Ren'Py - Completed - The Twilight Witches [v1.00] [Woolfie]

Solid four star novel.

+ Interesting locations and setting.
+ Good costumes and props.
+ Grind free. Story driven.
+ Positive sex feeling and attitude.

- Average story.
- Blurry renders.

-/+ Didn't feel like ambitious blockbuster.

Renders below average, really below average.
Lame and weak sex scenes can't even pop a small boner.
Forced ntr and sharing.
Uninteresting story and badly writen.
Short game.
Not even worth the mb wasted even with the compression version.

the main prob with visual novel like that, is there are not rly beautiful and good writting, so they fail at the start, it's not a game so there is no play, and i'm not rly enjoy the few porn between 30mn of chat about the cat of the neighboor who ate an apple yesterday, but it's cold today..... without forget all these tag who don't tell you waht kind of game you play but more what scene you may see once in the game

I'll be honest. I was pulling my hair out trying to understand the writing.
The story seems like it might be interesting, but the grammar is hard to understand
The ladies are all sexy
That's all about it for the good
I guess for most of chapter 4 and some of 5 I got straight black screen with writing telling me that the scene doesn't exist.
Grammar can't be stressed enough. It read like words were put in a blender and poured out. I understand that English isn't every ones first language, but proof read. If it doesn't make sense when you read it, fix it. That was the huge turnoff for me.
I think this could be really good if time was taken to address the problems.

I attempted to write an in-depth and constructive critique of this game, but a missclick ate that review, so Instead I'll just explain what is good/bad with the game.

Story:
Simple, disjointed, unengaging unless you get off on potential incest threesomes, and/or lusty emotionless fuck-buddy relations.
Some small hillarity comes from MC being a mechanic, but it is deus Ex machina that he can get anything right, and the technobabble used to showcase one of the females didn't give an intelligent impression to say the least.

Writing:
Just a skeleton. Example, MC and others reconnecting at dinner, there are lot of things to talk about, all easily clickable (about 1, about 2, etc...) and when you click "about 1" you're met with "You talk about 1".

Renders:
The absolute best part of this is not the renders, the only reason it managed to barely reach a 2 star from me is the model choices though. And that is part of the renders. The renders themselves? They are okeyish. Slightly low resolution, but beggars can't be choosers. I'm not an expert renderer, but compositions seem basic. Some of the object choices are quite frankly hillariously badly choosen ('Gasoline tank', I am looking at you).

As for story not bad original at least , many words in the script reads like been translated and not wrote in English , other than that , the renders are not bad but not great either , lack of animation but at least a short story so far enough sex scenes. Overall mediocre at best but not the worst i had play ...