Review of version 0.01 Alpha
While this is very early days, it shows tremendous promise. There's not a lot of content yet, but what is present is executed very well. It is very reminiscent of the 2-3 other, exceptional real-porn+twine gems on this site (which review policy forbids me naming), and that's a compliment.
It features branching paths each with significantly different content that periodically dovetail after a scene or so. The writing is high quality with excellent grammar and, most importantly, very natural dialogue - one of the greatest rarities in porn games.
The protagonist is an apparently good looking, self-assured adult who treats people well and has a bit of a dominant streak. Speaking for myself, you don't get better than that.
In summary, a superb early effort by AmanOC. I'm greatly looking forward to the future of this project!
While this is very early days, it shows tremendous promise. There's not a lot of content yet, but what is present is executed very well. It is very reminiscent of the 2-3 other, exceptional real-porn+twine gems on this site (which review policy forbids me naming), and that's a compliment.
It features branching paths each with significantly different content that periodically dovetail after a scene or so. The writing is high quality with excellent grammar and, most importantly, very natural dialogue - one of the greatest rarities in porn games.
The protagonist is an apparently good looking, self-assured adult who treats people well and has a bit of a dominant streak. Speaking for myself, you don't get better than that.
In summary, a superb early effort by AmanOC. I'm greatly looking forward to the future of this project!
