Unity - Abandoned - TheCurse [v0.2] [Notteaa]

Great game, everything is go the quality and the body type of the characters..Why did you abandon this game and why there Is no android version of this game , Its very uncomfortable and risky whilst playing it on PC I loved most of its graphics and the concept waiting for the android version.Carry on with what you are doing and make more games like this and don't forget to update this current game ..Will be waiting...

The design fo the characters (or the morphs, whatever it is) is good, and renders are nice, lighting is good. Posing and face expressions are good also, the visuals department has little to no complains.

The rest is tricky. Fr instance one of the first scenes where the father hits the mother and when she is on the floor the MC thinks "what a view!" I said tricky but this is the shitiest presentation for a Main character , and since the person who wrote that crap is responsible for the rest of the novel...well, you do the math.

Next stop is the scenes. When you are watching a scene, and trying to understand it, it ends abruptly and you are sent to some other place and time with just a "X time later"
This happens all the time, its bad in my opinion. With this scene planning i dont think good meaningful stuff can happen. Its imposible to build anything this way.

And to finish there are 2 or 3 choices so far in the game, and i think none of them changes the outcome a bit.
With all of the above i can olnny say that this game is a shitfest right now. Graphics dont make up for it.

Good points: Art. Renders are amazing, so beautiful, full of colors and shades. The lighting is well done, and I could really appreciate looking at the environment not just the characters. Again with the art, the character models are incredible. A piece of art for sure.

Though, here are the bad points. The game isn't really a game. It feels more like an art exhibition, because the player cannot enjoy anything else but the art.

Bad points: Lazy story. Too short for a 0.2 (20% of the game?). Bad narrative.

There is no good dialogue, they chat shortly (mostly say hi, get something for me) and then MC goes somewhere else to do that and go back, then head somewhere else. Really, it's like just saying hi, go there, come back, bye. Too short to develop anything. The advices "roomate" gives to her friend is like "oh don't cry, it's going to be alright", and in the next box her friend says "oh thank you for everything!" and THAT'S IT. Then they go somewhere else to do something else. NO in-depth story about characters, NO normal conversations, they FEEL like characters, there is NO realism, NO music.

On this 15 minutes gameplay, they could've done it last 40 minutes. At least twice the time if it was added more dialogues that are worth reading.

On this game, the player will feel like everything is meaningless and will skip straight to the lewd scenes. I was about to do it, but then I wanted to write a review so I played normally until the end.

And blueballs! No porn scene at all. Nothing. In 15 minutes gameplay. Except that one render of a BJ, I guess there is no other scene.

TWO Stars. It's all because of the art.

The person who made the renders and models has a quality work right there, I would love for that person to do that job in some other game. In this one, I'm sorry, but there really is nothing here to enjoy besides the renders.

Hopefully they'll let us change the MC name in the future, especially without having to restart the entire game, though it's pretty short so far so may not matter much.

For two chapters there are only 4 opportunities to make a choice. Maybe 5?
One question with answers that make absolutely no difference on the outcome of the next scene and the other is just a silly question and answer.

I would imagine a 45yr old lady would look older that this one....but wow is she gorgeous!

I sure appreciate the fact that they allow us to change the name/relationships of the characters rather than having to go search for patches. That's very considerate.

Just the fact that there are very few errors with the English and spelling puts this game at the top of the newer releases.
As someone else suggested, I'm sure the quality of the writing will improve over time as it's not that bad now just needing some polishing.

They've done an outstanding job on the renders.

Best of Luck

Renders are great.

I like that they've included rollback in the unity version. (Didn't realise there was a ren'py version, but I'm not fussed about platform really.)

Story seems to be cookie cutter, nice touch with the rejected 'landlady' rather than lonely and horny.

3 stars because the character development is strange, everything seems hyper and all over the place... maybe this will settle in future versions.

V0.2

I find this to be an excellent start. The mom is ultra hot, the sister is cute AF, the home situation is hot (the drunk father who isn't satisfying your mom), etc.

No penetration but this is not a slow burn, I expect sex soon. That in of itself is what pushed this from 4 to 5.

But do not get your hopes up. This is one of one million incest games in early stages. Who knows if it will be here 6 months from now. That being said, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

This looks very promising for a start. Renders and girls are beautiful. Hard to judge the story yet but I was engaged. Lewd scenes are hot and I like dialogues too. I'm looking forward new updates in the future.

Damn the quality of the renders are just WOW
Models are damn HAWT and very well made
So much attention to details
Writing is good too
As for the story nada no idea where it's headed but has potential to be something worth the time
Hope the dev exploit the creations of good renders and focus on giving us a great story and a VN altohether Goodluck.

Not a bad effort for the beginning of a game.

The graphics look pretty good and are definitely a strength.

Some of the dialog though could use a bit of polishing. The turn of phrase and sentence structure lead me to believe that the developers, while good English Speakers, aren't native.

The result is that the dialog lags behind the decent graphics and makes the story feel a bit stiff and forced.

Not a lot has let on to what the "curse" may be in the v0.1, but so far its more of a typical "Mean Dad, Hot Mom, Hot Sister and clueless College Boy set up.

Best of luck to the developers as I hope they can keep up, improve and tell their story.