This is a side story for The List by the same developer. The List has a 5-star plot, but got 4 stars from me because of the excessive framing by two narrators (the main character and a love interest) and some other problems.
Here I feel I have to subtract another star because the story is so confusing. We have to follow simultaneously a new intricate plot with many characters, and a new perspective on the plot of The List involving some of the characters known from there. Overall it simply gets too complicated, and I kept double checking (by running The List in the background) which characters I already knew and which were new.
Still, for fans of The List, this side story is absolutely worth reading. Though of course for now (version 0.1) we have only one chapter.
Here I feel I have to subtract another star because the story is so confusing. We have to follow simultaneously a new intricate plot with many characters, and a new perspective on the plot of The List involving some of the characters known from there. Overall it simply gets too complicated, and I kept double checking (by running The List in the background) which characters I already knew and which were new.
Still, for fans of The List, this side story is absolutely worth reading. Though of course for now (version 0.1) we have only one chapter.