VN - Ren'Py - The Mystery of NTR [v0.7.5] [HoRTN]

Honestly I give the game a 2 star because if you like NTR you'll at least get the scenes and the models are good. But even for a NTR enjoyer the story feels incoherent and jumbled.

The choices as an MC don't really matter and the MC in general doesn't do much. He's like an NPC in the story happening around him. And not even in the sense that he even has to watch the scenes in the cuck chair because he doesn't even watch most of the time. And he's just generally dumb and not in an endearing way or purposeful way like the dumb character archetype. Just dumb because of weak writing.

If you took out the MC the changes would be very minimal because he doesn't affect things much if at all. Everything could happen without him being there and it would change basically nothing. There's no point to him other than to see the story and this could be accomplished if we just saw it form Rose's perspective only. It has me thinking what's the point in having an MC? He just comes off as so unimportant to the overall story. Like not even a talking NPC, as much impact and relevance as a background NPC.

And the choices are just confusing, there's no real indication of where they take you and even the one's that tell you aren't that clear because you just have to hope it leads you where you maybe want to be. If this game were changed to a kinetic novel not much would have to be changed. Which makes the choices and paths even more poorly written.

The models look good and the scenes if you're into NTR are probably enjoyable but the story is just a mess overall with no real direction. Just a bunch of ideas and kinks put in for the sake of putting them in.

If it wasn't for the models and animations this would be a 1 star.

I just finished playing this game. Will recommend this game for anyone loves NTR, plot twist, corruption. The CG, animation are amazing, everything feels polished and well thought out. However, the NTR theme can make a lot of people annoyed, which might lead to lower ratings.

This one is outright terrible. First off, one of the worst set of characters I've seen, with bland personalities that make little sense, boring dialogue and so on. Writing is pretty bad as well, and the story is bull all around, with the supernatural element just making this an empty fuckfest with no real buildup or anything. And for a game with NTR on it's name, the MC is neither the one being NTRd (basically his mom is his dad's wife, not his) nor the one doing the NTR (should happen in future updates, but by the time she's already any random guys slut anyway). Choices don't seem to matter much, outside choosing which paths you want to take.

Render quality is really low, in execution and design and framing. Character models are poor as well. Animations are rough, basic and have lots of problems. And there is no sound in most of it, and bugs (specially clipping and visual bugs) exist.

So, all in all, hard pass is what I'd recommend. I'm definitely dropping this.

Guess I will start with the Pros:
Nice models and Animation. The story is easy to follow and seems interesting up the this point.

Cons.
The hint system is useless. It's basically choose and path and pray you stay on the right one. More less you can't unlock everything unless you choose perfectly which is nearly impossible.
If you can unlock the gallery you can see all the scenes, but that is useless if you are like me and only want to unlock by actually playing the game.

For now I am going to drop this game, but will check back later and see if it has improved.

A game focused around supernatural themed corruption and ntr. The story isn't particularly interesting (or good) but it works for the purpose of delivering sex scenes. The visuals in this game are good as well and there's some pretty good animation but the strength of the game is the adult writing and pacing. Just about every scene has great sexual tension and the sex scenes are all really hot. The dev also has maintained a good development pace and has a lot of content considering the dev time. Lots of potential.

I just love this game, it’s an art. It shows your creativity and skill of what makes this genre special. I can’t wait to see what`s you bring in next update. in my opinion, i think people agree that focus on Rose (the milf) is the best move. Most of what i enjoy are rose content. Anyway thanks for this game.

NTR linked with Paranormal horror is a new type. Author should make more deeper story.
The three routes approach is a good move.
The tenants and roommates are a key to a deeper story and a trans character has a very passive role right now.

Not the best NTR AVN currently but potential to be really good in the future.

PRO

• Decent Model
• Some interesting story element of horror and super natural

CONS

• Dev seems to throw in popular kinks for the sake of it. NTR, FUTA & Incest combination have no story element for it.
• The story is badly string together and story elements is disjointed
• Extremely bad Porn Logic story elements that makes normal Porn Logic looks like a Oscar Winning Writing
• MC is more of a Spectator than an actual MC. MC literally have an IQ of an amoeba. Thinking nothing but boobs and his decision in story makes no sense. Seen a ghost, a severed arm? No issues, boobs first
• MC is there just to checkbox the Incest kink. The whole story as of 0.3 revolve around Rose's POV
• The NTR tag is misleading. The MC is not in relationship with any LI. Rose is already kind of a whore from the start. More of cheating wife than NTR
• Jian being a FUTA bring no benefit to the story at all. Just there to checkbox a kink. It would be better if she serves as story element character given her role as a ghostbuster than just a kink checkbox. Just make a normal girl shessh

VERDICT
Not worth playing.

SUMMARY
Dev really bad at story telling. Kinda going for kinks that is popular for the sake of it but cant seem string together a proper story. The initial ghost seems to be missing and removed any of original plot around it. MC is relegated to be a spectator. At this point, makes no differences if the MC is around or not.

PROS
+ Character models, and animations looks half-decent.

CONS
- Incoherent, weird, illogical, and terribly-written story, and story-telling.
- Unlikeable characters.
- Improvement needy texture, animation quality, and animation physics.
- Tons of bugs, and problems like clip through issues.
- Terrible sound effects.

VERDICT
Not worth playing.

Not the best game. The models are average, in the animations the character's device sometimes doesn't even hit the right place, elements of other clothes constantly stick out of the clothes. The visual part is average. The plot is also average, elements of horror, conspiracy, betrayal. It seems not bad, but the weakest part of the game is MC. This is an adult guy with the intelligence of a teenager. Nothing lingers in his mind, he doesn't care about anything. The only thing that worries him is boobs. A ghost? I don't care. A severed arm? Boobs are more important. Not a single sensible thought flashes through his head, despite the strange events that are happening around him. It is disgusting to associate yourself with this character and it is embarrassing to play for him. However, there is no special choice, the character is stupid, and the developer offers one key choice for the update, which will lead the story along one of the routes. In general, if someone wants to see a gallery of average animations, diluted with dull comments from MC, then you are in the right place.

P.S. Nothing sums up MC more than the scene where MC takes a severed hand out of a suitcase with a combination lock covered in seals and burns it to get some vagina and after realizing that everything that happened is pretty shady and the vagina is not real, his first thought is "if they find out about this, I'll be kicked out of the house". I'm not surprised that his mother is angry that he dropped out of school for business. I wouldn't even trust him to sell lemonade on the street, let alone serious business))

Rev @ The Mystery of NTR [v0.2]

Overrated.

Art's alright. Models are fine, animations are decent.

Writing is bad. Scenario's not super novel, narrative is disjointed, characterization is trying for mysterious and getting to inconsistent.

Porn's fine, if dull.


Skip Dialog-sama BANZAI!

The games graphics are top tier great, the audio quality with the voices are a ten you hear some screams and get some jump scare so hold on to your phone tight when playing at night the story is well written gots you wanting more and wanting to get to next scene , animations are excellent I love how they also have this game for more than one platform especially on there early release give this game a chance if you love ntr games you won't be disappointed

*V0.4 review update:
- I dropped the rating because the Dev is not focusing on Rose anymore. Such a shame...

Pros:
- The Mom / heroine model is super hot
- You can see the Mom's expressions during the sex scenes
- Interesting story, I really like the idea of building up the son / MC's lust for his Mom

Cons:
- Graphic is a bit clunky, but honestly it's not too bad
- Some of the sex scenes are a bit short (need more dialogues)

Feedbacks for the sex scenes:
1) Add some moans (Ahh, Ohh, Nhooh, Oogh, etc) in-between the dialogues, it will prolong the sex scene + making it more intense
2) Try to find the angle so we can see Rose's face during the sex scenes (I think you already did a good job, but I just want to remind you that Rose's face / expression is probably the main appeal of your game)


P.S.: I'm looking forward for the incest part (or maybe let Rose bangs her son's friend first, to build the tension...)

Amazing game, character design looks good, development time seems promising, bimonth release with many content, looking forward to the mystery unvealed, that's great if more characters added, more women, more mystery...great work, keep it up...

Gonna keep this short as this game doesn't justify the time of the full review.

1. Models look actually decent, least the "landlady"
2. Animations are nice
3. Story is bat shit, couldnt be bothered to figure whats going on. Seems like house is cursed, but everything that happens just makes fuckol sense, would have if they got possessed "normally" but not here, here its just some puked out story thats not even NTR its straight up cheating wife.
   • The "landlady" just straight up starts screwing anything that moves, other than the MC and/or "husband" yet they are not even aware of this, I even doubt she is.
   • Its told poorly and just thrown out there with no rhyme or reason as to the motivations. The "landlady" doesn't seem possessed just simply a slut who bones anyone.
   • NTR because she doesn't bone the MC? Makes no sense anyway that she would and the MC is a beta anyway, that doesn't feature in the game nor have any appeal.
4. The MC is not even present or played most of the time, you can't say he gets cucked because he was not in the driver seat anyway, the husband gets cucked but he isn't even there soo...erm...yeah cheating sure...but makes no sense the way its going (I stopped reading eventually as it was just...no.)

Good models, could have been interesting story, just badly told, maybe bad planning...who knows...just bad.

May change my review later if I happen upon this again and try it again (BIG IF) but maybe, it could be good, just isnt now.

Liking the horror elements so far.
Renders quality is not the best ever, but equivalent to higher end honey select renders / lower end daz 3d renders. Pretty good.
Characters could use a bit more backstory.
Has a good amount of content for v0.1

Update 0.2
We now seem to have a rough plotline, the updates are frequent and the characters have more substance. Overall looks like a solid High quality game.

3 / 5
Seems like an interesting game so far, that's unique because of it's premise - but also missing some of the aspects that make NTR games appealing.

The good:
- Attractive models for the mom and childhood friend, though this is a subjective opinion.
- Very fresh premise involving some supernatural stuff, which makes it stand out from your cliche "bully/thug/friend fucks your mom/wife" kind of story, so I'm interested to see where this goes.
- Doesn't take too long before the mom is bouncing on someone's dick, this is both a good and a bad thing. Good if you're looking for a quick wank, bad if you prefer more build-up and slow burn before the actual NTR occurs.

The bad (or just questionable) stuff:
- The mom is already a slut. Part of the appeal in NTR games is the slow corruption that happens, leading to a sense of betrayal. You wouldn't necessarily feel betrayed by a slut or succubus sleeping around, so in much the same way it doesn't quite strike the right chords when it's kind of an open secret that the mom isn't exactly loyal. There's no NTR content involving the childhood friend (or sister who has yet to be introduced), so there's potential there for the dev to rectify that.


All in all, decent game. I'm a little disappointed about missing out on corruption/slow NTR for the mom, but will look forward to see how the game builds out since the dev clearly has some interesting and unique ideas.