VN - Unity - The Wrath [v0.1α] [W.M]

Is this a continuation from another game? Because if it is, I will retract my review and re-score the game accordingly. I only ask because I could not get into the story at all. Right off the bat I am texting people who I don't know as if they are significant (even though I have no idea who they are). How about introducing the characters first instead of just thrusting them at me?

Again, if this is a sequel or something, I will apologize and revamp my review but I felt that I was playing a game starting off in chapter 4 and having no idea what happened during chapters 1-3 beforehand.

I was not a fan of the render style or the dialog either. I really get peeved when I have to click seven or eight times to get through a block of dialog that doesn't even add up to a solid paragraph:

No one.
Talks like this.
In real life.
And they shouldn't talk like this.
In VNs.
Either.

Also, although the dialog was curt, half of what was being said could have been shortened because it seemed to ramble at times (maybe a language barrier?)

Also, I changed the first name of the MC at the beginning of the game, yet the dialog still referred to me as Arthur which was annoying (a bug maybe?). I could honestly only play about fifteen minutes before giving up unfortunately. I can tell a lot of work went into this, so I don't want to just bash the game, but I think it could definitely be streamlined and structured better so that the player can be more comfortably immersed and eased into the story. 2.5/5

The concept of the game is very unique, although I’m not particularly fond of its render style (it feels a bit pale to me).

That said, the story is incredibly engaging, revolving around a battle of supernatural abilities based on the Seven Deadly Sins and the Seven Virtues.

There are plenty of interesting branching choices, and I’m surprised at how many interconnecting options a solo-developed visual novel can have (it’s not an overwhelming amount, but considering it’s a solo effort, I find it quite impressive).

Not every LI fits my taste, but Wrath is absolutely my type—an incredibly fiery and attractive character.

Unfortunately, the developer doesn’t update very frequently, possibly because they are working on two games simultaneously?

I’ll check out their other work, Dogma, later—some friends highly recommended I give it a try.

Great game, though I'm sure it'll be way better when there's more content, considering how 'Dogma' is going, it's going to be one hell of a ride.
Also ++ for making two games that intertwine with a huge plot.

A truly unique game. It stands out in a special way, starting off with an incredibly "weird" vibe that gradually unfolds into a massive universe filled with mysteries, creatures, and godlike beings. The developer has already packed a substantial amount of story into version 0.1. it took me two days to get through it all. Honestly, I have no idea what to expect next, but I love these kinds of mysterious games with divine beings and cosmic intrigue. I’m really hoping we get the freedom to shape the main character as we see fit... or is there even a main character? Who is the MC anyway, and what on earth is going on? (You’ll need to play the game to get the joke!)

All in all, it’s a fantastic game with great love interests, solid renders, and an incredibly compelling story. I’m excited to see more in the future, and for now, I’ll dive into the developer’s other game, Dogma, which was teased at the end of this update. Looks like we’re in for some multiverse action!

Guess I'm second huh? XD

Most people think giving 5star just in initial version?
Well, if you play the game you will get more than 3 hours of content took me 3 or 4 days to finish this game, this dev's always make unique and enjoyable games, just a problem of game engine haha.

Joke aside game literally have high quality renders each and every characters looks good.......I mean their skin texture, like always have a unique fantasy type story.

About story........I have to say story is pretty unique almost everything about this game is unique (in a good way)
Pretty ladies, Cool MC, unique story, good sound effects and music.

About lis every girls is beautiful, have good attitude too, I don't have any problems with any girls.

Mainly about MC, he's pretty cool and have special powers too, he seems to me a cool ass character, not our typical MC who simp on girls to get close with her, not wimpy type, not a badass MC, but above decent you can say.

I have more to say, but it's just a 2nd review and only in 1st release, I don't think writing big review much helpful to others, I just wrote what I find about this game.

Obviously I'm a fan of this type of games, this type of game always have less fap more story, but everything is well balanced, have sufficient amount of juicy content too so DW.

Here's end my review good luck with your game Mr Dev.

Peace

I'll be the first.
+ plot
+ characters
+big updates
- unity
This is a unique avn with a large number of characters, lore and interesting activities. Don’t be afraid of version 0.1a, the content is enough for 3+ hours. I wish success to the developer and look forward to the next update.