Overall a very good first installment.
- Gives good taste of the story without being cliche or obnoxious or telegraphing everything. And it's interesting enough that I want to see more.
- MC is a bit of a jerk sometimes, but not overwhelmingly so; he comes off as fairly relatable, if a bit prickly. And he's not a blithering idiot.
- Visuals aren't perfect- the girls' faces look weird in a couple shots, and the nun has some pretty severe boob-socking going on- but it's not too jarring and I'm hopeful it will improve.