Art isn't bad. The faces I kinda like, as there's some sort of odd charm about them. I also really like the the setup for this.
The script however is really really bad. I'm guessing that english isn't the creators first language, which is fine.
If I could offer the creator some constructive criticism, find a fan of your art who understands english a lot better that's willing to proofread and edit the scripts for your future titles. If the dialogue gets better, please let me know, as again, I kinda like the art.
The script however is really really bad. I'm guessing that english isn't the creators first language, which is fine.
If I could offer the creator some constructive criticism, find a fan of your art who understands english a lot better that's willing to proofread and edit the scripts for your future titles. If the dialogue gets better, please let me know, as again, I kinda like the art.