disaster007

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Jun 15, 2022
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Here is a FanFic story called, Nicole's Story. It is a short story, currently only covering one intense day in the life of Nicole.

Nicole's Story - WorkUpload

This is my first attempt at making a FanFic story in RenPy. There are about 100 images in this tale. Please download it, and send me a note to let me know what you think of it.

I've also made a post in the FanArt forum with a few images from the game. Fan Art forum post with sample images
andriod version....???
 

parakep

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Apr 29, 2020
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Here is a FanFic story called, Nicole's Story. It is a short story, currently only covering one intense day in the life of Nicole.

Nicole's Story - Windows/Linux - WorkUpload
Nicole's Story - Android Version - WorkUpload

This is my first attempt at making a FanFic story in RenPy. There are about 100 images in this tale. Please download it, and send me a note to let me know what you think of it.

I've also made a post in the FanArt forum with a few images from the game. Fan Art forum post with sample images
What tags does it includes?
 

Puma1978

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Feb 25, 2022
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Here is a FanFic story called, Nicole's Story. It is a short story, currently only covering one intense day in the life of Nicole.

Nicole's Story - Windows/Linux - WorkUpload
Nicole's Story - Android Version - WorkUpload

This is my first attempt at making a FanFic story in RenPy. There are about 100 images in this tale. Please download it, and send me a note to let me know what you think of it.

I've also made a post in the FanArt forum with a few images from the game. Fan Art forum post with sample images
Not bad at all...still short but definitley a very good first attempt. Maybe the characters look a little too polished anf high gloss but some natural colors would do it. But really good made.
 

ShinyMetalAssKnight7xl9

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Sep 23, 2019
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Here is a FanFic story called, Nicole's Story. It is a short story, currently only covering one intense day in the life of Nicole.

Nicole's Story - Windows/Linux - WorkUpload
Nicole's Story - Android Version - WorkUpload

This is my first attempt at making a FanFic story in RenPy. There are about 100 images in this tale. Please download it, and send me a note to let me know what you think of it.

I've also made a post in the FanArt forum with a few images from the game. Fan Art forum post with sample images
Best of lucks and can't wait for you to continue
 

Got2BeKD

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Apr 12, 2017
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Given how this thread's now being spammed with posts that aren't for the game itself, you should really make a thread for your fanfic.
I'm very sorry. I didn't know where I should put this, I thought it was most related to this abandoned game. Please tell me where should have put this, and I will move it and edit my posts.
 

Chemish

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Sep 12, 2018
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Hey, does anyone have the link for v0.9.4b compressed? I keep searching and clicking on links on these thread pages, but they're all dead. Thanks.
 

Tharandor

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Feb 20, 2021
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Here is a FanFic story called, Nicole's Story. It is a short story, currently only covering one intense day in the life of Nicole.

Nicole's Story - Windows/Linux - WorkUpload
Nicole's Story - Android Version - WorkUpload

This is my first attempt at making a FanFic story in RenPy. There are about 100 images in this tale. Please download it, and send me a note to let me know what you think of it.

I've also made a post in the FanArt forum with a few images from the game. Fan Art forum post with sample images
Great Work indeed, but why did you walk of the undercover police investigation story line from the original game?
 

Got2BeKD

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Apr 12, 2017
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Great Work indeed, but why did you walk of the undercover police investigation story line from the original game?
The short-reason is that the undercover role of Bruce does not support the situations that I want to explore.

I want Nicole to have risk and conflict, and one of those is that her house is really a loyalty reward for Bruce. Therefore if she pushes the relationship with Bruce too far, she is at risk of being thrown out of the house.

The story setting is an 'alternate-earth' version of The Tyrant, and I have the roles and relationships of several characters to fit story ideas that I think would be interesting to explore and tell. I want to create a story that puts safety and loyalty into conflict with greed for power and money.

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TSSG59

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The story setting is an 'alternate-earth' version of The Tyrant, and I have the roles and relationships of several characters to fit story ideas that I think would be interesting to explore and tell. I want to create a story that puts safety and loyalty into conflict with greed for power and money.
Its' interesting that so many like this abandoned game so much they want to find new ways of imagining it.
It's something I've been doing for some time, I write new storylines and try to figure out how they would work.
The original game, as good as it was left a lot to be desired as far as characters, plot and script were concerned.
In my latest version, which I have just started, the focus is on the girls in the game and their play for power.
It is the females who use the men for what they want rather than being the ones being abused.
 

magus448

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May 22, 2018
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That's the point.
Not knowing is a tease to get the player to want to find out what's going on down there.

You can go with your original assertion that the mother's being railed hard by multiple men, being spanked hard, or that it's someone else having those things done to them.
Remember though, the basic setting that all the women in the household have at the beginning is that they're not into NTR/not into being railed by Davide and the gang - that happens as a result of our actions/inaction with the women.

In other words, applying logic shows that you were jumping to conclusions based on a combination of lack of information and your own fears.
Our actions being the decider on what other people do makes no sense. Game mechanically yes, but not story wise. Them starting to make moves on the Nicole only after MC gets home also makes no sense. It's been years since they were in the gang. Only them trying to hide it from the MC unless you mess up does.
 

Snugglepuff

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Apr 27, 2017
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Them starting to make moves on the Nicole only after MC gets home also makes no sense.
You're right... Which is why I didn't say that.
Reread what I wrote and find where I said the gang didn't try anything with her before the MC's arrival.

Them trying to fuck her is not the same as her geting fucked by them.
 
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