Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Remedy of Lust [v0.2] [Cloud Games]

Grammar is subpar even for a porn VN, but the spelling is OK. Quite odd. Looks like after the initial criticism Google Translate was used for this.
Due to being a 0.2 version, the game's story is cut off before anything meaningful happens. There is nothing special and interesting happening; you've seen it probably before in other games. The scenes come and end quickly and are just thrown together, without forming a coherent whole. Again, this is something you see in other titles where the dev is not a real writer.
Renders are the best part, though the lighting could be better here and there.
The dev's account has been removed from Patreon in the meantime, and it's not hard to see why.
The main reason why I played it is that I've developed a kind of weakness for abandoned obscure titles. If you don't share my weakness, you can skip that title.

This game is obviously half done when it comes to both the story and the lighting for some of the scenes. I can see how the dev tried to make the characters look good in certain shots but then they look like absolute garbage because he couldn’t pose them correctly. The often are oddly lit and that is a big no go for a game thats only redeeming factor is the visuals. The plot is boring and contrived and don’t get me started on how unreadable this dialogue is. If this dev gets an editor or a real writer to work with them I think it can do better or they should really step up those grammar knowledge to publish and english game.

absolutely terrible in every way.
the good: renders
the bad (and i mean really bad): everything else.
dev either isnt even trying with the story or he is no more than 16 year old.
there is absolutely not a single reason to support this project. fetishes are thrown for no reason other than to attract as much people as possible. which if the dev does( which he wont because, game is garbage) it would get sacked from patreon. its just a copy of other games and he tries to get a few bucks. he will most likely release 2 more updates and then abbandon this "thing"

Well.. English is damn bad, like hell bad.. yet it has something good in it.

First it tries to ride the hype of Dreams Of Desire, literally copy paste of interface and some characters/their bodies or parts of their bodies.

The Visit, is like this game but damn better.
English better, more characters, action and better animations and plot.

So.. it is a good base of a game, but it feels that Dev is trying to make a game with darker theme than others of its kind. Unconcious teacher rape on her bathroom floor.. somehow it feels more like rape than using characters in their bed.. hmm.. rape is a rape, I take it yet it makes me feel more like a bad character.

Then again it feels damn weird, that kid which gives the idea of rape disappears from the crime scene right after I agreed to rape teacher.. feels to be not likely. I mean, horny kid with unconcious teacher decides to rape her but offers it to his friend, then bail out when it starts to happen. It almost felt like he wanted to back stab me at that moment by taking pictures of me with her.. damn weird situation indeed.

I was almost certain that he would stay to take pictures of Us or her naked/raped.. yet it did not happen. So, at least Dev is not trying to be on track with my predictions