VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Personal Assistant [v0.25c] [JL Creation]

A true shame this is abandoned.

The abuse of power in this game is done very very well, the assistant feels vulnerable without having to resort to writing them like they have the mind of a 5 year old

The MC is gross yes, as others have said, but it doesn't have to distract from the game too much. Also despite being abandoned, there's plenty of content here to make it worth playing anyway

Renders and events are very well done, progression happens at a decent pace and makes the sandbox elements good

the game is just perfect in terms of story. this dark plot of an old man who seeks the affection of a young lady and makes her his toy is very well done. I did not rate the bugs in my review. I hope this game will be resumed and freed a little from the bugs.

Can be traumatizing in a creepy way. Not my style in case of screenplay. It can be rough scence if thats what u want. Or slow build up to catching ur pray when its vunerable.
but its a short game nonetheless.
May be the upgrade will give a more complete story, which it should seeing how thing are going.

Some say it's a best corruption-type visual novel... i played only the love route (which was in development) not much content there. It is clearly designed to be a corruption/ humiliation (or even worse) kink... too dark for my taste. And it was abandoned so 2 out of 3 ways to play this game are missing.

The Personal Assistant [v0.25c] [JL Creation]

I recently had the misfortune of stumbling upon "The Personal Assistant" by JL Creation, and I must say, it was nothing short of a nightmare. I feel compelled to share my experience with this game, but be warned: it's not a tale for the faint of heart.

From the very beginning, it was evident that this game was headed down a dark and twisted path. The story, which is supposedly the backbone of the game, was nothing short of revolting. It was like descending into the abyss of depravity, with no respite in sight. The main character, if you can even call them that, was not just unlikable, but downright disgusting. Their actions and behavior throughout the game were beyond comprehension, pushing the boundaries of morality and sanity.

As if the atrocious storyline wasn't enough, the side stories, which could have potentially offered some semblance of redemption, were frustratingly placed on hold. Instead, players were subjected to the nauseating main narrative, which seemed to take perverse pleasure in exploiting every taboo imaginable. It felt like the developers were actively trying to shock and disgust players with every turn, rather than providing any meaningful content or entertainment.

The so-called "main" storyline of the game felt like a sick and twisted fantasy straight out of a deranged serial killer's mind. It was akin to accidentally stumbling upon a snuff film and being unable to look away. The disturbing and unsettling moments were not only excessive but also utterly unnecessary. It was as though the game reveled in pushing the boundaries of decency without any regard for the players' emotional well-being.

In my years of gaming, I have encountered a wide range of experiences, from the exhilarating to the thought-provoking. However, "The Personal Assistant" by JL Creation stands out as one of the most abhorrent and reprehensible games I've ever had the misfortune of encountering. If you have any respect for your own sanity and values, I implore you to steer clear of this monstrosity. It may find an audience among those with a morbid curiosity for the darkest corners of human depravity, but for the average gamer seeking entertainment and enjoyment, it offers nothing but a revolting and soul-crushing experience.

A surprisingly great game, i have fully finished the corruption route(current content) and for a game with only one location with just two people its still very interesting to play.

You get 3 very different routes, so different you could even call them a seperate game.

Renders are very nice both in locations and characters.

A very easy to use and well explained hints system which dosent leave you wondering what to do next like most games.

It delivers on what it promises at the start of the game.

As for improvements, it could use a skip 6 hour button and some of the events are a little out of order(dosent want to show boobs even after doing a full strip)

Really looking forward to seeing the game completed and just hoping the creator lets us not just see what life is like for the charaters after the end but let us interact i little as well.

Very nice. Corruption should take time but some days the game just makes you blow thru the whole day to get to the next task.. Should be something interesting in each hour. Example spying at 8 should develop. Brushing at 23 should develop, etc. Good otherwise.

Also - I've read a lot of criticism of the beast. I agree with the publishers choice because this is a beauty & beast game. The beauty should be as beautiful as possible and the beast as repelling as possible to enhance each of the routes.. love, corruption, dark.

Last suggestion-In porn "the money shot" is key. Each interaction should have options for a money shot end.. choices like Skip,Drip,Flood, & Cream Pie. I would also make the choice a preference that is kept until changed since most people want to regularly see more... or less..

This game turns dark... which is not my kink.

The graphics are good, the story progression makes sense and the hints are very well laid out. Design-wise, it's a great game, but the theme of it turns sour relatively quickly and goes to places that I just don't find appealing at all.

great rendering, sexy girls and ugly males. I like this game. I hope the dev will complete this game develop more. The idea of three route is good as i prefer corrupt and dark routes over romance. i give 5/5

I really want to like this game. The girl is very cute and hot.
The problem is the sandbox mode. Its grindy and annoying. Its impossible to enjoy it.
The Mc's cock is disgusting and the genital and boobs stretching is not arousing but disturbing.
The last few updates I simply extract the pictures and see if theres something new. Theres a lot of pictures, and when I start to get aroused theres no more or something ugly is showing and ruins my mood.
As my other votes, I rate by my enjoyment value, and its terrible.

I love the idea of it, and the girl is decent looking... but the gameplay is atrocious ... just performing tasks at certain times of the day, messing up her homework or telling her the book she's read is stupid to raise her corruption... but some of them leave her 'sad' meaning you then can't interact with her for the rest of the day ... it's such a boring grind... the English isn't perfect either, which doesn't help.

Admittedly, I didn't try messing around with the love route, as that was of no interest to me ... but yeah, maybe with a lot of work it'll turn around into something interesting but I'm not terribly hopeful after playing this (0.21) version.

The pics don't do this game justice. You gotta experience it for yourself, just how cute the assistant girl is.

Unlike other games from the genre, she's more of a "real girl", who gets hungry and cold, goes to the toilet and has periods, etc. She is not just an excuse to show sexy pics of her, which is great and refreshing.

If at first the bad english puts you off, you should wait a little, give it a chance. Although the writer's english isn't great, he manages to be extremely erotic with it and is classy enough to make fun of his own bad english in the game, which was a hilarious moment.

Excellent corruption game. If you like explicit fethism you should give this a go.

It has a bit of a slow build up but I like it. You take your time with your prey and she gets more and more into it. Great job.

Amazing if you like fetishes and dominating the opposite sex completely spanking,torture crying all that good stuff best thing she wont say anything about it. I suggest u play you wont regret. One thing tho the beginning is a bit grindy but once you get to the real meat of the game its amazing.

The MC is so creepy and ugly that it is impossible to get a hard on... Nevermind creepy, he is extremely unattractive and for that it renders the sex scenes moot. He is similar to those Japanese games that have you play as an extremely obese, ugly man who is creeping on a girl. This is the exact same thing but using western graphics.

Like most people, I was interested in the game due to the impressive model of the girl. That's about the only pro to the game.

Gameplay:
Very repetitive and slow. Mess up her homework, wait 22 hours, talk to her to start a new scene. Repeat that 3 or 4 times until she agrees to do something new with the same dialog each time. Then do that with like three different outfits. Then make her do something else four times in a row until she does the full scene. All of this while skipping one/two hours at a time until the exact 1-2 hour window of the day when you can initialize the scene. Very boring.

The game says there are three routes. Nah, there's just one at the moment.

Scenes:
Images of the girl are great. The guy is creepy but it fits the story. The animated scenes are hugely disappointing for how long it takes to get to them. The dude's dick is fucked up. Some of the content is just gross.

Dialog:
Just, really bad grammatically and in general.

0/10 can't fap to this shit. Waste of a well rendered character.

I could go along with this game for a while, despite the distractingly horrific MC, but once we saw his deformed penis and he started literally eating shit on screen, I was out. I've never stopped playing a game out of sheer disgust before.

The girl is one of the best rendered and most attractive characters I have seen in a game. This, coupled with a slow, believable, and somewhat dark corruption route made for a very fun experience. While the gameplay is still a work in progress, I'm giving 5 stars for the potential here.

The dev has improved this version 1.6 and ironed out the bugs of the previous version. It is nice to have a dark game and the updates are nice, I can see her becoming the perfect pet in future.

There is one small thing for me is that skipping time can be a bit monotonous, the only choices are 1 hour skip or a 2 hour nap. When you need to wait 3 days for the pole dance, there should be an option to skip a day at a time. Maybe that could be something that is addressed in later updates.

I originallt downl9aded this game for 2 reasons: first was the look of the girl. She is beautifil. 2) the fact that the dev SAID you could go 2 routes, a)corruption and b) love. I really hate being lied to, and this dev has lied since every f**king update has advanced the corruption route, with limited to NO advancement with the love route. Yes, I am partial to love routes in games, but i play both where they are available. What irritates me is games professing one thing, then only delivering the opposite.