does anyone know why some scenes have this weird rainbow swirl, that happens during sex scenes?
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Tyrranus
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because people act totally rationally when theyre scared shitless and powerless.... which is what olivia has been for years now. She knows shes out of her depth, tottally overpowered, and shes scared shitless of repercussions.... generally people dont make the best life choices when living like that.
She also knows she didnt and thats adding guilt to the whole thing eating her alive
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my theory on that is that its the MC's "magical superpower" influencing the women on his dick at the point of him or her climaxing
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Oh I know. I just find it odd that people consider her NOT screwing your brother to be NTR. Then again, I've seen people freak out because in an incest game, where you're screwing your mother - it turns out she's not a virgin so .... I mean I'm anti-NTR. I don't like sharing, or swinging, or cheating but I also know where babies come from, and I don't think a woman who you see for a weekend every 6 months having other relationships is all that weird (especially since the two times she was actually with your brother, instead of other women, was before you met.) It seems like GOA did his best to make it clearly not NTR ("Yes she was with your brother, twice, but before you met and since then no other dicks but yours") and people freak out anyway.
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dude there was a game where a girl that was in the same classroom, no actual name, generic character model was turned into a 'public toilet' and the NTR spazes lost their shit.... you literally never said a single word to this generic girl and the one thought you have about her was that you never liked her much
these zealots will reeee on anything and the ones on the other size of the fetish are just as bad
The MC changes his hair in ch2, Yenna makes a comment about it. In my rush to fix some renders for releases, I may have forgotten to change the hair back. Oops.
What has been done will be done again;
There is nothing new under the sun.
I don't mind tropes and cliches, life is full of them. My hope is I am offering an alternative from the regular VNs that follow the harem trope where there is 50 girls and the MC humps all of them. There is nothing wrong with that, I enjoy those games, but there is a hole in AVNs for something a bit more substantive story wise. I will do my best to achieve that for those who want something more.
I'm a beginner when it comes to graphics. I have come along way in 12 months and I have a long way to go. I'm the first to admit that. TLC will remain a work in progress for some time.
Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate it.
I don't take the criticism personal. The fact these people come here to F95, get a developing game for free, and expect a AAA masterpiece just makes me laugh.
Some of the criticism I have brought on myself like the Livvy character and story line. I knew that was going to upset some people, but I want to create something that pushes boundaries and people will go WTF and then go oh, that makes more sense when they discover something completely different is going on.
It's important to me that the story make sense. Magic is cool and I love it, but I don't like it when magic gets overused as a reason. Jacinta tells the courier, when people ask questions just tell them it is magic. I want more to it, for example, the Fell's ability is not just magic, it is too easy. Sarissa, on her path, asks Lydia why do you appear different to everyone else using mage sight. There is a story there as to how and why the Fell can do what they do and why no other assassins can do it.
Sorry, I got a little carried away.
Yes, it designates an orgasm. I thought it was cool at the time. In hindsight maybe not. I was just looking to do something a little different. If enough people say they don't want it, I'll remove them. it's not a big deal. I just like to try and do something different on occasion. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't.
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Or they'll go "What? Why isn't Livvy on the Lis list?!!? Waaaaah.
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Really? Huh... and here I was thinking I was going big brain with my idea.
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I could tell you what happens to her but I won'tOr they'll go "What? Why isn't Livvy on the Lis list?!!? Waaaaah.
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Side LIs, definitely more to come.
The story is written, but not locked in stone. Originally, it was just to be the 5 LIs and then as the story progressed I added in solo and harem options because I saw a realistic route for them. I'm not opposed to more LIs, but I would need to see a path where they would work. The other thing is fitting them in with the size of the game. If I have to end up splitting the game, then there will definitely be more LIs.
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Cool, just checking. I honestly don't know which path I was on yet - I don't hate any of them but there are some I'm not sure I see as Lis. I just wondered if that was everyone because it's easier to think about what I want to do / what path I want to be on if I know what the options are.
One of the good things about AVNs as opposed to real life is that you can jump back in time whenever you like and change decisions you made.
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Welp! Then allow me to be the 1st.... ahem. What? Why isn't she on the LI list?!!? I understood the situation. I got over the hump of the whole brother thing, just to find this out? She was cool, I was cool, we were cool. I thought me and her were moving on. Expanding our horizons. Going to conquer kingdoms and stuff together. You know? Living the real Lusanti dream.Or they'll go "What? Why isn't Livvy on the Lis list?!!? Waaaaah.
Now to learn it's all over. My hopes and dreams dashed! Like an egg you left on the counter that you thought was flat, but had a slight lean to it. So it rolled off while you weren't looking. You happy now Grumpy? My hopes are like that egg!
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Yep. She was the only Li I was sure about. I'm sad about Gwen but I was never sold on her. I like Yenna but I don't know if I'm going to be able to make the transition to seeing her as a Li, Charlotte is nice - still completely undecided about her, Jacinta and Sarissa I'm kind of leaning against, Lydia we haven't spent much time with but she's sort of in front by default at this point - like when people ask for volunteers and all but one of them take a step back. Livvy was way out in front and then Aussie decided to do something( ??
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Great update GOA, full chapter, that's no joke.
The stuff with Gwen really worked for me. Now can't wait (hope) to fuck everything and everyone involved up in whatever capacity MC will be able to, gods angels demons cultists fate prophecies whatever.
Given MC's character, who knows if/how it'll happen, but seeing the kind of people that are gathering around him, I could see this kind of route opening, with Sarissa and Jacinta being the boom-boom girls, Lydia getting blackmail material on everyone, Yenna being...something probably OP and the last being...Slutty Charlie ? Guess that "Might" path isn't here just for shit and giggles. So they're probably the 5 thingies the prophecy speaks of and with enough incentive for each of them, it could go a lot of ways.
Yeah, a good Franck Castleing to the plot, hmmm. I like wholesome stuff also.
Oh btw, could it be possible to add a paragraph about the prophecy in the codex ? Like maybe just a repeat of what Sarissa reads or what the Divine says to Yenna or something, for 'memberberries purposes. Or I can just find thoses parts again I guess eh.
The stuff with Gwen really worked for me. Now can't wait (hope) to fuck everything and everyone involved up in whatever capacity MC will be able to, gods angels demons cultists fate prophecies whatever.
Given MC's character, who knows if/how it'll happen, but seeing the kind of people that are gathering around him, I could see this kind of route opening, with Sarissa and Jacinta being the boom-boom girls, Lydia getting blackmail material on everyone, Yenna being...something probably OP and the last being...Slutty Charlie ? Guess that "Might" path isn't here just for shit and giggles. So they're probably the 5 thingies the prophecy speaks of and with enough incentive for each of them, it could go a lot of ways.
Yeah, a good Franck Castleing to the plot, hmmm. I like wholesome stuff also.
Oh btw, could it be possible to add a paragraph about the prophecy in the codex ? Like maybe just a repeat of what Sarissa reads or what the Divine says to Yenna or something, for 'memberberries purposes. Or I can just find thoses parts again I guess eh.
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Imma throw my 2 bits into the ring for olivia being at least a side piece. She has that comfortable BFF youve known forever vibe that makes for a great LI or side girl. Yall seem to think the corpse at the end is gwen and Ill be pissed if it IS her but at the same time I kinda agree with the 'not totally sold on her' crowd too. The good news is, if shes the dead one, I have less to worry about with preggo content for a while!