VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Sister in Law [v0.05] [Tripod]

Boring text slog. 2 of the female character names, and MC default name start with "B" making dialogue confusing. The author needs to learn basic writing conventions if they want to make a VN. Yes even if its porn

In some ways it's strange that I give this game 5* after have given up on it after playing this some upgrades ago, but I'm a strange person!

I must been in a bad mood when I tried this first, as I didn't appreciate either the humor or the lewdness in the game. Now when I tried it again I laughed so much about the silliness in the story. Even at the first parts that I didn't enjoy the first time. And I found the lewd scenes very fappable. So, as I'm an horny, happy and grateful (kåt, glad och tacksam) guy I can only say thank you for this Tripod!

It is an ok game but it feels rougher than it probably is. The renders are fine, nothing special but not absurd either. It's the silly wee things which are kinda jarring.

The story's a bit odd. There's very little choice in the game, it's very much a linear path story which is fine but there's an underlying issue with this because one of the story threads is a bit peculiar. There are two sisters, one of which is called Brenda, or something, and basically her whole story is that 1) she's an idiot and 2) she has a hairy bush and doesn't like shaving it. That's it. That is (so far) her entire input to the game. Now I've played a lot of porn games, but the sheer amount of time and dialogue spent talking about this characters bush.... it's staggering. And it's not even the MC notices and passes comment about it, but rather the MC talks to his wife about it and they discuss it. The developer must have a hairy fetish or something because it gets referenced time and time again until there's a whole scene where she gets trimmed

There's also an issue with the manner in which the story is told. It has an issue where dialogue is one font and colour and internal dialogue is another, but things like characters laughing or the like are imbedded within the text so you get dialogue like

What! really! Ok, Ok I won't. 'under his breath' I wonder what she thinks she is hiding. 'Chuckle' Women I will never understand them.

So you read it and go "what's Chuckle Women?" As I said, not a major issue but makes the game feel rougher than it probably is.

I love this game--even hotter knowing it is mostly based upon true events. The story is hilarious--and the characters just come to life in the story... The male MC is a cad, but also funny. His wife is hot and sexy and very understanding about her randy husband. Mostly set in a rural area, where nudity is OK, like in a hot tub at night. There is a lot of fun playing though this game.

Good game
Interesting story , the wife is a peach and so are the sisters , different personalities
The MC is pretty interesting though at times he is a bit of a creep , but it doesn't bother me that much.
Playtime wise it has a bit of playtime 2-3h , but again like in any other VNs depends how fast you read
All in all I recommend this VN 110%

This was a great game baha straight to the point and the MC is a complete savage. I greatly enjoyed the dialogue only input is the scenes are a bit jumpy at times besides that this was an enjoyable game keep up the good work MC!

For me this Novel started off a little cringe worthy in the dialogue but has continued to entertain me since. For a newer game the updates are fairly quick and while the images might need work I think it is defiantly a project that needs to be supported to allow the developer time to get the equipment that will allow for better quality.

As for question from previous reviews on what is the novel about. It is about a guy who is a bit of a perv who is attracted to his wife and her sisters and the world surrounding that. Fairly simple to understand and doesn't need to be more than that. Refer back to what is classed as the greatest sitcom in history Friends and all it is about is a group of friend and their life.

So if you want a entertaining novel about a guy, his wife and her sisters try it and stop listening to people that want to complain about everything because they can't do anything else.

.4 update.

Alright, I've tried playing, and enjoying this game a couple of times now, and my only question is: "What the heck is the story supposed to be about?"
This feels less like a cohesive story, and more like a series of moments tied together by a series of poorly written scenarios, with some incredibly bad dialog to go with it. I can't even begin to figure out your end-game, other than the male protag is going to try and figure out how to bang his wife's sisters. What's the motive, though?

This is one of those games I think would be better suited with a reboot. Try to figure some sort of semblance of a story, rewrite the dialog, and then come back and try again.

What can i say that the moderators will be happy with? Probably nothing but here goes my constructive criticism of this game.

It has an interesting, if albeit a rather generic plot/storyline. The characters are ok. The models look great, especially in the case of the two sisters. I personally found the wife to be somewhat challenging to look at, I think she probably needs a bit more work, especially around the face. Of course that is just my opinion, but i recommend investing some time to rework her so shes a bit more appealing. In some of the scenes, the angle of the head does not match the angle of the rest of the body, for example the man in the bedroom has his head turned almost 35 degrees in angle to his body and makes his neck look elongated and broken. So at the moment i can give 3 stars, i appreciate the hard work but at the moment its just kind of "ok".

This is for version .01a
Has a decent base for the story. Pacing is a little off, but that can be cleaned up. The graphics are all over the place. Almost felt blinded on a few renders.

It has potential. Will check it out, when there is more and update the review and score as needed/

great start in chapter 1 realistic banter between the wife and MC , renders are very well done , if the developer continues this quality and keeps this updated regularly this will be a winner
defiantly looking forward to the next chapter

This is a review for v0.01a of the game.

As was to be expected, this game is still in a very rough state. The dialogue needs a hefty amount of polish. Inconsistency, grammatical errors galore, punctuation all over the place, train of thought writing rather than structured sentences. Some don't care, but for me, it detracts from the VN quality.

The models are okay, they do their job, but there are some awkward zoom-ins which stretch the models' faces.

The premise is interesting, the execution needs a ton more work. Good luck to the author.

Really nice idea. A fresh storyline. The art of the models is sexy and nice. It could be better, but it doesn´t disturb the athmosphere of the game. The plot proceed slowly and build up a nice tension. I am looking forward to play futher updates. So far I give 5 of 5 stars.