TLDR: if you like the theme of a sexually weak man having to let his wife fuck others - then you will prolly like it, otherwise - don't bother with this novel.
The pacing is definitely off. The first sex the wife has is with this orc with the dick bigger than her legs. It should have been culmination of a long corruption build-up, not the start of it.
Another problem is that both characters (the wife and the husband) are unlikable. So you are essentially forced to follow two miserable characters and their petty sexual life.
Sexually, their relationship is essentially swinging - the wife encourages the hubby to have sex with other women so she can fuck other men. That's it, there's no build-up, wife changes overnight into this mad swinger, allegedly because of magic, but she doesn't even try to resist it anyway.
During sex with other men she keeps saying that the husband can't satiate her sexual desires. This is the central theme here - the husband is sexually weak so she has to fuck other men and she doesn't care if her pathetic husband fucks other women in the meantime, she even encourages him to do it, so that he doesn't get upset much.
I think this game was enjoyable for the first like 30 minutes or so, before the night when the wife fucks the orc. After that it just goes astray and becomes completely mindless.
The pacing is definitely off. The first sex the wife has is with this orc with the dick bigger than her legs. It should have been culmination of a long corruption build-up, not the start of it.
Another problem is that both characters (the wife and the husband) are unlikable. So you are essentially forced to follow two miserable characters and their petty sexual life.
Sexually, their relationship is essentially swinging - the wife encourages the hubby to have sex with other women so she can fuck other men. That's it, there's no build-up, wife changes overnight into this mad swinger, allegedly because of magic, but she doesn't even try to resist it anyway.
During sex with other men she keeps saying that the husband can't satiate her sexual desires. This is the central theme here - the husband is sexually weak so she has to fuck other men and she doesn't care if her pathetic husband fucks other women in the meantime, she even encourages him to do it, so that he doesn't get upset much.
I think this game was enjoyable for the first like 30 minutes or so, before the night when the wife fucks the orc. After that it just goes astray and becomes completely mindless.