v0.5.5
As of right now the game features no art besides AI generated portraits. They are of mostly decent quality, but portraits alone -that don't even show the body- won't do. Hopefully more pictures will be added later on.
The text is very simple, and it skims through any kind of story or character development: it gives you the option to quit your job, because you don't like it, but doesn't mention anything besides that. Then it tells you that it'll be easy for you to find a new job, which is weird, what with you suddenly turning into a woman the day before - you'd probably be in a legal paperwork hell.
The pills are mostly just a character customization screen with extra, convoluted steps: you take one and it makes you Asian, another will make your tits smaller, and so on.
Since so far there isn't really any gameplay, I'm mostly rating this on its story, which is very weak.
As an example, there's one scene where within the span of 4 two-liners you go from the start of your first date to having sex with her, without a single description of the character. There's no way to get invested in that, and as such, the resulting description of the sex scene is fully devoid of any meaning or emotion.
There weren't any obvious grammar mistakes.
My recommendation would be to take a step back and rewrite the scenes and story so that the reader can relate, or at the very least get an emotional reaction from them.