VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The Three Panels [The 3rd panel v3.0] [The Amorous Antechinus]

V3.0
Pros:

• Excellent pacing, game follows the journey of a couple discovering the joys of extra marital sex, the narrative loop flows smoothly with the experiment-discovery-discussion-escalation loop constantly introducing new scenarios and characters to keep things fresh all the way until the end.
• Character personalities mesh well with each other, the scenes always have a good contrast of experienced/fresh, confident/shy , adventurous/reserved characters contrasting off each other.

Cons:

• Despite being a VN the early part slightly suffers the "show don't tell", a lot of the storytelling and character monologues are done through narration. Its an understandable method to cut down on renders, going from the dev disclaimer.

Nice game, with a simple and linear plot.
The characters are very well characterized.
I like how it differs from all the other predictable NTR stories, and that the sexy wife, while always constantly horny, never secretly cheats on her husband and always ends up going back to him, without ever doing anything behind his back.

I'm giving the game 4 stars and not 5, only because of what someone has already written before: that is, the dialogue/image out of sync.
It often represents a big problem (especially for those like me who play it from Italy), not only with the dialogues that have the scene image that arrives 4-5 lines later, but the real problem arises when there are more characters in the scene (maybe new ones).
As long as it sticks to the main characters, it's passable, although it's always annoying to see Jay's dialogues about Suzanne, Suzanne's about Bob, Bob's about Jay and so on...
but for example, in Suzanne's office meetings and at the party, with all the new characters, it's often difficult to understand who is talking.

However this is something that will surely improve with time and experience.
For a first work, for me the game is promoted!

Kudos to the dev for learning and completing a game in such a fast manner. Decent hotwife story, but I cannot get over the render quality of some of the models, hence the rating.

I'm sure it will improve over time so I look forward to the next release!

This is a great piece of work on the aspect of becoming a hotwife, and i wish the author all the best in any future endeavours.

I enjoyed the story, Light hearted with no betrayals or humiliation, which is what i want to see in a hotwife story. The Dynamic between husband and wife is consistent, and shows loyalty, love and trust between the 2 with both feeding off this new adventure equally.

The CG's are somewhat another matter,
My biggest gripe is how out of sync the images are with the text. Dialog will be saying one thing and the scene won't be shown until a few more dialog boxes, and by even then the dialog has moved onto what should be a new scene. Some of the images are pretty subpar, being either very grainy or very bizzar facial expressions, Over all not horrible but a mixed bag.

To the Authors credit this has been in the works for under 12 month and a learning project. Its in much better condition than a lot of works on this site that have been in development for years. Congratulations on a finished product, and i will keep an eye on out for your next title.

TL/DR - Would recommend if you like hotwife games.

Loved the game. The progression looks natural, story is convincing and characters are real.

Models are a bit dated but I love that they look like real people, great effort by dev and I'll be looking forward to more from his side.

A nice character-driven porn game. The main plot arc is well written. I think the game could use a bit more drama, but other than that, I'm looking forward to more!
- Each character has a good well rounded personality that is different from the rest.

Work needed:
- The artwork for its type is dated. Slight improvements are required.

I would recommend this game to anyone.

My kind of kinetic novel...
While this certainly will not be appealing to many on this site, this is the kind of story I've been waiting for...
Keeping it simple (no complicated variable minefield to get the content/story I like and avoid the crap I don't), not too flashy or complicated or crazy, excellent story and buildup, well paced. The "average" looking models come off as more realistic and relatable. Thankfully, the husband and wife don't seem interested in sharing with douchebags, fat bastards, and dirty hobos...lol

The dev is aware of a few technical issues, white text on white backgrounds, some name in script issues, etc. and working on the fixes. Thanks to Saint Blackmoor,
"When you're in the game, hit shift+A. It's called the Improve assessability feature.
You then can choose Dejavu Sans. "
This "fix" solves the one major issue for this VN.

Overall, solidly good first release for a new, inexperienced dev.
I've rated 5* because this story is like something straight out of my mind, it's solidly good (4*) and definitely well above "average" for this site, and I didn't want to ding a new dev for some technical issues that will only improve with experience.

Great paced game. I would be happy if husband is also more involved instead of watching on the cam. A great swinging experience would be better balancing act so husband is also given a priority. This kind of game script is very hard and kudos to the developer to take this script. Good luck.

The models are strange. Models sometimes stand in unnatural poses as if they have no joints.
The scenes are not animated
The story is dumb, as usual. My wife goes to a photo shoot to take photos for art. Then she comes home and fucks with her husband, they send her a new outfit, she goes to a photo shoot again, comes home and fucks with her husband and so on in a circle. Each time the outfit will be more open.
There is no choice in this game. Don't waste your time, there's nothing to evaluate at the moment.

My Rating for this Game is:

Pros:

+Great Start
+Love the Dialog
+Different Typ of Story
+nice characters
+Hot Scenes
+Long First Release

Cons:
-Nothing

Great Couple that are in this Game, and the brautiful wife get an offer to pose for an elder man and his wife.
That first release was nice and long, with great action scenes with the couple and the dialog was also great.
This release is really going into the right direction, and hoping for more hot scenes with the wife and different folks, this release is defiantly on my watch release, and will see after second release if it is worth my support.

Conclusion:
Worth the download folks