VN - Ren'Py - The Mystery of NTR [v0.2] [HoRTN]

Pros:
- The Mom / heroine model is super hot
- You can see the Mom's expressions during the sex scenes
- Interesting story, I really like the idea of building up the son / MC's lust for his Mom

Cons:
- Graphic is a bit clunky, but honestly it's not too bad
- Some of the sex scenes are a bit short (need more dialogues)

Feedbacks for the sex scenes:
1) Add some moans (Ahh, Ohh, Nhooh, Oogh, etc) in-between the dialogues, it will prolong the sex scene + making it more intense
2) Try to find the angle so we can see Rose's face during the sex scenes (I think you already did a good job, but I just want to remind you that Rose's face / expression is probably the main appeal of your game)


P.S.: I'm looking forward for the incest part (or maybe let Rose bangs her son's friend first, to build the tension...)

Amazing game, character design looks good, development time seems promising, bimonth release with many content, looking forward to the mystery unvealed, that's great if more characters added, more women, more mystery...great work, keep it up...

Gonna keep this short as this game doesn't justify the time of the full review.

1. Models look actually decent, least the "landlady"
2. Animations are nice
3. Story is bat shit, couldnt be bothered to figure whats going on. Seems like house is cursed, but everything that happens just makes fuckol sense, would have if they got possessed "normally" but not here, here its just some puked out story thats not even NTR its straight up cheating wife.
   • The "landlady" just straight up starts screwing anything that moves, other than the MC and/or "husband" yet they are not even aware of this, I even doubt she is.
   • Its told poorly and just thrown out there with no rhyme or reason as to the motivations. The "landlady" doesn't seem possessed just simply a slut who bones anyone.
   • NTR because she doesn't bone the MC? Makes no sense anyway that she would and the MC is a beta anyway, that doesn't feature in the game nor have any appeal.
4. The MC is not even present or played most of the time, you can't say he gets cucked because he was not in the driver seat anyway, the husband gets cucked but he isn't even there soo...erm...yeah cheating sure...but makes no sense the way its going (I stopped reading eventually as it was just...no.)

Good models, could have been interesting story, just badly told, maybe bad planning...who knows...just bad.

May change my review later if I happen upon this again and try it again (BIG IF) but maybe, it could be good, just isnt now.

Liking the horror elements so far.
Renders quality is not the best ever, but equivalent to higher end honey select renders / lower end daz 3d renders. Pretty good.
Characters could use a bit more backstory.
Has a good amount of content for v0.1

Update 0.2
We now seem to have a rough plotline, the updates are frequent and the characters have more substance. Overall looks like a solid High quality game.

3.6 / 5 (rounded up to 4)
Seems like an interesting game so far, that's unique because of it's premise - but also missing some of the aspects that make NTR games appealing.

The good:
- Attractive models for the mom and childhood friend, though this is a subjective opinion.
- Very fresh premise involving some supernatural stuff, which makes it stand out from your cliche "bully/thug/friend fucks your mom/wife" kind of story, so I'm interested to see where this goes.
- Doesn't take too long before the mom is bouncing on someone's dick, this is both a good and a bad thing. Good if you're looking for a quick wank, bad if you prefer more build-up and slow burn before the actual NTR occurs.

The bad (or just questionable) stuff:
- The mom is already a slut. Part of the appeal in NTR games is the slow corruption that happens, leading to a sense of betrayal. You wouldn't necessarily feel betrayed by a slut or succubus sleeping around, so in much the same way it doesn't quite strike the right chords when it's kind of an open secret that the mom isn't exactly loyal. There's no NTR content involving the childhood friend (or sister who has yet to be introduced), so there's potential there for the dev to rectify that.


All in all, good game. I'm a little disappointed about missing out on corruption/slow NTR for the mom, but will look forward to see how the game builds out since the dev clearly has some interesting and unique ideas.