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VN - Unity - Abandoned - The Spellbook [v0.20.0.0] [NaughtyGames]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    desmosome

    [v0.18.0.1]

    Only reviewing the NTR path where MC doesn't like it (because that's the only path I played before quitting).

    This is what NTR looks like when the dev has no real coherent plan for the overall progression. There is no smooth corruption arcs or any coherent themes. It's like the dev just throwing random scenes at you.

    Truthfully, it was kinda decent at first. The GF had a decent thing going on at the beginning with her cheating behind MC's back and slowly getting more corrupted. It becomes much less interesting rather fast though. She turns full confidently slutty whore rather fast. All the other girls have even less of an arc, and they just kinda turn into mega sluts immediately or are already sluts to begin with.

    That's the thing with this game. If you prefer the general themes of females getting corrupted and being subservient to some antagonist cocks, you won't really find much to enjoy here. This is 90% about confident females and humiliation of the MC rather than cheating or NTR.

    Well, I won't say that there isn't an audience for this, but it certainly won't appeal to the NTR purists. If you like the western cuckold style that is just all about the MC knowingly being a cuck and getting humiliated, maybe there is something for you. However, even with that criteria, I couldn't really say this is anything better than average because of the initial criticism about its poor story structure throwing random scenes at you.
  2. 1.00 star(s)

    Mossrock

    0.16.5.0
    I'm not saying "it's bad", I'm saying I could piss a more meaningful and complex story in the snow.



    Let's start with choices, they come in two forms: One, you can choose which character you want a scene with, which is there to artificially increase replayability for the most part, and two, you can choose the type of content you want to see. You can decide to get cucked, share your bitches including totally-not-mom, or go down a "love" route, as if turning people into sex-crazed hysterical zombies counts as "love", but at least NTR is avoidable which is a plus for those who dislike it.



    Story is utter garbage. You're some random cringy loser virgin who's explicitly drooling over his "landlady" (who's totally-not-mom) right off the bat like some self-appointed trailer trash, along with your cringly loser virgin friends. You find a magic book, cast a horny spell on your totally-not-mom with the idea of sharing her with your friends, suddenly "she was being corrupt!", totally-not-mom becomes a horny little slut.
    Rinse and repeat for every single character.
    This, with a level of writing that all porn scripts aspire to have (but often fail by accidentally getting deeper) such as saving your totally-not-mom from evil rapists with knives and guns, which she obviously repays by blowing you in public.



    Characters are utter garbage. You have totally-not-mom, who, despite the spell's effects, is sometimes still more self-aware of her actions than you, which isn't much of a plus for her as it is a minus for the player character, besides, other times she's totally on boat with everything because fuck consistency. Then you have a totally-not-sister who's very cool because she's smoking, has a tattoo and is a masochistic pig who loves the taste of cum, except when she's not any of those things becuse fuck consistency. You have totally-not-cliché virgin girlfriend who wants marriage first and sex later because of her religious nut parents, until you fuck her mind with a spell. And a few more characters with similar trends I'm just not willing to recall.

    They have no real depth to them, and while I'd love to say they're "one note", I can't, because just about all of them wildly swing between the same two notes - there's little to no differences between their personalities. Dialogues, especially during scenes, are quite repetitive. There's not much happening in terms of character development either - you hit them with some sex magic, they start craving cock, and you can either provide it yourself, let others provide it, or both.

    As I'm not particularly a fan of sausagefest NTR, I went with the "love" route which leads to a "harem". There's just two itty bitty problems with this particular route, it's missing the love and the harem parts.
    Supposedly NTR and love, the 2 main routes both split into 2 subroutes:
    Love route to "true love", and "domination",
    NTR route to sharing, and cuckoldry.
    And while I can't speak of the NTR route, I can tell you that as of now, despite my best attempts, I found no "domination subroute" outside of maybe a couple of sex scenes where characters are mostly just roleplaying (as it ends with the scene), so choosing a domination scene seems to make exactly 0 difference story-wise.
    And again, unless you consider reducing women into cockstarved mental sluts to be "love", there's not much happening in terms of love either.

    So what I got instead of love (or domination) and a harem on this route was a bunch of batshit insane jealous sluts who constantly generate conflict when they're not actively chocking on cock (and sometimes even then). Makes me wonder if that NTR sausagefest would've been more sufferable, but no use crying over played game.
    This insanity includes totally-not-mom who turns into an insecure bitch who even calls her totally-not-daughter a cheap slut in one of her hissy fits (and vice versa), and in another she berates the player for not breaking up with his dumb bitch girlfriend for her, then there's your nutjob girlfriend who straight-up attacks your totally-not-mom during one of her episodes of lunacy, simply because she saw you talk to the bitch and that got her triggered.
    You want a moment of peace? No, and also, fuck you.
    You talk to another woman, including totally-not-mom?
    You're a piece of trash, how dare you talk to stupid bitches.
    You look in the general direction of another girl, like your nutjob girlfriend?
    You're a shit stain, how dare you visually discern dumb sluts.
    You exist in the same reality as any other female, like literally any other character?
    ...You get the point.
    Expect somewhere between a shitload and a fuckton of pointless, ridiculous, primitive, cheap, soap-opera style melodrama, where nobody (including the player) makes sense, and where your best reaction to it is between telling them to "calm down" (as if that ever worked...) and literally getting on your knees like a properly trained doormat and begging them to stop.
    Which they never do of course, even though they claim they're yours to be used, and that they'd do ANYTHING for you, evidently the exception is anything you actually ask them to do. Because fuck you.

    Now, this wouldn't be THAT hot a pile of flaming garbage if the player character had this mysterious ability to LEARN from repeated failure and change, or at least try to change accordingly, but he does not, not in the slightest.
    Every minute I played this game I wished I had the option to put those deranged bitches in their respective places, but that would put an end to this mental institute of a story, and that's not what the dev(s) are going for, evidently.

    But I am being a little unfair to the player character. You see, not only you get a spellbook to turn characters into whiny, jealous, cock-starved bitches, you also get a fairy (of "love") in this route, who actively encourages to oogle, get horny for, sluttify and finally bang every human being with internal reproductive organs, including your totally-not-relatives, because you having sex with them feeds the fairy (or some other convenient excuse).
    So you do that, and then she calls you a dumbass just for daring to look at them, which she actively encouraged like 5 seconds before, despite knowing it's guaranteed to trigger literally every single woman present.
    You could call it her hypocrisy, but considering nobody in the game ever sees that, and the player's habitual apology streaks whether he's at fault or not, I'd rather just call this idiocy "inconsistency", which is ironically the only thing the game is really consistent with.

    By the way, this cursebook you found? Yeah, it's forgotten, who cares about it anyway, it's not like it's in the titl...uh, whoopsies?



    Visuals, including animations, range from good to great. Not the best you can possibly find, but definitely in the top 10%, a stark contrast to the writing.
    If you're interested in the scenes, I'd strongly suggest literally any method of viewing them other than playing the game.



    Sounds are nonexistent. That's it.



    Grammar and spelling I could label as broken, unnatural, basic and primitive, or in one word, "poor". It's not garbage per se, but it has enough mistakes to make an English teacher weep, and be off-putting for the rest of us. I do not know if the developers actually speak English or not (I'd wager it's the latter) but if you're monetizing a product you offer in "English", then least find somebody to churn through this 4th grade level mess? Trust me, it's not hard to find somebody who actually speaks English, and the game would only benefit from characters not sounding like uneducated dumbass overgrown children playing grownup...although it definitely fits the story better, now that I think about it.



    Overall today was a terrible day to have a brain, I'd pay to unplay this game.
  3. 2.00 star(s)

    monk_56

    TL/DR: Too much of this game is NTR for it to merit much attention if you dislike the kink. MC looks like a little bitch as well. Female Models are really great - fairy content is pretty hot. It is rare to get high quality rendered fairy content. Plot and writing are the definition of mediocrity.
  4. 2.00 star(s)

    delacroix2

    V. 0.18.0.0
    After months, I replayed this "game".

    Pros
    Aurora is beautiful I love her design but there' s more content in the NTR path :(
    First scene between the roommate and the MC on the NTR path was so hot.
    The fairy in harem path is cute

    Cons

    Harem path

    Harem path turned out to be a sex fest + jealousy
    Damn horrible girlfriend Kelly you can't leave her (romance or sharing path), I hate her! :cautious:
    Romance , no... really... seriously?
    1 sex scene with landlady +roommate + MC, just 1 scene!!!!!
    Corruption is disgusting in a romance/harem path
    Dialogues in sex scenes LI's are treated like sluts


    NTR/sharing

    Forced threesomes with horrible Kelly and beautiful Aurora
    ( landlady ) , in the latest updates she always fucks the ugly fat guy every time, it's boring.
    The explanation about Kelly's corruption was ridiculous , haha
    The roommate does porn haha , honestly I don't know where her story goes , who cares
    Seems like 2 different games, 1 - MC game , 2 - landlady game



    - No optional scenes
    - Everyone forgot there was a damn book hahaha :ROFLMAO:
    - There's no main story, bad development. All are random events
    - Secondary characters are forgotten, you wonder where the f*ck are they?
    - Sex became boring, missionary and doggy style all the time
    - Disgusting, uncharismatic MC.
    - Sex scenes are shorter and repetitive, 15 seconds and I think I'm exaggerating

    Sum: It's a complete disaster in any route you play, it's a bad game and bad is an understatement.
    #Fap game

    Two stars thanks to Aurora, I think she was the only one who loves the asshole MC. He didn't need a damn book to make her fall in love
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    uniqueusername69

    One of my favourite NTR style games, the ending is pretty great, definitely looking forward to where it's going to! Might not be everyone's cup of tea and I've not tried/nor am really interested in the 'love' route but I like the NTR one! Reviews on here have to be so many characters long
  6. 3.00 star(s)

    thedeww2

    It was alright.
    -Story was not great, very cookie cutter. Moves really quick into sex scenes which is good considering the theme. Characters have personality differences that effect the end result of the Spellbook's effects.
    -Renders underwhelming and not crisp. Feels like the were better, but the creator likes a blur filter. Models themselves are good.
    -Content was entertaining. Only a handful of meaningful choices though.
    Overall: 6/10
  7. 1.00 star(s)

    ecopeon

    This game isn't for me.

    The renders are at best ok (there aren't many renders per scene, and the cumshots in renders are particularly weird).

    The plot is a bit like the MC is a creepy 15 year old - finds spellbook, uses it to basically bewitch his landlady and others into sexual situations.

    There are very few choices, and no scrollback with the mouse to change your mind when there is a choice (might be a limitation of whatever engine?)

    The English translation is ok but not great, but I just couldn't get into the game with such a shallow plot.

    I think the game needs to go back into the kitchen for a while.
  8. 1.00 star(s)

    lok34

    Critique - v 0.16.5.0

    It's hard to describe how bad the plot is, the lack of imagination will actually piss you off.
    The sex is handed to you on a plate with the use of magic, easy peasy, it's not the magic that is the problem but the way the script is written.
    There is no interesting story and zero character development to draw you into the game, the characters become full blown sluts as soon as the magic is cast, basically doing anything and everything with the flick of the wrist ;).

    The first 3 male characters are basically teenage virgins, yet when two of them end up getting sucked off by their mate's mom they go full blown Dom mode "YEA SUCK THAT COCK YOU SLUT" and the like.
    Not being funny but if teenage me had ever ended up in the position to have some milf sucking my dick, I'd be paralysed from shock and pleasure.
    These guys however go full BDSM dom master-sub kinda roles, it's nuts and totally ridiculous.

    Let me give you another example of the terrible plot, at one point a FMC is blackmailed into sex with the use of a job contract.
    Apparently if she gets fired she is fined $1,000,000, ummm did a child write this contract?
    Every time she refuses to perform a sex act she is fined $500, this is the most legally ridiculous contract that only would have been valid during colonial times when slavery was still legal. We get told in the game the lawyers made the contract air tight, pffft, well that explains in then.

    I can only imagine that the devs wrote this VN with the mentally challenged in mind as the scenarios and writing are of such poor standard that only those with the lowest of IQs could find this entertaining. I'd give a star for the decent renders, but the plot deserves negative stars, soo...
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    Spideyknight

    Probably the best game on the site for serving it's purpose. Yes there are more flashy and nuanced games, but who wants all that stuff when you are trying to get to business? The Models are excellent, the scenes are hot, and it gets straight into it. No sandbox nonsense, no thinking, just business. Perfect.
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    Candy Suxx

    The game has a decent story but the strong factor of the game is its renders and the fact it is a total fuckfest with shitloads of content for both NTR and non NTR lovers So if you are looking for a quick workout then this is the game for you.
  11. 5.00 star(s)

    Jolong22

    This game definitely has a lot to offer. Starting with quality of renders, it's very good, animations are perfect as well, smooth, in high resolution, can't complain on anything. It is even better in story department. Two different story lines which should satisfy everyones taste. So far there is at least 10 hours of story, 20+ when you play both lines. Overall, solid game which is worth playing for sure. Nice job. 8.5/10. [v0.14.5.0 Public].
  12. 2.00 star(s)

    Mr_Sel

    Renders are very nice but the story is actually very much what would you expect from the porn movie: dumb, fast-forward, no character development etc. It pretty much misses the 'novel' part in VN.
    Just unlock the gallery and you will get 100% value out of this title.
  13. 1.00 star(s)

    Porthas

    Alright, I didn't get very far into this game's story or lewd content because the engine and design lack the basic features I get in dozens and dozens of other VN's.

    There's a mute button. It doesn't work.

    Un-skippable disclaimers at start of the game eat up time telling me the same thing I read the first time they popped up. I read them, let me skip the disclaimers after I've read them.

    There's not enough control over windowed mode. I should be able to re-size windowed mode however I want and have always-access to maximize/minimize the window - those buttons should always be available.

    If NTR sausage-fest is an "avoidable" feature of the game (and it's advertised as such) don't put extra sausage on the cover of the game. I'm not into games where I'm competing with extra sausage. I'm not interested in other dudes in my lewds.

    Introducing my MC avatar as a complete and utter moron isn't really a great selling point either. I start wacking off in the middle of the house in the living room. Was this supposed to be a comedic moment? Nobody (hopefully) is this dumb. Not a strong selling point. Maybe it's French humor, idk, definitely not my cup of tea.

    Dozens and dozens of VN's I've played - none of them have me "install" the game. This one shouldn't make me do that either - let's drop that please and stay away from my registry.

    So, you've got competition. Make your game in recognition of the competition you have and the features they offer. People have no incentive to play (or pay for) a game with less features and more aggravation.

    Cheers!
  14. 4.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 216358

    Overall, a well put together and enjoyable game with a few moderate issues.

    Pros
    • Excellent renders and visuals
    • Excellent character models
    • Character models have realistic body proportions
    • Beautiful character models
    • Excellent variety of sexy outfits
    • Good story
    • Good writing
    • Good character development
    • Good sex scenes
    • Good animation
    • Plenty of content to play through

    Cons
    • Some choices in the game are ignored with the text and dialog saying you did things that you didn't. This is a big immersion breaker. It would be much better to remove the choices altogether than to give them and ignore them. The problem is especially bad with the Kelly/David content. Three choices in a row are flat out ignored later in the story/dialog/script. If you strongly reject all advances from David (when making the choices for Kelly), it makes the sex scene in the bathroom with Kelly and David make no sense.
    • The text, dialog, and story do not always match what is being shown on the screen. It is especially bad during sex scenes. For example, the MC will tell the girl to look him in the eyes while she blows him. Her eyes stay closed the entire scene. Another common example - The MC tells the girl to blow him deeper and take his entire cock into her mouth. Nothing on the screen changes and the same animation continues to play while the text says something that isn't happening on screen. This is a big immersion breaker. This is a common problem with this game. I've played a lot of games on this site and most of them change the screen or animation to match the text, dialog, or story but this game frequently doesn't.
    • Approximately 8% of the sex scenes aren't animated, just pictures are used
    • A few inconsistencies if you choose the dark NTR path. For example, the MC beats up two large male thugs with one kick each in the park and then later in the game, the MC gets his ass kicked very easily in the bar with Grayson. The problem with the dark NTR path is that it turns the MC into a spineless weasel pathetic loser whinny bitch. Once you choose the dark NTR path it is like you are playing an entirely different MC! The old one died (not literally but figuratively).
    • The English in the game needs some help. It badly needs a proofreader. There is really no excuse here as so many subscribers are willing to do it for free these days.
    • A few of the renders in the early chapters are too grainy. It looks like the shadows and shadow effects were overdone and it doesn't look good. Fortunately, this only happens half a dozen times in the early chapters.
    Overall, I had a fun time with the Love path and the Naughty Dark path. The Dark NTR path is so horrible that I can't recommend it. I couldn't connect and relate to the MC at all in the Dark NTR path. Perhaps you can, but I wasn't able to.

    This would be a 5 star game easily if it weren't for the Cons. Overall, the dev does an amazing job with the game. It is a fun and clever game that is well written overall.

    I recommend this game and encourage others to give it a try!
  15. 5.00 star(s)

    Fukasaku

    The developers deliver monthly updates, they allow you to download it for free with a delay between free and those who pay. The updates are very good too. The game is very complete, not that it is finished, but that there is a lot of content. There are multiple routes, there is a lot of content in each of the routes. I prefer the harem route, i dont like the dark route, but in the dark part, there is a route that you can get all the girls back, basically stealing them back and adding a bit of corruption with them, which breaks a bit the monotony of the harem route. I recommend this game for sure.
  16. 5.00 star(s)

    I_Muad'Dib_I

    One of the best games so far! I like visuals, story (interesting enough), both love and dark pathes. Decided to support them on patreon, can't get enough:p Love MC's "landlady", she is just a beastie in both pathes. Wish there could be more games like this!
  17. 5.00 star(s)

    ronanbarbarian

    This game has good storyline and the dark routes are exceptionally horny.
    The MILF characters are really hot and highlight for me was DPing the 'landlady' with your friend.
    The love routes are super sexy too and all the characters are extremely fappable. My favourites are Nancy (Landlandy ;-)) and mates redhead mum. Woo hot.

    The story develops and good bit of humour and little bit left of field too to keep it interesting. Like a cum loving fleshlight fairy.
  18. 3.00 star(s)

    GTBALL_BALLY

    The story premise is okay
    Not that great to be honest
    Unique twist to the magical book idea
    Love the character designs and the overall feel of the game (only love route)

    Talking about the Love route

    It ticks every boxes
    If you are kind of a player who stays loyal to one character check
    Have multiple partners check
    Chemistry between each girl and Mc is unique and is very beautiful
    The story is cheesy at times and a bit cliche but very well written
    The start of the game is a bit abrupt but to the point
    The animation are over the top
    Girls are of all sorts To fulfill a wide variety of audience
    The story is funny at times and at times Really touching like the scene with aria when she and Nancy have a jealousy fight and
    Mc and aria end up on the roof of the car under the sky full of stars and it's like they are the only ones in the world, everything else doesn't matter
    The story sometimes is really close to reality and sometimes poles apart
    Full of drama
    A great recipe for a story


    To talk about the dark route (NTR)
    Was curious because had never even heard the word before
    Tried it...........
    Personally I couldn't go through the first 10 minutes after chapter 3
    Whenever I read a VN or play a VN type game
    Or any game for that matter
    I personally imagine my self in the protagonist's life in said story
    And once I started the ntr route
    Oh boy it almost made me punch the monitor
    My blood started boiling at chapter 5 with the mr dick scene
    Just wanted to kick the shit out of the boss and shred the book immediately even if it had the vaccine for aids, cancer and c-19
    After I went through that scene
    I didn't touch the game for a month
    Later today was so bored that thought to give the dark route another try
    Maybe I was missing something and there must be some redeeming qualities that's why the dev made a separate route for it
    Working twice as hard for the same game
    It's almost like making two games simultaneously
    So I went and played the dark route till the end
    And now I might just ask God to erase the last hour of my memory
    The anger, the pain, the cringe,
    Everything about the dark route made me hate the game
    For a new player who might try the dark route directly then
    It's either you're okay with it
    Or it makes you feel really bad
    I now get why people get batshit krazy when ntr word is thrown
    NTR not for me and for most of you out there I'll not recommend ntr
    But just dont take my word
    Try it once

    The review of 13.0 update has been a roller coaster ride
    The dark route has left behind a sour taste which is why it gets a low rating but not all hope is lost for the game
    Not saying the game is crap
    I like the 'love route' of the game very much
    The dev is very talented and is a great guy in general
    They give the game essentially for free (only asking for support from the community who enjoy the game), a bit late that patreon supporters sure but I dont care

    If the game was only with the love route or I had never tried the dark route then the game definitely would have gotten a better review
    But as it stands trying the dark route fucked up the game for me
    It's like instead of beer you were served a mixture of your piss with everyone else's piss in the bar

    I'll be waiting for the next update for the love route and will now stay clear of the dark route indefinitely
    I've learnt that not all curiosities are meant to be dealt with
    Some skeletons are better be left 6 feet under in peace
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    Darth Sidious

    As of 0.13.25, a truly fantastic game. Especially if you are dominant and like NTR like myself. There is a 'Good NTR' route perfect for us. For those who are into the classical humiliation of the MC there is the 'Bad NTR' route as well. There is a 'Love' route too that should be entirely NTR-free, haven't tried it myself because straight up traditional bores the crap out of me.

    This is one of those semi-hidden gems out there, and the developer is actively posting updates on Patreon so it's worth getting vested interest in. If you haven't already, try it out!
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    ThaRealThiccShady

    Crazy to me this game gets that many negative ratings.
    You can tell by the banner the girls are hotter than almost any other game on the market and the game offers very different, very clearly labeled paths so if you enjoy incest/romance(because if the former isn't your thing just label them as roomies or etc) with an obviously high does of perversion there's a path almost solely for that and then if you enjoy NTR(Not my cup of tea but to each and all) it's actually relatively well done and you have some degree of power over how much of a beta/cuck the MC is about it.
    And one path doesn't ruin enjoyment of the others because the writing is both different and similar enough to keep a common feeling without diluting it across paths(To me a lot of VN's have drastically different tones on different playthroughs that ruin/contradict each other) .
    Not saying all of the writing is Hemmingway, far from it a lot is simplistic to a comical level, but it all does it's job and often does it in an engaging, attractive way. It's not 100% serious ofc, in fact it's arguably largely absurd like most VNS/porn in general, but this is also done well for the style it is and keeps you laughing along. After all fiction is supposed to be judged against what it can reliably provide, and this one doesn't require amazing writing to provide enjoyment. And again if you just want to click through it for the knockout animations and disassociate from the plot that's an option, too.

    Finally rare in that being a Patreon sub gets you some extra content that with other games you can usually find on some site; no with this one you choose the app sign in with same email and it changes the writing in game. And similarly the app only loads the current release after a set amount of time(Depending on your level of contribution on the account you sign in with) so unlike a vast majority of games there are notable rewards for paying for it. Clever and admirably done.
    Beyond that the devs, while very busy, make it a point to stay in constant contact with their patreon even while their family/personal life isn't great and they do consistently great work.
    In closing highly recommended on every level. Would rate it 2-3 times if I could