This review is subjective, based on what I like and what I don't.
Pros:
- Genres. It has netori, a lot of netori. Most likely one of the biggest amounts of netori LIs. Also, it has sandbox which let me focus on a part of story I want to and a small bonus as planned end-game pregnancy.
- Lot of LIs.
- Humor. Some dialogues are funny. Maybe not ROTFL funny, but at least heh funny.
Cons:
- Problems in timeline. Like a lot. I was called by father's surename even before touching heritage things. Also some smaller mistakes like Makoto talked about interview when it wasn't published yet.
- Typos and writing mistakes. I understand that sometimes dev miss one or few letters in several scenes, but amount of typos here is dramatic. The worst is when you have to read that MC's fucking him instead of her.
- Sound in scenes. It's generally a good thing, BUT these sounds are generic and it happens that you hear sex sounds while blowjob or blowjob sounds while cumming. This and two above cons make this production extremely sloppy. Also, need to say that blowjob sound (slurping) sometimes just make me sick.
- NPC avatars. Some bodies have very bad proportions, huge heads, small bodies, like caricatures. Sometimes they just look like they have a stroke - for example Lucy (Lily Rader).
- Dialogues. They are just average. Nothing special. There's no bond with most of characters and I'm reading them mostly because of humor.
- Paywall. It's in acceptable form here, but it's always a minus for me. I'm not supporting games with paywalls, even small, just as a rule. I know devs need to earn, but this way is a big no-no for me, especially that there are other ways like cheats for paying users or releasing public versions few weeks later for free, so supporters can play it much earlier.
- Video quality. It's hard to make it good in Ren'Py game, but it's possible.
To summarize. I think I wouldn't play it at all, if it has no netori. There's a lot of places to progress, that's why I'm bothering with longer review, also it's hard to find a game with so much netori. I also think this game would be much better, if it's HTML - it would let dev use better quality of videos and real sound, but it's too late for that. 2 stars and only because it has a lot of netori, but I hope dev will change my mind with future updates. Especially first 3 cons that make this production very sloppy can be fixed by just some extra effort and paying attention to details.
Edit: Dev motivated me to change my review from 2 to 1 star. No reflection at all after several bad reviews pointing on the same mistakes.