v0.2.7 An interesting start which has the potential to go in lots of different directions but is it enjoyable? It feels more of a game rather than a novel with the text written in a clipped, quite dry style. There are lots of choices, perhaps too many, as it does interrupt the flow of the story. It's more like a puzzle to be solved, such as an escape room rather than a fun relaxing read. I think this will need a built in walkthrough as it goes on if it continues in the same style, to give the option to make it more pleasurable to a reader. The art is ok rather than outstanding, as are the animations, which seem quite short. Aeris in particular seems an interesting, well rounded character. Hopefully others will be developed as well, as we go on.