2/5 because there's so much potential in the setting and scenes, but at its current stage, it feels bland at best, mostly about how characters and mechanics are handled in the game, leaving so much to be desired. I really hope the dev sees this because I know this can be an amazing game. Most of my points tie into each other, and I hope my train of thought makes sense here.
My issues/suggestions:
1) The game doesn't respond to NTR events, especially Luna IRL. There's no dialogue during or after NTR events when you talk to Luna in the living room, the only available interaction is her default dialogue where she tells you to go back to the game. As far as I know, it really just serves as a placeholder during the introduction of the game, and one extra scene, and does nothing otherwise. It feels so empty seeing Luna have 0 reaction to the events in the game. Picture this. The MC logs out of the game, walks out his room, and he sees Luna is doing erp with strangers on the big TV screen in the middle of the living room. The MC nor the Luna have anything to say about it. Come on man, 0 reaction? I think this is worsened when you can barely interact with Luna outside of dungeons. I've seen comments in the thread from 2024 talking about the same thing about the concept of interacting with her IRL and it's sad to see nothing much has done. If the player could have different conversations with her after major events, or gets caught IRL during NTR scenes, then it would be such a nice touch. I'm aware there are the occasional story events later on that happen IRL, but colour me surprised when Luna never mentions anything about her relationship with the MC ever again after the start scenes. Which brings me to:
2) The game handles Luna's corruption so poorly. If Luna was established to be a nymphomaniac from the get go, this wouldn't be a problem. Instead the game goes from 0-100. Here's the story that the player goes through. The game sets up this scenario where Luna invites the MC to play video games with her, establishes the MC as her love interest, hops on the game together, loses during the first combat, gets sexually assaulted once, and then turns into a complete slut with no remorse towards the MC at all, going around the town fucking everyone she sees. The exact moment the first town was unlocked and Luna leaves your party, she goes to have sex with Raze and the bath house guy. The first event I had was the Raze scene in the pub, where Luna gets harassed by Raze. The next event I had, Luna was already fucking guys in bathhouse willingly, and then next thing you know Raze was partying up with Luna and fucking her on a regular. Sure, the games sets the scene by having Luna kiss the MC and her calling him her duo/boyfriend (around the same time as the first dungeon) but beyond that there is nothing that remotely backs up how the MC and Luna are childhood friends with feelings for each other, and are trying to find a game to play together. The MC never bothers himself with what Luna is up to, and for Luna, the MC is just an afterthought. It's so incoherent. I've played my fair share of NTR games and heroines at the start always had some semblance of coersion, or excuse, or guilt, or temptation, but Luna has nothing. Leanne's Slice of Life, Nymphomania Paradox, Sana, Scars of Summer all had something like a slippery slope for the heroine. This game had nothing. I played Paladin Lias and people criticised it for how Lias started being extremely promiscious very quickly, but Luna is even worse than that. Imo, the dev could either:
A) Make the MC's love for Luna one-sided from the get-go, so it would make sense for Luna to go off on her own for sexual encounters.
B) Take the time to flesh out Luna's descent into NTRing the MC.
E.g. Have a short conversion when the MC and Luna were picking a game at the start, Luna warns about the potential sexual content in the game, and the MC says he doesn't mind and encourages it. Have Raze threaten Luna with harassment at first, then have Luna grow from reluctant to enjoying it. Locking the bathhouse scene to corruption level 2 so it would make sense why Luna would willingly go there since she now has a dildo while playing. Make the MC have suspicions about Luna but he could never confirm it until a much later stage when Luna is deep in NTR.
Don't get me wrong, I think this game has what it takes to be fantastic. I didn't have the best first impressions 30 minutes into the game, but I did enjoy the scripted scenes individually, and I also enjoyed the dev taking jabs at MMOs and turning various mechanics into h-scenes. I just wish there was more coherence to the events beyond chance.