VN - Ren'Py - The Prosecutor [v0.1] [DrBunny]

Personally i like the models/renders which got me to try out the game.

The story however is just all over the place with the most egregious instance being:

MC hates their brother; MC's best friend is infatuated with the brother (that's been berating MC) to the point of literally sniffing furniture the brother sat on.

@dev If this is your experience with friendship you need better friends.

The molestation, subservient kinks weren't to my personal taste but to each their own.

Well it can be better. The animations look like it's made with just a few pictures and looks like lagging. You should develop your animation more. Because these games are more popular if it's greatly animated. But the story looks nice so I am following it for now and see what happens in the future

This plot is almost an exact copy-paste of the pornhwa called Maidens In-Law, the asshole brother (not the rapist one) was talking to AND having an affair with one of the wife's sisters, not the mc's childhood friend (but he already had her before).

The pornhwa was meh, this game is following the same level.

This is the result of someone watching 1,000 hours of Japanese Hentai, absorbing all the bad ones and turning it into a AVN. The cuck harem formula never works for the sole reason that none of the LIs consider the MC to be first choice, even trying to turn this into a revenge plot will fail miserably since the beginning is so bad no one will want to continue playing this anyways.

Dev should stop taking inspiration from the porn equivalent of the sewers (Japanese Hentai), actually take a step back and try to make a coherent story that doesn't just drag the MC through mud, shit, grime, and other ungodly substances to describe just how low his life is.

TL;DR - you play as a creepy low-life trying to defy his fate as a cuck and is failing miserably because big bro Kevin cuckzoned him permanently

A ridiculous kinetic harem with a spineless MC.
Look, no character is perfect, and doesn't need to be, but you gotta at least give the player the ability to shape his main character. If you want your MC to come from a lowly place and develop into something different, this is not the way to do it. And worst of all is the forced relationships, when the MC just threw himself at his brother's wife after seeing her for the first time I had to drop the game, this is too ridiculous, not only is this a kinetic harem, but a poor one at that.
The game could be decent if the Dev rewrites the whole thing in a sensible way, gives the MC some spine and the player some freedom, but as it stands this doesn't even deserve a star, 0/5 game.

Short review

Played 5min and immediately was put off by the premise, that being the MC being ridiculed and belittled by his "big brother" who all woman fawn over and adore, despite clearly knowing he treats the MC like trash.

This is compounded by things like, when the player is told to believe that his "best friend" a girl, who is madly in love with the MCs "big bro" doesn't know that her so called best friend has been emotionally abused by this person she is so infatuated by and even sides with the "older brother" against her so called best/childhood friend...the sycophantic friend even sniffs the brothers chair. Talk about rubbing in an agenda of "hate" towards the MC...

This is a terrible way to start a game IMO and puts the player off immediately, especially when there is no reason for the behaviour towards the MC to be such, he is a good looking, intelligent and well adjusted "person" so the premise and behaviour towards him is completely nonsense.

I am all for the "big bro" being the villain and the MC needs to build his rep to prove the bro is a douche, but the MC being a pervert and needing to corrupt against an asshole brother is an ass-about-face way to do it. If the MC was a villain, then corruption makes more sense...

• Models look good, has strong oriental, eastern style/culture look, music and feel to it (I'm not versed in comic, anime, such style names or lingo)
• Writing is fine, little awkward now and then in its style and structure, but slight.
• Premise and plot create for a poor experience with character that the player does not like, LIs they would not want to pursue.
• Given the MC is not a "bad guy" his perverted nature throw the player off and is compounded by his beta behaviour.

For more details have a look at the review below from godscoper who couldn't have said it better.

Me, I say avoid this unless you desperate.

Stay if like Corruption/ Male domination (from Kevin)/ almost rape (from MC)/ Very horny MC.
While all girls love Kevin instead of MC.
If not, then dont waste your time and move on.

( kinetic harem )
Story: MC, a lazy kid who gets bullied by his brother (top lawyers around) and has all the girls after him. Some time later, Kevin invited MC to live with him and his wife, her sister, and the other girls. MC is in love with Kevin's wife, Tiffany. While all girls either love or hate Kevin.

short demo, 5-8 minutes long

Renders are pretty good so far, but the fake dream sex scene feels blended and has no emotion. You also see Kevin eating Tiffany in bed, and he stops because his work is calling.

Characters:
MC is a lazy teenager who gets bullied by Kevin, and all the girls dont want to give him a chance, so he peeps get off and force himself on Tiffany. Tries to be forceful with girls like him.

Kevin: No need to say much, just big brother bossy and controlling. OH yeah, he's also cheating on his wife. Most likely, it's because Tiffany can't get pregnant and thinks it's her fault, I'm pretty sure it's his fault, and he's trying to sleep with others. MC catches him on the phone with a mysterious woman, but we don't see her face while she is masturbating. Clearly, someone we've already seen and will probably be LI.

Amy: childhood friend, crush/madly in love with Kevin. To the point of literally sniffing furniture, the brother sat on. After they stop talking and a time skip happens, you find her at a bar, sad, and talk to her in the park. She's still in love with him, and I quote (I gave Kevin everything I had) "lost virginity to him and dump her?"

Tiffany: (MC crush and Kevin's wife) having sexual problems with Kevin?
Sees a doctor and gets pills for her and Kevin. Later in the update, MC almost rapes her, and then yells at him, and a few minutes later, masturbates thinking about him.

Ivy: doesn't like MC
Lexi: In the first meeting, she showed off to MC and fought with her sister Tiffany about (I didn't know you two were...), is it about Kevin?

Anna (Doctor/Kevin's friend) is trying to help Tiffany with sexual problems and pregnancy problems.

I feel like MC will only get seconds after Kevin has already slept with others, as if the story is about Kevin sleeping around.

Currently, it's a no-go for me; the story feels like MC has a pervy mind and helps all girls with their problems involving Kevin, and sex scenes aren't interesting, but I could change my mind in future releases, but most likely I won't.

.05/5