VN - Ren'Py - Thorns Beneath the Wings [v0.7] [Aleksandr 14]

An overall very fun game. The plot is interesting. Things happens not in a predicable way like many other games. The teasing is done really nicely. Well written story. Highly recommend. Downside is the graphic is kinda on the not very appealing side.

The fact the cuck character gets so much action is rather disappointing. Otherwise the backdrops and some of the models need a bit of work. This game could be great but there are things holding it back.

The game is a kinetic visual novel with a very similar story to the Cursed Forst, following a husband and wife needing the help of an ugly bastard to guide them through a cursed forest. The story does deviate at a point but the similarities are hard to ignore. Unfortunately, the writing is incredibly generic in comparison, with characters actions feeling unrealistic due to a serious lack of character development which could help justify characters actions.

The CG’s and animations appear to be created using honey select. The character designs and models feel a bit basic and not overly memorable. With the FMC having her boob and ass slider set to max and put in the skimpiest clothes possible. The animations and CG’s for the start of the game feel quite rushed and unpolished with obvious models clipping, syncing issues and terrible backgrounds. Although the latter half of the game has a noticeable improvement in quality.

In a vacuum the game is fairly good with okay enough writing and story progression. The NTR elements are executed well and there is a nice mix of perspective shifts. However, overall, the game leaves a lot to be desired and fall short when compared to similar games. 3.5/5

I must say, initially I ignored this game a lot, I was more interested in that NTR 2D game with the elf, and to me this one just seemed like a copy/parody of that, and I couldn't have been more wrong. I played this game correctly from the beginning and ended up becoming a Patreon. I must say, unlike other games with the same theme and model, like the two NTR elf games, this game here is the best, because its development is continuous and effective. It's a porn game and behaves like the NTR porn game it should be, and especially, like the competitors I mentioned should be. This one takes the essence of the game and does it better, or at least does what the others should do. It's a very good and satisfying game for the purpose it has. The wife is a fairy, she's very hot. Her body may seem exaggerated the first time you see it, but soon you get used to it and maybe find it's not that exaggerated. At the very least, I would say it's on the border of acceptable. If her breasts were a little bigger, it would already be bad. The cutscenes are good for a simple game. I mean, the animations aren't 5-star, but you can see the developer improving with each scene. The corruption, and therefore the NTR, are good. It's not the best writing, nor is it original. As I said before, this is kind of an idea used in several NTR games where the wife is an elf or a fairy, the MC is an adventurer, and we have the antagonist, usually a fat pervert who tries to corrupt the wife while serving as a guide for the couple's adventure. There are automatic scenes from the wife's POV and few scenes from the MC's POV. The MC serves much more as a sort of narrator in this game, which bothers me a bit. I must say, I wish there were more hidden NTR scenes from the MC's POV. It's a good game, so far it has a much better pace than the others, because it's not slowburn, and in my view, if it's an NTR without slowburn, the scenes and the perversion have to be well done, which is the case with this game, so it's OK, if you read all the dialogues you will enjoy NTR's feeling much better, so don't play this just for the scenes, what makes a good NTR is its writing, even if it's not perfect, but a little proximity to the characters is enough.

I really loved the game, I hope it continues with this quality of story and art! I still have hopes that more characters appear throughout the story, it would be interesting to see how she will deal with the consequences of the fountain water and especially if she will succumb to other people or if she will remain faithful to her love. I am extremely anxious to see it completed.

Love it, keep the good work, The 3D models and atmosphere look very good to me, I would like to see how the Sereneth at some point does not depend on that special water to fall to Olgrun.
I also think it's great that the protagonist deprived Sereneth of sex, making her fall for Olgrun even more

Promising game. Definitely reminds me of Cursed Forest, same kind of setup. You’ve got the extremely busty fantasy wife, meet a shady guy at a tavern, and then head off into a cursed forest. The writing isn’t as strong, kinda rough in spots, but it gets the job done. The scenes so far are solid, there just isn’t a ton of content yet. Overall, it’s a bit unpolished but has real potential. The pacing’s quick too, so more scenes are probably coming soon. If you’re into NTR, the setup’s a classic.

My Rating for the Game is:
Pros:
+ Great Scenes
+ Great Story line (Like everyday Talk)
+ Good playing time

Cons:
- Dicks could be bigger
- tits would look better if smaller

Conclusion:

A nice fantasy Game love Story, with Nice Sex scenes and great dialogs, the game is told very romantically from the husbands and wife's view,
The game also has many corruption scenes which I love.
Pretty good playing time for the first version of the Game.

Well worth the Download.

This is literally Cursed forest quest fan game. But it's not a bad a thing! Cursed forest quest is my favorite porn game and I want more games like it. Thorns Beneath the Wings doesn't have as good of art or writing or charters, but since it's based on Cursed forest quest it's still solid. I respect that he used 3d art instead of dogshit ai art. I sill would prefer to see original 2d art even not as good as in Cursed forest quest, but original 3d honey select art is more interesting than ai slop.
I hope the dev can improve his writing as he works on the game. This can definitely be a 5 star game if dev puts effort in it.