VN - Ren'Py - The Pen is Mightier [EP1 Part1] [DDCOpublishing]

[EP1 Part1] - not familiar with the original story

General

• It's very short (10 mins max);
• no sex or erotic stuff yet. (One kiss )
• only one or two of the screenshots you see in OP are actually in the game currently;
• my pen is huge.

Pros

• Art is quite nice;
• music (that's not bad);
• sfx;
• sexy boss.

Cons

• What happens at the carnival (the explosions and stuff) seems a bit bizarre / over the top;
• dev isn't aware of the H-key I think: characters are cut off at the textbox border..?