Ok, I'll start by saying I like the idea of the story behind this game. But man does it need to pump the breaks. It all feels rushed and there is no time for the reader to take a breath before something else happens. You don't get a chance to wrap you head around the universe of the story before the big dick grows, then you go straight into the sibling rivalry, then to the bigh house with the pool, then kidnapped, and it just keeps on going.
It honestly doesn't even feel like a story, just a bunch of plot points thrown together in a linear fashion. I'm playing through it and I'm like geez, slow the fuck down. Let this plot point settle for a minute before jumping into the next one.
And then I don't know if the writer is just allergic to exposition or something, but this story explains nothing to the MC or the reader. And it even points that out at one point when the MC is just as confused as to what the hell is going on as the reader is. I get people like show, don't tell. But at some point it just feels like MC is being thrown around like a rag doll, figuratively speaking, and it gives me a freaking headache.
Not to mention half of the time the text is hard to read due to it being white and the text box being nearly nonexistant to the point where the text is sometimes the same color as the backgrounds. Sorry, but did the dev even play test any of this? how could they not notice?
Don't get me wrong I'm still giving this game four stars, but the story and text is like two stars and the only thing that makes up for it is the visuals and genre. I also don't like that the reader is railroaded into being "claimed" by the devilish sister. I mean why the hell didn't Aiki claim MC when she made her? "She even says, oh don't worry about my sister, she won't be a problem" Well guess what bitch, you were wrong, and then you blame me for it? You didn't tell us shit other than, "Here's a dick, have fun." I mean seriously?! It would have been better if MC actually had the choice, or her choices prior set her on the path of one or the other, and then who ever MC didn't go with is the one who would change MC's girlfriend.
I get that I sound like I'm bitching, maybe I am, but I'm not trying to. I am just trying to give honest feedback to the dev, and at the same time review the game so that other who are interested know exactly what they are getting into. Which come to say, unless you really like futa and dick girls, I don't recommend this game.