VN - Ren'Py - The Sunset Fairies [v0.10] [Ethan Krautz]

To begin with, the story is really disjointed and kind of a mess. We are kind of just thrown into this zombie apocalypse that happens suddenly and we don't get to experience it at all. It just happens suddenly and we don't get to see like traveling through the city in chaos, people getting bitten and eaten, none of that. Use the setting, there's a reason there's 10 billion zombie movies and games. It also leads me to one of the strongest points of the game yet conversely also one of the weakest. Later on, there are genuinely awesome scenes in which the MC and his niece go through decayed and bloodied hospitals in pitch black with just the flashlight illuminating the scenes. This is awesome and really needs to be more prevalent. Show us more of the zombie apocalypse, show us more of the aftermath of the infection, show us more of the chaos. Currently, there are very few scenes showing this and it's a huge missed opportunity.

It also leads me into the writing, which is sometimes very poor. Why is the MC, a trained and heavily armed soldier, navigating these biohazardous environments like that bloodied and infested hospital with his niece who is like 5 feet tall with 0 muscle. It makes no sense at all. To compound this issue, there are scenes where hes literally just outside on the streets with zombies running around and he decides now is a perfect time to handcuff his niece and facefuck her into submission. What the hell? While the scenes are indeed very hot and the sex scenes are nice, if you are going to do that stuff, make it somewhat believable and have it be at the house or in some secured ruined building or something, not on the damn streets. I'm willing to suspend my disbelief that both nieces are crazy over the MC and literally want him to facefuck them into submission, but make it a reasonable setting please, otherwise it pulls you right back out from this apocalypse setting and leaves you scratching your head. Overall it's not really a bad game, it just lacks heavy polish with the story connection and the writing is iffy at times. It also needs more showing of the zombie apocalypse because currently, it feels like the game is a half baked zombie apocalypse and a half baked incest game and not one unified game.

Story is good, the scenario is beautiful. I like the dialogue and i love how the story progress. Its new so its short, even though there were not many options to choose also felt more like of VN it was very enjoyable

I just finished update v0.06 and I gotta say I'm really enjoying the game so far. Not many choices that have major impact on the story. The choices are more of how your going to treat the girls. There are two paths you can take with the girls. You can choose the love route where you are compassionate and loving to them, or you can choose the corruption path where you use them more in a aggressive sexual way and corrupt them slowly. It can feel linear at times but even so I'm enjoying it. I can tell the game developer is very passionate at this game and I wish nothing but the best for them. Only draw back is the story, not that there is anything wrong just for me there was no build up just kinda throws you in there with no backstory, you learn as you continue the story but it can get confusing at times. All in all it's a great game and definitely worth the play. Again best of luck to the developer and I can't wait to see what happens next.❤

Three stars thus far is accurate and fair, being a rating in progress, based solely on what has, to date of review, been created and delivered and not what may or may not be in prospect for the future.

So, the external story premise is original and pretty well executed. However, throughout it all, I have felt incessantly bludgeoned by the incestuous aspect (nieces would represent a blood connection through the mc's sister, right?) and the righteous justification and purity of heart the mc professes, particularly with regard to the two young...imo dangerously young looking... girls, every single one of whose holes, he's obviously hell bent and obsessed with, righteously and devotedly, sticking his ridiculously clichéd telephone pole into.

This internal aspect, so repetitively expressed, as with "Single Again", for me, relentlessly stifles the greater enjoyment possible from a wider-ranging story exploring more of their wordly circumstance and the intrigue surrounding the creation and spreading of the virus.

It seems like every other breath we're back to one of the girls creepily drooling and fantasising about her uncle/daddy and that clichéd *yawn* totemic *yawn* cock. And no, I assure you, I do not suffer, in the slightest, from telephone pole envy.

Quite frankly what started off as a fairly acceptable premise, has come to make me feel completely creeped out playing this guy. Most certainly, the young nieces, who, both in physique and emotional maturity and outlook, are absolutely borderline children, do look gorgeous and are irresistibly cute, but even so I ceased finding them attractive quite a while back, simply because of their total preoccupation with cock and all things "uncle (daddy)" to the complete and utter exclusion of any and all other juvenile interests . Hell, even chasing and playing with each other on the beach had a sexual connotation.

The sexuality, instead of enhancing the situation and story, for me, absolutely chokes everything off. I guess (I honestly wouldn't really know) this may be fapper's delight, but for me it represents a very disappointing opportunity missed due either to the Dev's own obsessive preoccupation or his/her perception that it will be (and perhaps correctly so) his audience's obsessive preoccupation.

It's a downright shame because there really is a whole lot in this that is inventive, intriguing and, yes, if suitably toned down enough potentially heart-poundingly erotic about this novel, especially compared with so much of the dross put up by many other "creators" in this genre.

I hope, at least from my perspective, that this potential gem may still be saved, but as with all these episodic adventures, time alone will have to tell.

Would love to see version 0.06 but even with the content released so far it's a great game in the future hopefully hes able to give the bot a more human body i gave it 5 stars because i enjoyed it but the messed up pronouns kinda threw me off

Version: 0.05

I tried this for the milfs, Eva (mc's mom/gilf) and Alyna (mc's sis/red-head mother), but there isn't much content with them yet. However, the novel proved to deliver good content with the twins, Camila (the introvert) and Emma (ponytail extravert). The incest is baked in and the twins are both forced love interests. I assume the milfs will be as well. The novel focuses on telling a story about family while offering the player the option to corrupt them gradually.

Writing
story didn't interest me - I quickly lost interest very early, at around the twins speaking to eachother in the temporary red brick house

• a lot of story to be had and non-lewd plot amongst the family
• despite not viewing the story, it's mildly wholesome
• sexual content isn't rushed, there isn't any penetration yet
  • what it lacks in hardcore content it makes up for in ecchi-ness though nowhere as much as the story's plot

Visuals

• good lighting and textures of main LI models

• backgrounds stand out as plain and generic
• nice feet shots (coming from a non-foot fetishist)

Sex Content

• lots of kissing, ahegaos and squirting/intense orgasms (legs and toes stretched and sprawling inb4 she says "I need to rest")
• sex scenes are short
• specific sex acts include: pussy rubs, cunnilingus, spanking, footjobs, handjobs, blowjobs, swallowing and cum drinking, thighjob)
• the twins swoon for you
• choices offer content regardless of the choice; love or corruption
  • however, a scene close to the end of version, at night, only appeared if corruption is higher than love - thus favouring corruption
• spanking animation has jiggle

Sound and Other

• a lot of music tracks for scenes
  • but could use some closer attention to match the moods like the poor blunt use of the upbeat track at the beginning
• not much use of sfx, mostly just for gunshots
  • as such; no spank sfx >:/
• auto naming of last save to "Latest save" is such a great QoL feature and needs more use in the VN community
• For Dev: see [minor] bugs and typos below

Since I'm not paying attention to the story, although I like the genre of survival (though it feels more of a backdrop in this story), the sexual content is what's holding my interest. The models are pleasing to look at. I'm not into lolis but I appreciate the ecchi scenes with Camila and Emma. They were better than the straight-on x-job scenes. And the animations, some, impress me by how smooth and such a non-issue it is on my low-end pc. Personally, love the jiggle on that one spank scene.
Although the game offers choice between love and corruption, it seems to slightly lean towards corruption with the fact that there is one extra scene if your corrupt. is higher as well as the version-end image being the twins in dog collars.
I await for milf content.

Review based on v0.03:

Just an average game with nice looking LI's and good sex scenes. The problem with this game is everything else. The story have some cool ideas but does have many problems, like the geographical aspect of it all just makes no bloody sense in the way the MC and LI's move around their island and city, the way the relationship between MC and LI's develop also moves to fast, yes I know it is supposed to have gone a few months of time in the game but it just portraits it so badly that it all feels like somebody pressed fast forward until just before the sex scenes could start to happen, making it all feel so, so rushed. They all also seem to care too little about the world being a zombie apocalypse. Music choices are all over the place with music that many times do not fit the scenes they are in at all, so bad that I started to wonder if I had a second game running in the background because the music felt so out of place. And lastly but not least, the insane size of MCs dick. It is so large it could have its own zipcode ffs, I actually laughed out loud the first time it was shown.

It is a shame because this game has good potential but is filled with strange decisions from the dev.

honestly this game, has some potential.
The good:
The sister and her daughters are super cute and hot.
the renders are decent, and I like the build up were the uncle gets to know his 2 cute nieces.
The bad:
the spelling and gramma is horrible
Mc's Dick look hilarious its like 50 cm long, just make a normal large cock bro its fine .

played 2 updates, and it does have some potential.
if the dev's sticks with the things, that this game does well.

TLDR: This one could be an enjoyable story but at this point I'd skip it until the dev finds an editor.

The Good:
Visuals - The LI models are super cute as the preview images show. The renders themselves are well done and the non LI models are well done.

The Meh:
Animations - It has them and they're decent.

Story - While there aren't many zombie games, the few that do have a much more interesting story then this one but it's not that bad.. just a bit boring.

The Ugly:
Writing - This is where this game suffers the most BUT is also where it could easily be turned around. The dev desperately needs to find a native English speaker who can go over and correct their script. As is the audience is just constantly being pulled out of the story by how badly it's written.

MC Model - MC suffers from an unfortunate medical condition known as "telephone pole dick". Unfortunately this can make scenes with those beautiful LIs a huge let down.

So far there is only an introduction to the story so I can't say a lot about the whole game (no animation or sex scenes yet), I will update this in the future.
So far we have --->
*Interesting story. (zombie-themed)
*Nice and cute girls (3 cute redheads, 2 hot milfs)
100% Recommended.

Interesting story so far, with good models. There are a few things that could be ironed out, but for an intro it's great. Personally I could do without the comically oversized breasts, but I know they exist and many people seem to love them.

This is the single worst intro i have ever played. It has zero adult content or even any that hints at future adult scenes. Drawings may be great but they're useless in this story line. Speaking of story line, it completed itself in the intro, so unless this is going to be some kind of A-Team like kids tale, it has nowhere else to go.

Good renders, the girls look amazing. It has stiff and unnatural writing; but that's not really a dealbreaker. No real content in this demo and it is very short, but I will definitely check out its first real update, as I feel it has promise.

[Reviewed: "Intro"]
There's very, very little here at this point. You can spend almost as much time tweaking the settings for the GUI as it takes to read through the story. This intro has no choices, although as this game is marked as a Visual Novel, that's presumably going to change in the subsequent updates.

The story starts with the protagonist, implied as being an elite combat operative who can be tasked with assassinations, is about to start some required R&R after such a mission. But, even as he's supposedly about to get time with his family, it becomes clear that his mission is entangled with his (and his twin nieces) personal lives...somehow.

We're briefly introduced to a couple of co-operatives (female) along with the protagonist's mother and his sister, the mother of the twins. The family seems to be "extreme ginger" except for the protagonist, and possibly the mom. The twins look to be younger than high school age, although we have no details there. The twins are dropped off with the protagonist while the mom and sister need to go somewhere else for two weeks. My guess is that we won't be seeing anything from these two women after this, but with the shortness of this intro I could easily be wrong.

The images are perfectly fine with DAZ-style models. There's some music as the game begins but I didn't hear anything once the story started. There are some sound effects used appropriately in the story. The protagonist's name can be changed, but not through a typical story prompt. Instead we have a settings choice to change it. (This change is accomplished by a filtered substitution for the default name "Ethan" with the provided name. This seems awkward to me, as it's pretty straightforward in Ren'Py to have a [mc] in strings instead of a hard-coded "Ethan", have the mc Character be given [player_name] as it's name.)

The story text (which naturally ends with a bit of a cliff-hanger) feels a bit clumsy to me in places, but it's not too bad. I could nitpick and note that numbers should be spelled out, except when they come from computations or tunables (such as when assigning ages to the twins), and that "okey" shouldn't be used unless one is trying to sound geeky.

I've rated this a "good" (4 stars) with the hope that it'll keep going reasonably strong with the story.