VN - HTML - The New Family [Part 1 Public] [ErotikAI]

V.part 1 public (how many parts finally? who knows...it could go forever)

Visuals are computer generated so no credit for their creation given. not a fan of the filter the dev selected to use either as it makes the art look weird and disconnected.
the design is bold choice that works, for me at least, except for the over-clicking. adding more sentences to each click would make it less click-a-thon.
as it stands, this would break a mouse once completed, but otherwise the design is not bad as normally html games are a scroll-a-thon instead.

the writing is not bad but is not delivering much of a plot and leaves this to rely heavily on, what is for me, the weaker visuals. basic hypnosis that does nothing to work for it. find device and hypnotise someone or everyone.
where will it go? no idea myself as i have already seen enough to know 'nowhere special' is a very strong possibility.

fap-a-thon click-a-thon that's not a scroll-a-thon is my guess-a-thon

Well its more like a story book rather than a anything else. Unfotunately the AI is very choppy and rather bland the model looks nice but it just could be so much better the AI technology is out there but this looks like you have used a 1st prototype.

The story is rather boring to be honest. This is still early stage so dev has time to turn it around. I feel this is not going to be any good if it continues in the same path as it is on currently.

I hope dev takes this on board, AI gives you near infinite possibilities use it to its fullest you can then get something good out of it. Story telling needs work.