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VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Sister in Law [v0.05] [Tripod]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    ObsessivelyAroused

    Short summary:


    This is a low-effort shovelware. Absolutely everything about it is terrible and the lowest effort possible. Lack of coherent story, bad inconsistent writing, no character development, MC a complete creep with no redeeming qualities, actions by the character don't make any sense.



    Good Things


    • If you are a fan of the casual sharing in family setting and casual nudity that makes no sense - you may fool yourself into wasting time on this crap since it tickles your fancy


    Bad points


    • Everything about it screams low effort cash grab
    • Renders are crap - bad environments, models, expressions, lighting, posing, framing
    • Terrible writing and story
    • Kinetic
  2. 4.00 star(s)

    rr272blag

    If group nudity, cuckqueaning and stealthily fooling around are your thing, you'll love this game and you'll be willing to look through an imperfection or two. Personally, it's my new favorite. Just don't expect story and deep emotions, it's a porn game in a "porn world" setting.

    I simply haven't seen a VN like this before: focused on casual nudity and a guy fooling around while his wife is in the house. I also like the natural-looking bodies, even if they are of above-average fitness. The women don't have huge boobs, butts or lips, the man is not a body builder with a huge schlong.

    The wife tolerates her husband's fooling around and even finds it slightly endearing up to a point, but is either clueless or chooses to be clueless about the more serious cheating. And it's not like the MC is cheating because he's not getting any action from her or anything. They do plenty of stuff together too. Her two sisters visit and the group gets progressively more comfortable exposing more of their bodies while together.

    The renders are beautiful, but flawed with some clipping and lighting issues. Personally, I don't care about that so it doesn't factor into my score. The conversations can get a bit long sometimes, but I don't mind them and people are mostly naked while they're talking anyway. You do need to suspend your disbelief quite a lot for the situations, conversations and especially for the MC's supernatural ability to get women turned on as soon as they meet. But like I said, it's a porn game in a porn world setting so what did you expect.
  3. 3.00 star(s)

    KnightOwlSC

    This one is pretty bad. Renders wouldn't be so bad if lighting could be consistent but that is sadly not the case. One image will be super bright and then the next image is really dark but it's just 2 seconds later.

    The story is non-existent, the writing and dialog are really bad and there are a lot of times when expression changes are expressed in the writing instead of being shown. I swear if I have to read the word dingbat, witch or asshole one more time..

    -- Updated --
    So this one is a good example of learning as you go.. Dev might want to reconsider redoing a few of the earlier renders but the dialog definitely gets less annoying and the render quality goes up so bumping my review up.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    bonkdunk88

    Game well designed, the models are great, story line is very appealing and it has android support. My fav scene is the morning the shower with white pussy..... Thanks tripod! Waiting eagerly for the next update. May your code be without bugs.
  5. 4.00 star(s)

    katmandomo

    Version Reviewed: v04.08a

    Overview: He's the magic man with the magic hands.

    Caveat: I did not finish the story. Normally I try to play all the way to the end before I review something, but this VN seems neverending.

    Story: You are a pretty average looking guy who married a hot young wife and live out in the country on a shockingly barren piece of land with a pool and hot tub. Your wife's sister's like to come by on the weekends to enjoy the pool. The MC likes getting handsy with them. Seriously, he can't keep his hands off of a butt. His wife is kinda put out by this, but also suffers from a terrible disease that renders her incapable of noticing events that are happening more than 10 feet away. She also sends out a lot of mixed signals, getting really angry at them for going topless one minute, then talking about sharing and threesomes the next. It's not just the sisters either. He literally greets one of the sister's friends by sneaking up on her and sticking his tongue up her snatch. She has never met him, doesn't even know he is there (probably suffers from the same disease as his wife) and he's biting her ass with his teeth. This only works because the MC lives in a pornogame universe. Do not try this at home.

    There are two sisters. One is a total ditz that is obsessed with flashing her panties and is always horny. The other is a free spirit that just loves to fuck. The MC is more than happy to oblige. There is a long story about how the one sister was traumatized by a nurse that tried to shave her snatch, and after lots and lots of talk about it finally convinces the MC to let him shave her. The wife seemed kinda ok with this but he went behind her back anyway.

    That's kind of a running theme with this game. Everyone is like "the MC is an asshole" but then they're like "I'm so glad he's not a pervert like my former boyfriend" (while he has his thumb up her butt) and they all love him even though every time he's outside of his wife's direct line of sight he's molesting one of her sisters, sometimes even creampieing them. I keep waiting for the MC to get caught and suffer some consequences, but fate is always on his side. I'm also slightly disappointed that he talked about tying up one of the sisters naked in his garage but never got around to it.

    The one major failing I would give this game is that there is a lot of dialog, but it's all pretty much the same "what are you doing" "oh that feels good" "don't be so loud, my wife is 11 feet away". It gets kinda repetitive over time.

    Graphics: Kinda basic but serviceable. There are very few locations in this game so the updates make up for it in words. 75% of the game takes place on the pool/hot tub area. Most of the rest in the living room or bedroom.

    Fappability: It's a constant stream of fingerbanging and sex talk. Characters spend so little time wearing clothes that it's almost a joke when they put on a shirt. You can get off to this, and it is so long you'll probably get several sessions out of it. It is best to break this game up and take it in small chunks anyway, the repetitiveness of the dialog won't be nearly as noticeable that way.

    Conclusion: This is a fine porno VN. It's not trying to be the most innovative game of the year or anything, but it accomplishes what it sets out to do and has more than enough content to keep you engaged for hours. It's close to a 5 star game, but the bleak backgrounds and lack of variety in the dialogs hurts the final score.
  6. 4.00 star(s)

    ASX14

    Very good game. Interesting plot and characters.
    I like that this game is kind of realistic and don't have any weird content.
    Graphics are OK and well done scenes.
    I would like to see more scenes where MC is cought in action and other characters either join in or enjoy them selves by watching building up exciment.
    4.5/5
    Likes: Burg
  7. 4.00 star(s)

    Unicorn Mixer

    This VN proves that quality writing is so important. (At least for me anyway)
    The premise of the story is standard fare for the typical VN. MC is always on the hunt, the LI's are all willing, etc... However, the writing in this makes it very entertaining. It's written in a goofy style, which makes it fun, and easy to suspend disbelief.
    The visuals are not great but they are decent. I did not even care since the writing is so fun. (Seeing the trend here?)

    So I say if you are looking for a visually stunning VN, then this is not the one. BUT, if you are like me, and prefer good writing over visual flair, than you will have fun here.
  8. 4.00 star(s)

    Hedylogos

    Honestly I am not sure why I like this game, but I do.
    The story is basic, the graphics are basic, the animation is not great, etc. However it is funny and I don't know, I just like it.

    I think maybe because it doesn't try to be something over the top or crazy. It is just an easy little VN that is fun. Whatever it is, I keep getting the latest update and playing it.
  9. 3.00 star(s)

    Sonu The Pilot

    This review is based on the [v0.04.07a] :
    I have found one of the most humorous VN after a long time. These days it's rare to find a storyline which can make you laugh. The story is well narrated but very linear. The choices make little to no change at all in the story plot. The renders and animations are average. The models are all are of same size but with different color complexion (you understand when you play the game).

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    Animations - 2/5
    Renders - 3/5
    Story - 4/5
    Models - 3/5
    Music - 3/5
    Overall Gameplay - 3/5


    The story is still incomplete but certainly a funny one . I will update the review after the next major release.

  10. 5.00 star(s)

    swizzel9

    Goofy and funny erotic game. I like that it doesn't take itself very seriously and not pretentious like many games on this site. Every update has been very cheesy and sexy at the same time. Gets five star from me without hesitation.
  11. 5.00 star(s)

    SpankyM42

    Awesome game. The right amount of humour mixed with sexual interaction without unnecessary antagonists. Models are great. I wish that I had in laws like that. What ever happened to that mouse?
    Tripod, you've made a good one.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    Otherguy2012

    The story thus far is fun,fast,detailed character development,and with ZERO grind. Rare. Well done.
    It was fun to play.
    Some of the art could use a little work,but most all of it is good. I have seen few games that can develop characters well and be a fappable lol. This one does that pretty well :)
  13. 3.00 star(s)

    Geralt_R

    The Sister In Law is a cute kinetic novel about a somewhat sleazy MC, his wife and her two sisters.
    The game really has no story to speak of, it's all about the MC getting hands-on and closer and closer to his two sisters in law while there's also a plan to convince the wife to welcome her sisters into a neat little harem. However for some reason the game has no "harem" tag, so who knows, maybe it will have a more realistic ending? But that would not fit the tone of the story.

    Almost all of the teasing, dialogue and sex is centered around the pool in the backyard and the hot tub. Occasionally there's some shenanigans in the house as well. Other locations don't exist. So there's very little variation when it comes to the set pieces and environments.

    The renders are ok-ish. Not bad. Not great, but ok. At night the lighting is off, scenes tend to be a bit too dark at times. More ambient lighting would be required here. It's not super terrible, but light is certainly missing in several scenes.
    I like the character design a lot here, all the women are more on the petite side, have small(er) breasts and are far removed from some of the super curvy caricatures you often get elsewhere. I like petite women so that works for me. If you want super curvy big breasted characters... look elsewhere.
    If you like pubic hair you will also get lots of it here. Several characters have them here. One mini side plot revolves around sister Brenda's jungle and how the MC helps her trim it down.
    The game has a third person view, so you see the MC a lot. But that is more or less a requirement because if that game was POV the many, many teasing and sex scenes would just look silly.
    Facial expressions can look very off at times, much too exaggerated. But you don't see that too often, I mostly noticed it early into the game.

    Unfortunately the game has no real animations, what it has are the jerky slideshow animations you have seen many times before. Not entirely terrible, it's ok, but it's not even close to what you can get in other games.

    What I find a bit disappointing and also surprising is that while you get a million fingering scenes and a few full on sex scenes in this game, that there is no tenderness. The MC goes straight for the delicate spots of the girls and fingers them... all the time, sometimes he goes down on them... and then sex. But there is no kissing (I can't remember a single kiss in the entire game, not even with the wife!), no caressing, I can't remember the MC ever kissing a breast, he rubs a nipple or fondles breasts ever so rarely, this is really weird. There isn't any cuddling here either really.

    And another issue with this kinetic novel is that things get a bit samey after a while. While it is apparently based on real life events (that must have been one heck of a husband...), the fact that almost all scenes are either at the pool, in the pool or in the hot tub means that after a while you have seen it all. You only get variations of the same things over and over again eventually. And that the scenes are almost always about fingering doesn't help either.

    So the MC keeps fingering the sisters in law (and a friend) almost relentlessly, I would assume this kinetic novel has the most fingering scenes of any game I have played yet. In a recent update even a friend of the younger sister in law gets fingered (she also has actual sex once) and she's super ok with everything 5 seconds after meeting the MC for the first time. In fact, both she and the younger sister have a threesome 5 minutes after meeting the MC. Maybe some people are like that... I would have expected some build-up maybe.
    And eventually the MC fingers both the younger sister and her friend at the same time while his wife lies right next to them at the pool (she does notice it though and is at that point more or less ok with it)
    So this has huge focus on fingering, there's occasional sex as well (very little compared to all the fingering...), with all the four female characters, not at once of course.
    As mentioned there's one threesome in the game, but no girl on girl action. If you want that you may be out of luck, so far all the women make it very clear they are into men (= the MC) only.

    I have yet to encounter a single "I love you" in this game. Apparently this is all about raging hormones and not really deep emotions. Maybe it was like that in the "real life story", can't say. But what this game absolutely needs is some more emotional depth, some actual feelings, a little tenderness, some tender moments, not just constant horniness that almost always results in fingering the girls. Even a date somewhere else with just one of the girls would be welcome.
    And even if in the story this game is based on everything always happened in the pool or hot tub (according to the dev) it doesn't mean the game has to be the same. A change of scenery would be welcome every once in a while.

    So, the big question is ... can you have fun here?
    Well, if you are ok with kinetic novels and if you are ok with the rough animations... and if you are also ok with the fact that the entire game is set around a house, the pool and the hot tub and that many scenes feel very smilar after a while... sure, you can have fun here! But you REALLY need to like fingering scenes. And I mean REALLY.
    Otherwise the tone is very lighthearted, there's some comedy, some jokes, lots of hijinks and shenanigans and teasing with the ladies and the MC. Sometimes it's as childish as pulling down the pants. Other times the younger sister and her friend have sleep sex with the MC while wife Becky is also in the bed and unaware. So it can get quite a bit silly.
    But you can have a good time here if you accept the game for what it is.

    You also don't have to wait for things to escalate. So there's no endless teasing, the teasing is more about testing out the limits of the wife Becky and having fun with the sisters (and the friend) in the pool or hot tub while the wife is around. If you like this cheating aspect this game will give you quite a lot of that.

    Despite the relentless cheating in this game everything is still more or less good natured and fun. As long as you think cheating on sweet wife Becky is "fun" to begin with. I feel sorry for her actually.

    Chances are you may find the dialogue eventually a bit boring, since it's about nothing really, other than how horny everyone is or how to convince Becky to accept her sisters as lovers of the MC or how to make her accept that everyone can run around naked around the pool and hot tub. At times it feels as if everyone wants to gaslight Becky into accepting constant nudity and the harem with her sisters.
    The lack of a story is also problematic eventually because you can only have so many interactions with just three or four women in one location before things repeat. As I said before... chances are you may have your fill of fingering scenes eventually. Yet you get them all the time here. ALL the time.

    In my opinion this game needs to push things a bit further very soon and quite frankly, I cannot see how this kinetic novel can go on much longer, unless it will take a left turn and suddenly add drama. But I hope not, this game doesn't need drama, drama would ruin it actually.
    The wife is almost at the point where she will accept the sisters as part of a mini harem anyway, in the recent build she says she will have to think about it.
    So what could be next? Getting them all pregnant? Having a foursome? Maybe ease up on the endless fingering and introduce some variety...

    The problem is that the game no longer has any tension really. All three sisters are into the MC, the MC is lusting after everyone anyway, the only complication left is for the wife to fully come around and accept that her marriage has become polyamourous with three women.

    Anyway, if you want a feelgood harem game with almost zero choice (there are two choices in the game, both are super obvious), zero drama, lots of (fingering) action between the MC and four women... then The Sister In Law is certainly worth a try.

    Just don't expect anything fancy, complex or deep. You learn surprisingly little about the love interests here, since almost all their interactions are about teasing them, fingering them, getting down on them or having sex with them. Almost all dialogues are about that as well or how to gaslight Becky into accepting everything.
    So all you will really know is that Brenda, the middle sister, is really dumb (but sweet), has a kid you never see and that is almost never mentioned, that the youngest sister is a wild one, is still in school and dumps her stupid boyfriend early in the game... but exactly who these people are really, what the dreams are, their hopes, their plans, their hobbies, aspirations is more or less a mystery still. They are all just super horny for the MC and fool around all the time. The women in this game exist for the sex only and the MC only exists to finger them all the time.
    This can be a fun distraction for a while, but ultimately the game lacks a bit of substance and as mentioned before also actual love, tenderness and genuine feelings.

    Overall I think this is a perfectly average game. Not bad at all, not great either. Worth your time if you are ok with kinetic novels and mostly shallow fun. The teasing by the MC (and boy does he tease the girls) is kind of sleazy but also hilarious in a certain way. In my opinion poor Becky should divorce him and get someone who only has eyes for her... She doesn't deserve any of that. While her sisters are cuter, she's still quite pretty and in my opinion she should not put up with such a sleazeball husband. But of course it's a game with porn logic.
    And why exactly her sisters are so into the MC is also more or less a mystery, unless he really has magic fingers. That must be it. Magic fingers.
  14. 1.00 star(s)

    juneba

    Premise looked like it was exactly something I was interested in but it was some of the worst dialogue I've seen in a while. Challenges 30 Rock for the most jokes per minute but there's not a sense of humor in sight. Follow every bad joke up with lines of "Hahahaha" from every character and you've got this dialogue wrapped up.

    Models are pretty meh. Youngest sister is kinda cute though.
  15. 1.00 star(s)

    spinningcoindevil

    I wanted to like this one, the tags and the title promise a lot of good things , but I can't do it. The writing is distractingly bad, to the point where it's impossible to enjoy any other aspect of this that might be appealing.
  16. 5.00 star(s)

    fatemaker

    This game is one of my favorites. It may seem too simple, but it is really good. There are almost no choices in the game, it's purely a visual novel, and I think that's a plus.

    The text is easy to read, positive humor, endless fun. Good graphics. I enjoy every game update.
  17. 4.00 star(s)

    JackMiejov

    Review for The Sister In Law v0.04.05b:

    I started playing this VN right after it showed up on F95Zone. It was quite rough back then, but it has improved a lot. I criticized the developer for being borderline illiterate because the writing was so poor in terms of spelling, grammar, punctuation. The dialogue and narration read as though somebody with a thick Texas/Oklahoma/Arkansas accent used a text-to-speech tool that didn't understand the accent at all. There were so many words that mostly sounded correct but were spelled incorrectly, the text was just painful to read. More recent updates are a drastic improvement in writing. I haven't gone back and replayed the game, so the older writing might still be bad. The newer writing isn't perfect, but it isn't so bad that it completely draws the player's focus away from the experience like before.

    This is a visual/kinetic novel, not at game. There are virtually no choices and the overview calls this out, so you can't fault it for not having a "gaming experience".

    The visuals are good in more recent updates. Earlier updates have bugs/artifacts in the renders as well as lighting issues, but later updates are better. The models' faces/bodies are more natural than most games out there. The distant background in outdoor scenes is low quality, but at least it isn't relevant to the story.

    The story is quite shallow, which is perfectly fine for a porn game. The story and the characters are lighthearted and cute. It's actually refreshing when so many developers waste so much effort adding drama, action, sci-fi/fantasy, complex character development, etc. into their porn games and then they either do a poor job of it or nobody actually cares because it's just a porn game.

    Each update gives players about 10 minutes of play time if they actually read the dialogue and narration. The developer unfortunately uses an unconventional versioning/numbering system for updates, but at least the changelog tells players what's in each new update.

    If I had written a review the first time I played, I don't think I would've given the game more than 2 stars, but now that the game is more mature and the developer has made huge improvements in writing and visuals, I find the game quite enjoyable and I look forward to each new release.
  18. 4.00 star(s)

    LillyKat

    Let me preface with the notice I am only providing any negative as a constructive criticism and not in a bad way to the developer in any way. I appreciate these developers who are pushing through and presenting their ideas and actually providing something.
    We all complain so much (myself included) about all the game devs here who start something and never finish or move to another project. And especially those who collect all the financial support and then disappear, etc. Though we have that right, it seems we also like to take those that are completing projects and working hard and just beat them to death about every little thing. Appreciate it, provide constructive criticism and lets try to reward and empower those who want to actually provide content and get better. It doesn't have to be financial, but some constructive commenting or a little positivity can go a long way.
    All that being said, this game is what it is. It doesn't present itself as ground breaking story and writing. It doesn't propose to have an original theme or the best renders. It is clearly fetish or just sex pleasure related. The renders are not great but I have seen MUCH worse by much more experienced people and games with tons of hype. They are good enough to enjoy the story with though. The situations here are great if you are into that, and the main plus for me is that you dont have to wait 5 chapters while the characters have moral dilemmas about sharing lovers or screwing their in laws. Its accepted right away as something that is a character trait and it is fun to just go along with.
    The story hasn't gone anywhere exceptional yet other than leading you clearly towards a simple path of Harem - again which is refreshing sometimes. No crazy out of control twists where an alien comes to town and sticks its thumb in the wife's ass, or no organized crime ring that has your kidnapped dad by the balls. Its simple for the enjoyment of the adult side of things.
    I appreciate the scenarios where the MC is able to somewhat molest the characters, but not in a crazy way and it blends in and becomes a scenario and not some story drag about what happened. Pool sex, hot tub sex, bed sex, shaving, harem stuff. It checks a bunch of boxes, has good grammar and is easy to play. If it isn't your bag, no biggie. Just at least appreciate someone updating and moving forward who may create something amazing one day and don't try to shit on them or the game for it not being your bag.
    There are things that need improvement like lighting, settings, renders, some story gaps, but they will come with experience I think.
    Overall a good fun time that is easy to stay with.
  19. 4.00 star(s)

    Alfius

    I really enjoyed this VN.

    The only two negatives I have of the VN is that it's a Kinetic Novel and the renders are not top notch.

    The story itself is very enjoyable with a very plausible plotline.
    The sexual tension and dynamic between the MC, his wife and the 2 sisters are top notch.

    I just can not bring myself to give 5 stars to a Kinetic Novel, but an easy 4 stars from me.
  20. 2.00 star(s)

    SpecialXSauce

    Boring text slog. 2 of the female character names, and MC default name start with "B" making dialogue confusing. The author needs to learn basic writing conventions if they want to make a VN. Yes even if its porn