VN - Ren'Py - The Time Tinkerers [v1.0] [Naptime Interactive]

[v1.0 Prologue]

I liked the banter between the husband and wife. They both played off each other well in many conversations throughout the entire play through.

I did not like most of everything else. At times it felt as though someone took an existing novel and is converting it into a visual novel. There are just screens and screens of text describing something and I am getting bored because it means nothing and I have been staring at the same screen of a table or even the floor and nothing else. There are many grammatical issues and even a random name is used that has not been introduced or just incorrectly used. A small gripe was all images of the men looked odd to me; like they were wearing clothing two sizes too small. Another gripe leading to my next issue was the wife kept mentioning how she "needs to keep it spicy" meanwhile husband is all like "I'm so lucky, she is all I need".

My biggest problem was the preview images at the end of the update. Soon as the game starts there are messages saying what type of game this is and what type it is not. I am pressing X to doubt. 1. The Whorehouse (wife front and center) 2. Netflix presents Upper Society (wife with the bbc on the face). There were a few more without main couple. There were none with husband. They are only teaser images and could not mean a thing but paired with past notes about desires from the couple I feel like this heading into cuck territory like so many other "Sharing" titles.

Definitely a big fan of the loving, consensual, respectful Netorase genre. Netorare can go pound sand. This game is off to a good start. The writing is solid. The art style choice is definitely appreciate. Joel and Abigail (great names by the way!) are interesting and funny.

I hope this remains an NTS game with no NTR elements and two happy people are just out having fun together instead of the incredibly cruel stuff that happens in these genres almost 100% of the time.