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Story ripped off from Aiden Grey's story "Perfect Family". Great story from a good erotica writer. Hope whomever chose to do this at least respects the source material.
EDIT: Skimmed through it quickly and while the AI animations are good the original source material is much better if you like the subject matter.
EDIT: Skimmed through it quickly and while the AI animations are good the original source material is much better if you like the subject matter.
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Hey dbp5ca, thanks for the callout yes i have been heavily inspired by Aiden Grey stories. I actually bought all his collection before his works was removed from smashwords. "Perfect family" had a really good premise and Im on a different spin or route on this, im happy that you find the animation satisfactory. I'll try my best to write better but im designer first hand.
Hope you stick around to see more! Thanks!
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You might want to reach out to the original author on SubscribeStar and see if they might be up for a collaboration. Honestly finding a way to link the text with the images and animations that better captures the spirit of the original could be beneficial to both of you for this and potential future endeavours.
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Yeah I usually have the AI CG tag excluded from my browsing here because most of the titles on here with AI in the tags all look the same and look really bad. I forgot to filter them out this time and this caught my attention.
I don't dislike AI art for ethical reasons in most cases, it's mostly just bad or trivial (good for a distraction or background asset) or bland & homogeneous.
I just wish devs thinking AI is good enough to publish off the bat would rethink this. Either hire a graphics person to touch up the AI art or learn some GIMP or whatever relevant media tool to fix the blemishes.
The one ai cg thing on this site I liked was using AI to animate models that had already been made by a real artist person, and the result was kinda cool. On that note, how does this AVN look? The animations especially. Is it very AI-sloppy?
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I agreed with many of their corrections. You mention they made "several mistakes" in their corrections, but only point to two, neither of which correct anything. Some of the edit suggestions seem to focus on minor objections to the prose itself, such as the "modest mansion" thing. If you've ever tried to edit an AI's creative writing, you'd know those minor annoyances build up really fast.
Because AI's are terrible at writing and prolonged attempts end up in uncanny valley. . Every once and a while they can whip out something interesting in small chunks, if the prompter is a good writer or good at whatever skill the AI is supposed to be replacing.
But I think plastic-fantastic could have saved a lot of time by just posting "Don't rely on LLMs to write anything for you" ...