VN - Ren'Py - The Manor: Whispers of Lust [v0.1a] [Dr. Lustwell]

Great start ! I really like the art style. And also its good to have an old MC , a lot of games nowadays have only shota MC which is shit and boring! Hoping this game will get consistent updates ! Good luck dev..

The faces all look the same and the bodies only have very small differences. The game lasts about five minutes and feels more like a short prologue that mostly repeats what you already know from the overview, not even a demo. I don’t see the point of releasing it at this stage. For now, it’s a 1* for me.

Even though many people may not like it for having an older man as the main protagonist, I actually really like how it looks; it clearly has Doctor Bones’ style. As long as it keeps a consistent rhythm and uses similar types of fun situations for the scenes without forcing anything, it seems like a project worth following in future updates.
My only suggestion would be to give the girls a bit more personality, because I feel they not only look too similar, but also act too similarly. Giving them more distinct traits would help make each girl feel unique.