VN - Ren'Py - The Missing Part [Ch. 2] [jPk vns]

As I said on you P*****n, well, you rock. The only holy hell I visit upon you is that my girl Sarah is given this white water-line eyeliner look on the roof!? She's a ginger showstopper bae! OMG, why bruno gericurl my Gaelic lass? (fans self) She WAS so GORGEOUS. BeFORE.
Okay, done, but still... Love love love your stuff, keep on keepin

This VN has an interesting proposal, being halfway between a sensual game and a game more focused on the story.

At least until this version, don't expect any significant decisions during gameplay: the choices only lead to the routes, which aren't self-exclusive until then, making this a very similar experience to a Kinect Novel. The story uses a lot of clichés, but that's not necessarily a bad thing, since at least it seems to be trying to get away from the commonplace, taking aim at more serious themes precisely by handling these clichés for good.
The 3D artwork is beautiful, even if it's average for games of this type (but you can see that an effort has been made to give the animations a much better visual experience). The writing is good. The characters are reasonable, and there is some promise that they will become more charismatic over the course of the story in the coming chapters.

It has potential, it's worth it (for those who like narrative games and don't mind too much not having such varied and impactful choices during progress). I have very good expectations for what's to come in this game.

(played Ch.2)

I couldn't stop playing it. This VN is written so damn well, and the render quality, LN personalities, and overall polish is really, really good for such a new game. The prologue is an utter gut punch of emotions, so if you're looking for something light-hearted, look to another game. If you're looking for an excellent story, this one has it. I haven't played a VN this caliber since Leap of Faith, and this one definitely deserves all 5 of the stars. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Tears are coming down from my eyes. Visual novels should not be this good. The plot of this VN is so prime that none of the other aspects matter. I just hope it continue to deliver.

So first off, I really want to give this AVN 4 stars because of the hurt / gut punch it gave me in the Prologue. For a moment there I didn't want to finish it because I felt lost and sad for my MC (Bravo to the Dev for that). There were moments where I thought does the MC just give up now, since what is life / the point after losing so much. I can't wait to see where the Dev leads us for the rest of his story!

Pro's:

• Really well written.​
• Unique characters (back-stories).​
• Decent looking models.​
• Well detailed renders.​

Con's:

• Deeply emotional story. (Wouldn't say it's a con but, it is extremely sad / heavy hitter.)

The Missing Part is an excellent game in every factor: story, character and sex scene.

It's a story-driven game first and foremost,. But don't let it scares you, the dialogue flows naturally in this game, even the most mundane topic seems so interesting. The plot is nothing crazy, yet keeps me hooked from start to finish. It's a simple story done extremely well.

All the characters are so alive and distinctive comparing to the hundreds of games on this forum. At first glance, you might find them tropey, but within a few minutes of screen time, you won't forget them. The way they talk, the way they carry themselves and their appearances are so authentic and appealing.

There's only one sex scene in the latest update (Ch. 2), and it's totally worth the wait. For a game that doesn't focus on sex, the scene itself is really well made. Good animation, good pace and above all pleasing to the eyes.

Do yourself a favor and give this masterpiece a try.

I love it when even the title music chosen to represent the game fits perfectly into the deep emotional journey I am about to embark on with an AVN I haven't played yet and this game checked a lot of boxes especially the choice in soundtrack.

I was impressed how long each episode is and I hear there are 8 more in the works.

What a splendid story and game this is.

Bravo.

I usually don't give those story-driven games too much of a shot, but this one got me.

The Missing Part is grounded, dialogues are rich and nuanced, expressions matching the words, and a fantastic ambiance. A VN in the true sense, so much so, at some point it caugh me off guard thinking I was watching some new series.

As of Ch.2 I can only but wonder where your choices can drive you, will they change MC's behavior? Maybe conflict with other choices? In any case, at this point Im certain I would enjoy learning more.

A good story, very well written, though I don't like how sad it is.

The LI models seem like nothing special, but that helps to focus on the story.

The lips of the nurse Sarah might look a bit too rough sometimes. I would correct that.

I love Lisa, she is surprisingly attractive for a mostly ordinary face. And her personality and everything make me like her a lot.

I don't like Hailey. At least for now she seems to be a vulture. Not my type. Her model reflects that very well though, kinda typical professional career-oriented bimbo.

(I get it that her further story should reveal some depths, and she is smart etc., but I'm already not interested, thanks).

So it's Lisa and perhaps Sarah for me (or the girl introduced at the Chapter 2 finale). Could there be some harem or a throuple eventually?

Good attention to side characters and details in general.

Perfect quality of renders (a few a bit dark for my usual monitor settings, but it's not a problem), good composition, posing and expressions.

The interface is nice.

Only one problem: when you turn off naming saves, they start to be named "Unnamed save". Totally unnecessary, even annoying for someone like me. I hope the dev would change that and leave unnamed saves with just blank names.

Other than that, the game is very enjoyable. 20/20!

[Ch. 2]

First of, congratulations to the Dev jPk vns for making this great AVN!

Now to the Game:
You should be in a stable Mental state to start this AVN as the Prologue already gives you the biggest punch to the Gut I have ever seen in an AVN so far.
The Story is very well written and pulls you in right from the Start... it's an emotional Novel and as such very well made.
The Renders are top and can hold up to the best AVNs out there, the animations are well done too. Nothing looks out of the Place.
The (few) Characters we met so far are well done and do all have there own characteristics and feel like People you could meet IRL.

The Second Chapter was also great, not as much a Roller-Coaster as the first/prologue but still got it's "surprising" Moments and some new Characters - especially the Ending is again a huge "Surprise"!

The Dev surely knows how to write some great Cliffhanger!

Over all this is definitely an AVN worth the Time to play and in my Top 10 List now. It deserves to be seen and played by much more People! 5 Stars from me.

A magnificent game. It moves you deeply and makes you feel emotions. The characters are endearing, and the story is beautifully told. I discovered it by chance, and I can assure you it's one of my favorites. I don't understand why it gets so little support. Congratulations to the developer because it's clear he's done it with extraordinary care and is surely putting a part of his heart into it.

One thing that already draws attention in this game right from the beginning is the courage the creator has to kill two important characters for the protagonist, this is not something you see often and when the story really starts it is very good it is not at all like a depressing story quite the opposite the writing does not waste time with drama instead it tries to develop both the protagonist and the other characters, the love interests are very good and beautiful each one with their stories and personality and as there are not many there is time to develop them well, anyway this is a great game with a lot of potential.

Review thru Chapter 2

Masterpiece level storytelling. I cried during the Prologue. I cried during the first episode. It pulls you in and makes you care deeply about the characters. If you like characters that matter, this is a Top 3 VN of all time. If you are only in it for the lewd scenes, there is only one so far. That one, however, is very well executed.

If you are still reading, then this is the right VN for you. It takes a long time to go through because it uses cut scenes extensively. Those cut scenes are worth it. They are not used as an excuse for pretty visuals. The cut scenes are used to tell the story directly through facial expressions and actions that matter.

This VN matters. We need to support. it.

Woof, the prologue was truly a punch in the gut. This AVN is a little gem. What shines the most is definitely the writing, but the renders and animations are also well done. Pleasantly surprised by the SFX during the scene with

Kudos to jPk. I’ll be recommending it.

P.S. In my humble opinion, I think it’s time to lock the three paths in the next chapter and make them mutually exclusive. Narratively speaking, it wouldn’t make much sense—nor would it really fit the MC’s character—to continue three romantic relationships at the same time.

Great work! Looking forward to what's next

My first initial thoughts after having finished Chapter 2:
Holy fuck.

Now let me catch you up from the beggining. One of the greatest visual novels i have ever played on this site and this is only 2 chapters in. The Prologue alone is worth becoming its own game. I actually really implore the dev to explore making a prequel to this once completing it.

The Missing Part. The title is actually perfect for this VN. Once completing the Prequel i felt emotionally drained. Add on top during the initial stages of Chapter 1 you really feel like you are missing a part of the MC after the *spoilers* death of ella and their daughter. I dare to say i felt a part of myself missing too.
I wont lie it took me a bit to get over the initial loss of both Ella and their daughter, but especially Ella. She felt like the perfect LI and I was really looking forward to explore that path with her and the MC.
It really made it hard to connect at first with any of the three main LI's. Eventually after getting over the sadness of it all, i started enjoying myself way more.

First of all i would like to applaud the dev on how amazing all 3 of the LI models look...very original from the looks of it, haven't really seen any of them in other VN's (I have played most of the good ones on here) Sarah, Lisa and Hailey are wonderful women, each having their own personalities and different aspects to enjoy.
I will add that i like how this game handles sex scenes. It's alot more of a slow burn story wise, so of course this also translates into the sex. If you were looking for a game with constant sex scenes this unfortunately isnt the one for you. We have had one sex scene so far and it is used to further the story with Sarah, and not just to make this into a porno. Also it was really crisp and looked fantastic. The renders felt really real. 10/10 visuals.
Personally Lisa is my favorite, mostly due to the connection she seems to have to Ella in some way. Close seconds though are both Sarah and Hailey. The two other possible LI's seem to be Emily and Linda whom to me don't really appeal to me enough to warrant their own separate paths but good additions to those who love a good variety.

Chapter 2 is where this goes from a great VN, that just doesn't reach the ceiling post Prolugue, back up to me after an emotional Prologue ending. While yes, i still miss Ella at points and yes i still wish to explore her in maybe a future prequel spinoff...I finally am able to grasp to the fact that everything that happened, needed to occur to get us this invested in the MC and what his future holds. I have never felt this attached before to a virtual novel and its characters, it honestly feels like watching one of my favorite series on Netflix. Plus talk about that ending!

Summing things up back to my initial reaction of the end of Chapter 2 *spoilers* I did not see that coming at all. I really hope this is some sort of long lost twin story, because as much as this "Madelyn" character isnt our Ella...This would be the next best thing. Of course i expect this to be slow burn...but i would love it if she is a planned new LI in the future. I am sold already on her. (Even if it is weird that she would be the twin sister of your dead wife and having the name of your dead daughter)

Keep up the outstanding work Mr. Developer @jPk vns
Until Chapter 3.


PS: This should be among the top 10 games out there. I would gladly put it among the likes of Being a DIK, Leap of Faith, Artemis, Become a Rockstar, City of Broken Dreamers, Race of Life, Move the Chains, Summer's Gone, Chasing Sunsets and Acting Lessons to name a few of the great ones out there.
Obviously there are other great VN's and some may prefer others but this definetly deserves to be among the highest rated.

I really hope this doesn't end up just being a hidden gem that gets lost in the shuffle.

This game may not have a ton of lewd scene but holy shit does it grip at your emotions.

The writing is one of the best I have seen so far, the 2 of the 3 LI's are extremely attractive - Sarah is just alright. Emma is hilarious and much needed comic relief.

There really is nothing I can say about this AVN that is terrible except that I don't have more of it to go through right now

Well, this one got me real good. Sure did not expect to get this emotional. A great written Adults VN with great art and 3 unique LIs. I just could not stop playing and I would recommend anyone who want to enjoy truly mature VN to try it. the Sex scene(s) is a bonus but would play it even if it had none. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Man oh man! What a roller coaster! Give the MC a break. Never cried while playing any game. But the writing of this is really touching.

My top AVN ever. It has good story, characters, renders, emotion and much more.

man....... it has been a while since i have gotten this emotional playing a avn. that prologue was gut wrenching. so far very well written. kinda fresh to see such a impactful start to a story. all the very best luck with the project. keep em coming

Not everyday i see a story about a loving father's mental health. This is one of, if not the most realistic depiction of it.

From how he faces the loss, how he dealt with it and how he's doing his best to carry on with his life while still remembering the good times he had with the loved ones he's lost.