This is a good game as is and VERY promising regarding its future potential. The artwork is amazing, the atmosphere and setting is amazing, the dialogue is mostly good with just a few weird things/grammar issues, and the story is so far so good.
I would say I have only a few issues with the game, some being nitpicky. First, the most major issue with the game imo is the sex scenes are extremely short and not very gratifying and I'm not even necessarily talking art & animation, although a little more in that regard for a few skimpy sex scenes would be appreciated too; no, I'm talking about the dialogue. The sex scenes are almost entirely devoid of interaction between the MC and the women and because of that, unlocking sex scenes feels more like collecting sexy images than reaching a point in the game where I can actually cum, although the images ARE very sexy for sure. I have to do tasks and talk to people a lot to get to these scenes, and it'd be nice if I could stew in them a little bit and really absorb what's happening and maybe have an actual interaction with the girl, whether dirty talking, or anything really, w/e.
Second biggest issue imo is you can't change the MC's name. Big no no in VNs. I don't wanna be called "Nick" and there's nothing worse than being called another dude's name while you're trying to get off, especially if it reminds you of someone you hated..
Third, there's some confusion with the appearance of Jennifer & Amy (brunette hotel prostitute) where they share faces in one or two images; not sure if this is artifact left over from initial character planning stages or what, but there is one particular image of Jennifer where she looks exactly like Amy. Also Catherine (Alice's mother, in that mansion early in the game) and Mery (hotel clerk/manager or w/e) seem to share appearance.
Some characters in the game look like they should be related, not sure if that's just me or if plans had to be changed because of Patreon's incest policy.
I also personally think Gabi & "Death" should be separate characters, as they have completely different vibes, i.e. Gabi feels like a young/young-ish prostitute while "Death" feels like a milf.
Other than that, it's just the usual for betas where portions of the game feel incomplete and rushed, like Mery's "domination". I also really wish you could skip scenes faster, because right now you have to wait a good 3-5 seconds before you can skip and it's really irritating; 1-1.5 seconds should be plenty to prevent accidental skips.
Anyways, really great game despite some of my issues and I recommend it!