come from, along with consideration of the dev asking for honest feedback.

However, even with that mindset though this has some exceptionally robotic dialogue that hampers the smuttery a lot. Characters tend to just sorta.. list things, like instead of a raw emotional expression of like "God his body makes me so hot" or whatever it'll throw shit out like "His young body is very beautiful and sexy, and his broad shoulders, muscles, delicate skin, and sweet smell drive me crazy". Like someone might express all that over a whole dialogue, but no one lists it all out in a single sentence stream of consciousness like they're reading a label. Or if they're not doing that then they're speaking overly clinically about how they're "sexually attracted" or listing out penile anatomy zones. Nothing really feels emotional or steamy but more like aliens trying to convince you to fuck a sexdoll.

If English isn't the dev's first language then that's unfortunate as there's not much they can do about it, but yeah it is nonetheless a big critique for what should be steamy smut. If nothing else can be done and you feel at your limit here, I would honestly advise just prompting an AI as an erotic literature editor and have it help revise your scripts.

That aside though, the content, visually, is super hot if you're into it's fetishes, and the renders are actually pretty alright with good character sculpting, posing, and situations. Special note for the weighty breasts that actually experience gravity when a girl lays on her back that so few games get right. So the dev is putting some effort where it counts the most.

If it was just an image gallery I'd probally give it a 4 or 5, but as a more total package taking advantage of the combined mediums that make up a VN, I'd say a solid 'average' is fair. You can get a good fap out of it, but it's not really a game you'll keep installed after.

Very Very JUICY....I was very disappointed after it ended, everything about the game is juicy and erotic if you like this futa genre. The legacy of previous games is retained, models are hot, dialogues are hot, scene detailing is great. The only thing is that it ended soon, about half hour content (v0.8). Overall 5 stars from me, very excited for the upcoming updates.

So, the good: renders are really good quality (as with your other games), the condoms seem a bit weird/unrealistic, but overal very good. The setting / kinks are right up my alley, so no complaints here.
Something to think of: I understand, this is supposed to be a short novel, but a little bit of introduction, some more info about the characters would be good. Not rushing so quickly to the sex.
I will definitely keep an eye on this one.

I love your art work and stories. This one is hot although it feels like we're jumping into the middle of the story a bit, needs more of a build up. I'm not against the 3 some idea, but I'd also prefer the son and mom to have some time alone.
The animations dont feel quite right to me, im not expert but I felt they pulled me out of the experience a little, something about the blurring between frames or not enough frames to make it smooth or something.
But over all I cant wait for more, I'm a big fan of all your work, keep it up!

Visual : 6.5/10 - it's good without being incredible, high potential, need more details in scenes and better lighting.

Story/Dialog/Writing : 3.7/10 - too fast to sex, i'v seen better ratio Story/Sex scene in porn. The sex scene a part of the story, not the opposite.

High potenial and rare type of sex but if you don't want to make a story, just do short comics.

Very Hot , great side story to futanari universe, would kill to have family like Bianca. Fran is very clever girl. Can't wait to see more. Also nice sex to story ratio why more fun . Its up to par or surpassed UFO when mommy drills his ass with that thicc cock.