Ren'Py - Completed - The Writer's Visit [v4.0] [VNAdults]

Overall an entertaining AVN, with some positives and some negatives. Giving it a solid 3 stars.

+ Dated renders, made up for with lots of good animations and scenes
+ A story that's not so run-of-the-mill keeps it at least mildly entertaining
+ Some music here and there to fill in the blanks, but it's not top notch
+ Likewise a little bit of audio voiceover during sex scenes, but nothing dramatic
+ A protagonist MC (female trans) that is very likable, and quite hot. Actually found it fun to play her/him. A futa would have been quite a bit more fun though, and offered more possibilities.

- Not much choice in changing the overall story from what I found.
- As mentioned, renders are quite dated in quality - might be a major negative for some people. I found the animation made up for it.
--- Having Lisa threaten the property manager at the pool house, and not take any heat for it was a dick move on the dev's part.
----- Lisa got utterly out of control and started manipulating and trying to control the MC (her Dom) 2/3 through the game. The MC did absolutely nothing to try and curb her behavior. I was facepalming constantly, and thought it was very poor writing. She should have been MASSIVELY put in her place long before it got bad.
-- Didn't like the fact that the MC's "love interest" (big black dude) was allowed to pussy-fuck Lisa near the end. That should have been a "pussy or ass" choice set by the MC - some of us don't like any dudes fucking our subs' pussies without being there. Again - poor writing or just lack of choice in my opinion.
-- Seems like the MC (female) was a bit too laid back with some of her subs, and let some of them talk back and or try to manipulate her far too often. They know their place, and their position, but pushed it too often for it to be believable.
-- Not enough sex scenes with some of the characters. And some scenes with those were entirely too short.
- Far too many "money shots" with the MC ejaculating on/outside the other person. Since the game had no pregnancies, it should have always been an option to do it inside.

I'd recommend playing the game, but don't think you have any choice in how the story develops, it's basically kinetic novella. Skipping scenes: yes. Changing the plot: no.

It is a game on longer side, focused on sex, with trans MC. Plot is functional, with some character development, but without attempts of packing "high literature" in a porn game. It is mostly linear, with some sex scenes choices. Models are hot and distinct for girls, and ugly (on my taste) for males. High amount of decently animated... animations, even with cloth physics, are appreciated. Overall, game is hot and not bothersome.

I disliked unskippable scenes with males, or scenes with males that are skippable, but it is implied that they happen. Also, quality of renders (model details, antialiasing, lighting and shadows, backgrounds) are just not good.

The game doesn't waste much time on monologues. It simply follows a trans sister visiting her brother and having fun with anyone she encounters. Surprisingly, it's an okay choice for character assets. Despite the tone and style of the main cast, the game manages to make the cast more diverse without overshadowing other characters (except maybe some). There are many cool scenes, although some choices may seem useless. Overall, it's an impressive game, and I wish the developer the best.

Not good at all.

I'm sorry for rating it like this. I'm there was a lot of time and hard work placed on CGs and game integration, but it definitely needs better writing and dialogs. Couldn't even finish it, and damn I gave it a good chance.

Pros:
-Some decent animations and CGs once in a while
-Bonus points for trans and gay fetish which is uncommon

Cons:
-The story is not even explained properly
-Awful writing and dialogs. I dislike those horny nonsense dialogs that come out of nowhere and everyone just go and fuck without a reason.
-Forced scenes everywhere
-Useless decisions everywhere
-Bad pacing, scene after scene without any context whatsoever

Might as well just dedicate to do short NSFW clips or partner with a writer that can create a decent story

This game has terrible graphics. The details are logically horrible as well. Characters look also really bad (maybe because of the graphics). The story is poor and the game is just full of futa sex with females and males, but not arousing at all.

I would be okay with the horrible graphics if the writing was okay. But it's not, it's garbage unfortunately. It's a shame because it could be a coomer gem with the the kinks and the degenerated theme.

This is a shitty 1-star game but the surprisingly good animations and the "different" theme should be appreciated so +1 star for those.

Its a very good game. Even with the low quality renders, it pulls off some great scenes with interesting dialogue and fetishes. I look forward to the devs next outing, hopefully with similar fetishes and styles.

A story with hook, a protagonist with charisma and full of warm milk to prepare. The game is brilliantly carried during the development of its chapters, charismatic and well-chosen protagonists. The game improves as it progresses, you can tell that the author has been putting more love to the work as it progresses. Very good!

Honestly disappointed with the overall turnout and will not be bothered with finishing this as by chapter 30 it became easier to skip to the sex scenes. Repetitive to the point that sex scenes are copy/pastes with different names used for each character and lisa straight up ruins the whole sexy feel by the end of it too. Btw its 2023 and there are games that look better then movies but this has the quality of a mid level ps2 game

The only reason i cannot give this 5 stars is because the description of the novel is that you are the dominant harem protag who will keep all in line and all in her harem. However without spoilers she gets some Karma in a spicy way. Not against the idea, in fact i love how it turned out. i feel like maybe give the player a option to all control back before committing to the ending. overall hot writing, fun scenes. wish there was options to be top or bottom.

can't get past the first threesome without fapping so i guess it's 10/10.

interesting story, the sex scenes are a bit unique in a sense that everyone is a nympho and wants to fuck and yet still it's erotic. usually when i play games where the protagonist or others want sex a lot (like they are a succubus or porn actresses) then it's really boring. i don't know what it is here, maybe the realism or the average animations but it just works and it's still hot to watch "people" having sex who are really into it.

the main protag is a futa. her model is hot. feminine with a big dick. she is an erotic novel writer so everyone wants to be in her "book". the game is hot.

I love the theme and setting. The characters are interesting and well written.
The dynamic between the main character and her family and people she encounters is compelling. Considering English isn't their first language, the writing is impressive. The game absolutely delivers and enjoyable and erotic experience. They also let you avoid gay scenes if that's not your cup of tea. This wasn't a problem for me. All in all id rate this a 10/10
Can't wait for the final version to be released. <3

one of the best trans games i have ever played! i liked the way characters are introduced and how they behave... you are not the only one seeking for sex there are characters that want to have sex with character and that makes it so much interesting then other games i have played

Excellent porn Kinetic Novel. Basically a non-stop fuck fest with a thin veneer of a narrative and characterization. There are some superficial choices but they don't make much of a difference in my experience.
If you like dominant sex and can handle a trans MC, this is certainly good fap material. There is some gay sex that is a very small portion of the game and occasionally skippable, but if you play the game you will see it even if it's skipping through it with the tab button.
There is also sharing as the MC pimps the LIs out or straight up tells them to have sex with other people.
The visuals are passable, not terrible, but Virt-a-mate can look really nice and this does not. It's not a deal breaker though as the scenes are still pretty hot.
Bottom line if the idea of a dominant trans/futa MC fucking every woman (and some dudes if you want) she sees and turning them into cock-addled sex slaves is appealing to you you should play this, if any of that seems a no go or if you can't handle an MC sharing her stuff then you should probably avoid

What makes the game a 2 or a 3 star instead of a 4 or 5 is how incredibly ugly the renders are.

There are no significant choices whatsoever so it's fully a visual novel. The text and the renders is all there is.

If this was remade with hot renders like something used in Being a DIK or something similiar it could be superhot.

At this point it's barely passable as fap material because the renders are ugly

I like this VN for the writing so far. The renders are good and hopefully the dev can make some money from this great start and his/her next project can improve on that if they wish. I am quite happy with how fast the new releases come out. Some with great renders take over a year to come out and are very short updates. This though has good renders and a good to great story and best of all the updates are a few times a year .
I wish the Dev the best and thanks for the chubbies.

First off, the visuals are not great. Let's just get that out of the way, but you can probably see that from the previews.

That being said, the story is pretty good: "Horny Trans-girl Aunt comes to stay with her horny brother's family - Sex-capades ensue." Simple but enjoyable. Art may not be the best, but the story makes up for it. Also Animations while the art is simple and low-tech (genesis 2?) are well done.

MC is also proactive which is a plus for me. Sure they are held up by the normal "But we're family" cliche, but when they get over it, the story picks up. I'm all for a proactive Futa MC. Probably why I like Thalna from "Inner Growth".

I'd love to see a remaster of this game with Genesis 8/8.1; Keep the story the same and make the models similar and this game could be really good.

Hope the next update is just as great. Def gunna do fan-art for the girls in G8

thank you for this game!! in general i am very criticizing of all games that get my interest.. yes, i do not care about and do not comment on the ones that don't do anything for me.. ok, so i wanna say that this dev knows why we are here and does NOT suffer from ego-building or the need for ppl to say "it's a good game".. guys, try this one out! things not just start off in an amazing way, but the game continues to deliver with every click. i was nothing short of impressed.. and jerked off twice in 5 minutes.. so i need to say more?

again - to the dev - ty! do not let whiners change your direction - you're great, your content is great!! ty!!

Would highly recommend playing so far great game lunch. The story is great having the futa be huge and corrupting everyone to make them their whores is enticing for players that seek games that lean on the futa fetish. So far the romance options are a Milf, a loli and a femboy hopefully more options are added in the future. When more resources are available to the developer better renders, audio and smother animation would make this game perfect

Good story . Renders are also good . Virt a mate is also good desicion , if I am right about engine . What would I like to see the Rony have swing - share fetishes and he knew the outcome . Cum eating like in game "Sky resort " . Have way more what to suggest , but ... Thank you for the project and wish you to patience