v0.2.1
TL;DR - Very promising start, decent pacing for a corruption game, worth a try
+Pros
+Has really good ideas
+the exposing/corruption in it is done very well so far
+Quite a decent amount of scenes in it for such a early version
+Choices matter, i think there is 5 separate routes already
-Cons
-The events laid out feel like there being rushed to get to end game
-Lacks clothing/underwear variety
-The Events feel like they could use another CG or angle/step to them
-Writing errors
I have mixed feelings about the art. Its good enough, unique in terms style but its not fantastic. I think i seen one other game on here with similar style where your a female protag too (forgot name), but it dose look beginnerish.
The writing im a bit mixed on as well, its not bad. I would say its structured well but i think it just lacks polish & grammer checks. im guessing translation issues with English too.
The event ideas are pretty solid and you can see other ideas the dev has planned in the story.
My main concern with the event rushing is, and i will take the first karate scene as an example. Where the teacher is exposing her and she is immediately doing it without underwear so has her tits exposed & groped. What then happens in karate event #2. Then is 3, 4 & 5 all gonna be repeat sex scenes - (and tbh that's probably a positive for alot - i just prefer it to escalate at a better pace)
For a first project its really impressive, checks alot of the boxs for me in this early build.
Anyway, I think what's laid out for the start is done really well and if you can get past the Art i definitely recommend it.
TL;DR - Very promising start, decent pacing for a corruption game, worth a try
+Pros
+Has really good ideas
+the exposing/corruption in it is done very well so far
+Quite a decent amount of scenes in it for such a early version
+Choices matter, i think there is 5 separate routes already
-Cons
-The events laid out feel like there being rushed to get to end game
-Lacks clothing/underwear variety
-The Events feel like they could use another CG or angle/step to them
-Writing errors
I have mixed feelings about the art. Its good enough, unique in terms style but its not fantastic. I think i seen one other game on here with similar style where your a female protag too (forgot name), but it dose look beginnerish.
The writing im a bit mixed on as well, its not bad. I would say its structured well but i think it just lacks polish & grammer checks. im guessing translation issues with English too.
The event ideas are pretty solid and you can see other ideas the dev has planned in the story.
My main concern with the event rushing is, and i will take the first karate scene as an example. Where the teacher is exposing her and she is immediately doing it without underwear so has her tits exposed & groped. What then happens in karate event #2. Then is 3, 4 & 5 all gonna be repeat sex scenes - (and tbh that's probably a positive for alot - i just prefer it to escalate at a better pace)
For a first project its really impressive, checks alot of the boxs for me in this early build.
Anyway, I think what's laid out for the start is done really well and if you can get past the Art i definitely recommend it.
