VN Ren'Py The Martin Experiment [Alpha v24.10.23] [The Martin Experiment]

[only MILF]

What elements do you think would make my cliffhangers feel more rewarding?
I’d like to understand more about what a satisfying cliffhanger looks like to you.

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I'm about to post a new public version on Monday, the 28th, featuring the very first cutscene completed by the new artist (not Luichemax; it's another one).

I don't want to spoil the surprise before Monday, but I really want to share these results, even though it's just another micro update. It's very hard to find 2D artists where I live, even harder to find one who is familiar with visual novels, and even more challenging to find one who is willing to learn how to draw for a game project. We had a lot of back-and-forth to get things working and to bring out the best in his work, and the effort is finally bearing fruit.

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I hope you all like the new art style, because it’s how the game will look from now on. I get a little embarrassed when I think about my experience with Luichemax. I rushed everything, and in the end, I felt scammed, but I learned a lot from it, so I’m grateful. Now I know how to write contracts and conduct things more professionally. The new artist has just a couple of hours of free time, but he really delivers the drawings, so the project keeps flowing. I’m happy with it.

Wish you all the best.

 

[Okboomer1235]

Could you update the post?

 

[number500]

Could you update the post?

Hey! There you go: Alpha v24.10.23
Android:

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PC:

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(I just asked for an update here)



Another thing, could you guys check out these pages and let me know what you think?
I put a lot of effort into making the texts engaging to draw more interest to the project. Just need to know if I’m on the right track, and how I can improve!

Here are the pages I've edited so far:

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Thanks so much for the help!

 

[anthony9915]

+1

 

[GafD]

Hey! There you go: Alpha v24.10.23
Android: Workupload -

You must be registered to see the links

PC: Workupload -

You must be registered to see the links

(I just asked for an update here)



Another thing, could you guys check out these pages and let me know what you think?
I put a lot of effort into making the texts engaging to draw more interest to the project. Just need to know if I’m on the right track, and how I can improve!

Here are the pages I've edited so far:

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

Thanks so much for the help!

is that a new version ?

 

[AHonisch]

interesting description and reviews, so lets try

 

[funny feller]

"In tip-top physical condition and sparkling mental health, his hobby is studying the girls around him. And perhaps someday, he may be destined to save us, or even the whole world!"

you will be missed extra hot lady design and clothes
you will not be missed monkey faces

 

[tretch95]

Dude. This update is like 10 seconds long

 

[Javichu]

where are the keys?

 

[Javichu]

or the soap?

 

[TwoHeavens]

Dude. This update is like 10 seconds long

the old artist quit. pretty sure they redid all the art and everything. but idk i havent played the update yet.

 

[FeropsisFenarue]

This game reminds me of the old Kings Quest or Monkey Island type adventures. In that it wastes your time pretty well, and not in a good way.

 

[LEAGEND_IN_GAME]

The art style looks really good

 

[LEAGEND_IN_GAME]

I think im try this game

 

[Nameless Ghoul]

Yeah quality of new art is questionable

 

[Gundamu0079]

who's this mowgly looking ass mofo

 

[tretch95]

the old artist quit. pretty sure they redid all the art and everything. but idk i havent played the update yet.

Nah it's just the "new" scene from the new artist. Basically just a slightly alternative version of the "daughter" barging in, but this time the MC doesn't get killed by the dog.

And yeah the game isn't working with the new artist. I'm outta here.

 

[Jonny Long]

People need to play this game. This guy deserves way more than $60 a month for this comedy gold.

 

[AnonKitten]

Where the fuck is anything? It says to find keys, toothbrush, and soap and I swear I've clicked every inch of every shitty room.

 

[tsudoplat]

Where the fuck is anything? It says to find keys, toothbrush, and soap and I swear I've clicked every inch of every shitty room.

Toothbrush is in the laundry room.
Backdoor key is in the bathroom next to laundry room.
Soap is in the bathroom next to the laundry room.

I have no idea where the front key is yet.

EDIT: Front door key is attached to the back door, you have to open the backdoor to find it.